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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.30 - 08:46AM Title: The Dueling Club

DON'T PUT NEVILLE AND ROSE TOGETHER!!!! Well I think your just making Ti an ass all of a sudden so it can fit your mold to break them up you didn't see that before at all and really doubt we would if you for some reason didn't have Rose Neville and Ti Maggie on your plate as accepted couples... I hated you added so many chars in to this world I won't lie but your developed char is Ti I think none of the others can really stand by themselves like he can and shoot I don't even think Neville can eithier to tell you the truth I don't know how you decided these couplings but think you should of scratched Neville Fred George and Maggie from the story you just don't devot enough time to them. Ti you have developed into a major part of the story and don't really leave that for an option I personally feel that really kinda basiclly going to have a brand new char Neville when you get them together since I don't think you even realize how little of a part he has played in the story to this point and after almost 80 chaps and your going to I bet make him a big part of this and either forget really all about Ti or not write as much about him the same goes with Maggie she has played no part what so ever and if you do keep writting about Ti your going to have her in there also I don't know if any one has ever told you but just because you like someone your not going to automaticlly get to be with them and really that is all that your story is about I really don't know if I will actually continue with your story and if I do it will only to keep going till I get a response out of you I understand not responding to my reviews since I do alot of them but after the Neville and Rose hook up really don't know how well your story is going to move and how great it will be your story is dying down and your going to throw at least one major new char almost into this which I think is going to hurt you more than help you since see nothing really getting better with having Neville in the story more.



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.13 - 02:04PM Title: The Dueling Club

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most stories i have read features cho, and she doesn't come off to well hehe, i wonder why!!!
and ti and rose's relationship mirrors ginny and deans in HBP! i think we will know what will happen, i think rose and nev may get it on! and maggie can then move in for the kill! we shall see!



Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.08.11 - 05:51AM Title: The Dueling Club

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2008.01.20 - 09:09PM Title: The Dueling Club

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Reviewer: ccmullins Signed Date: 2007.11.21 - 05:33AM Title: The Dueling Club

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Bravo, (Clapping hands) Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks for your work.
Charles

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, (Bows). Thanks so much for your review. I hope to have the next one up soon.



Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.11.18 - 05:46AM Title: The Dueling Club

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another great couple of chapters i defenatly like the new look duling club a very intriging way of incorparting a cannon event (&quite an important one a that into your story) .

I must admit that iam not very keen on draco & narcissus becoming reformed carecters ithough i supose it malfofirst evrthing else second in there minds so i sopose its alway possable but somehow the idea of harry & draco as frends just seam un natural.
Then there rose ook i can understand she very indepentant & as another revew mention very much like ginny but somehow it just seam rather odd that she anoyeed at ty for being over protective after what happend after christmas of course it good that not all your charecters are perfect &have flaws but if shes like this with ty then iam not sure who should would get along with oh well iam just going to have to keep reding &see whatever direction you take the charecters in iam sure it will be well written & belivabel.

The whol harry ginny cho thing on one level was very sweet as it obvious bond or no bond just how close harry & ginny have become & you have to feel a bit sorry for harry ashe relly is clueless when it come to any other girl apart from ginny. As for chos portrail i was a bit disaponted in thy way she came acroos as i relly dont think she would be like that (although in genrall cho dose get a rough time in most H G fan fisc) i would have prefferd romilda vine but maybe your saving her up for ether someone else or next year.

James

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments and the review. I hope you don't mind if I say that you should have a beta edit your comments. Maybe you were typing fast and had to send it in without editing. Anyway, you'll have to see how those plot lines work out. Just be patient for the next chapter. Thanks again for the review.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2007.11.17 - 10:49PM Title: The Dueling Club

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Harry being clueless about Cho's apparent intent was rather amusing; good thing he knows where his heart really is.

Rose seems a tad conflicted re: Ti, there. Looks like a set-up for them to find other partners, I think. :-}

Author's Response: Yeah, Harry is really a one-woman man. You'll have to be patient for a bit more to see what happens between Rose and Ti. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.11.17 - 04:57PM Title: The Dueling Club

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well cho is not the brightest blub in the set and then do it in front of ginny...harry is dumb as a brick with women but thats why he has ginny...kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, Harry is oblivious to other women now because he's so in love with Ginny.



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.11.17 - 12:41PM Title: The Dueling Club

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aww good chapter...although i wonder what will happen with Ty and Rose...i hope everything works out...whether they become just friends again or more than that! loved the chapter update soon!

CodeRomance

Author's Response: Well, you'll just have to see. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2007.11.17 - 10:38AM Title: The Dueling Club

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Still wondering about Draco but I guess that it will be like that for several chapters.
Cho's a bitch like she is portrayed in most stories but I wonder what Cedric wil do.
Rose is going to be fed up with Ty pretty soon if he doesn't watch out but hey, those hormones keep flying don't they ( There's hope for Nev )
Update soon altough I realise life get's in the way.
Keep Writing I'll keep reading. Thanx C

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, the story's progressing nicely. I hope to update by next weekend. If not, before the end of the month.



Reviewer: stnssydny Anonymous Date: 2007.11.16 - 09:12PM Title: The Dueling Club

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