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Reviewer: HarryGinnyluver8 Signed
Date: 2013.02.07 - 11:37PM
Title: More summer surprises
nice job with it. cant wait for more.
Reviewer: Rhiannon Potter Signed
Date: 2009.08.04 - 06:19AM
Title: More summer surprises
I read the other story a while ago, then just a few days ago i started reading this one.. one of the best stories on this site! I'm a bit confused, because I don't remember much from the other story.. are they all in gryffindor? Anyway, great story! x
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, they're all Gryffindors.
Reviewer: piltad Signed
Date: 2008.09.29 - 01:33AM
Title: More summer surprises
Not going to lie I don't know what your doing with the animagus (sp?) training I mean you said at the begining it was going to take awhile to get it down and you have them already basicly done from one summer and as you said it was a power thing really don't think you should of let all of them be able to do it. I do wonder about the family heirlooms I mean Rose once she marries wouldn't be a Potter wouldn't they go to GInny and Harry and wow cant remeber twins name lol but that seemed odd to me and I am expecting you to kill some of Harry's family off so thinking me not knowing twins name might not matter.
Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed
Date: 2008.09.13 - 06:53AM
Title: More summer surprises
either malfoy is being genuinly nice or he is up to something, and it is usually the latter!!! i suppose things change with harry having his parents, are you taking them right up to their seventh year? or do you plan on writing more than that? cos i think that would be somthing i would like to read!
Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed
Date: 2008.08.11 - 05:48AM
Title: More summer surprises
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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed
Date: 2008.01.19 - 03:44PM
Title: More summer surprises
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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed
Date: 2007.06.01 - 12:08PM
Title: More summer surprises
oh dear...poor ti. what a bunch a losers his dorm mates are...i hope he doesnt hang out with them much. and i do wonder about draco. its very strange the way he is acting. well good chapter update soon
Author's Response: Nah, Ti hangs out more with Harry and his group. But that's why he went to find his dorm mates on the train. He still needs some friends his age and he is in the same class as they are. Don't worry. They'll eventually see the light. As to Draco....you'll just have to see how that goes. Hopefully I'll have the next chapter out soon. Thanks again for the review.
Reviewer: hothoney111 Signed
Date: 2007.06.01 - 12:42AM
Title: More summer surprises
i hope you update soon!! i loved your last story and now, I can't wait to read more of this one! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks fior the review. I hope to have the next chapter up soon.
Reviewer: hjp74 Signed
Date: 2007.05.28 - 06:20AM
Title: More summer surprises
another good chapter so now that summers out the way i can lookforward to another hetic year.
i liked that you are making suttle changes to cannon like the slytherine prefects but what is up with draco. having harry as a prefect was unexpected but a nice deviation from cannon & am wondering what changes that will have on the group & harrys year in general.
James
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Oh, the eftect of these changes will be interesting to see as well as what's going on with Draco.
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed
Date: 2007.05.27 - 02:49PM
Title: More summer surprises
Well, it's been a while from your last chapter and I had to re-read the last few chapter to get that 'oh yeah, here we are'! feeling. Loved your chapter, not a lot going on but I suspect that wil surely change again soon. Keep writing, you're on of my favorites. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sorry for the long wait for this one, I hope to post the next one by the middle of next week.
Reviewer: LilyLady Signed
Date: 2007.05.27 - 08:19AM
Title: More summer surprises
Aww...good job on this, great chapter. I liked it. I'm interested to see how things will progress now that they're back at school. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Things will get a bit more interesting now that they're back at Hogwarts.
Reviewer: Black Rose Signed
Date: 2007.05.27 - 01:51AM
Title: More summer surprises
That was great Chapter, I really like this part “Oh, right, love,†Ginny said, kissing his cheek. “You just go on believing that. Come on, Rose, I need to freshen up before dinner.†The two red haired girls got up and went up the stairs, leaving a pouting Harry and an amused James."
Oh are you going to have Luna Lovegood come into this story at all? anyway keep up the great work. Can't wair for the next chapter. ^^ -- Black Rose
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Luna is not a major player in this story especially since Neville will have a different love interest. However, she will pop in every once in a while.
Reviewer: lyric Signed
Date: 2007.05.27 - 01:10AM
Title: More summer surprises
This year should be an interesting year...hopefully Sirius doesn't die.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You'll just have to wait as the chapters come in how the year goes.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed
Date: 2007.05.26 - 11:57PM
Title: More summer surprises
Hmm... I hope Ti doesn't let his guard down (re: Draco) -- at least, not unless & until Draco demonstrates conclusively that he's earned that level of trust.
Good interactions, generally; I like the idea of using Glamours (though that could play havoc with meeting folks). The delay getting the Weasleys to the station was quite believable. :-)
Interesting bit about Rose's extra training. And the magical abilities of the youngsters, too.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Good advice for Ti. LOL!
Reviewer: GinnyMarie Signed
Date: 2007.05.26 - 10:13PM
Title: More summer surprises
Okay...
YAY. Daniel is a wizard. I saw it coming, as did everyone esle. But you do realize that you're only fueling that shipping of Daniel and Daisy I mentioned, right? And wow. They'd be the next trio...and two of them have the same initial starting their name. Weird, yeah? Same as the current trio. Did you intend that? Is this all part of some massive evil plan?!
Sorry. I was channeling Phoebe from Charmed.
I look forward to seeing what type of special training Rose will recieve,
Not much, really in this chapter. Or maybe there is, and my mind is just coming back to me now.
I was slightly surprised that you made Harry a prefect. I just didnt expect it, I suppose. And, oh gods. The Twins as Co-Quidditch Captains. OH THE HORRORS!
I assume that Umbridge, or someone worse, will become the Defense teacher. I look forward to seeing for sure.
You bring into light the first misgivings that Harry has to face from his schoolmates in the form of Ti's friends. Is it alright if I wish to harm them? Poor Ti; he has to deal with all of them for the entire year; along. *huggles*
I still eagerly await the time when all the Ships will fall into proper place. I cant wait.
I do hope that Draco will change his ways. I believe in a Reformed! Draco Malfoy; cant help it.
Also. having Daphne Greengrass as a prefect is interesting. If my memory serves, wasnt Pansy the other Slytherin prefect?
Oh well.
I think I have covered everything. I hope you update soon.
Loved the chapter
~Tricia~
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Let me go over it bit by bit. I did plan Daniel Granger to be a wizard too. I intend to write a sequel which will partly focus on them. You'll just have to wait for that to see how it pans out.
I think Harry would be a great prefect. The only reason he isn't in the books is because Dumbledore thought Harry already had too much on his plate (he told Harry that at the end of book 5 after the debacle in the DOM.)
Don't worry. The Weasley twins aren't going to be Quidditch captains.
The next chapter will reveal who is the new DADA professor. It won't be that bad.
No need to harm Ti's friends. They'll change their tune later.
All the ships will eventually come together near the end of this story. Sorry, can't tell you more. As to Draco, you'll just have to see.
Yes, Pansy was the other Slytherin prefect in the books. That's one thing I changed from canon.
I hope to update in a week or two.
Thanks again for the review.
Reviewer: arjay187 Signed
Date: 2007.05.26 - 06:25PM
Title: More summer surprises
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