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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.14 - 06:23AM Title: Consequences of a prank
oh dear! its all drama now!
Reviewer: monkeyboy Signed Date: 2008.04.03 - 10:06PM Title: Consequences of a prank
Oh, well isn't that touching. Could somebody just beat the hell out of that little snot already. All that prank did was turn him into a martyr. Sorry bout' the tone of my review. I don't mean this as an insult or a flame to you, but I just think that everybody is a little too accepting of Ti right now.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Well, right now they feel sorry for him because they know his desire to have Draco treat him as a real brother is totally consuming him, especially Harry, Ginny and Rose. So, they don't feel like beating him up over breaking up with Rose. Please be assured that deep down he's more like Sirius than Lucius and Draco.
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2008.03.21 - 10:45PM Title: Consequences of a prank
Ewww! Exposing her breast to a 13 year old.....blah!
Great story though.
Author's Response: Well, the baby wouldn't wait to be fed. LOL! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2008.02.18 - 10:10PM Title: Consequences of a prank
I did notice that Ron, Fred and George didn't specify that they were the only ones in on that prank when they apologized, and I guess Ti did, too.
Author's Response: Nope, not in this chapter. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: BioHazard82 Signed Date: 2008.02.17 - 01:47AM Title: Consequences of a prank
Great story so far. Keep up the good work, and update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hopefully, the next chapter will be out by tomorrow.
Reviewer: GryffindorGal87 Signed Date: 2008.02.13 - 12:55PM Title: Consequences of a prank
Oh! He did not just say he's not a Marauder! Great Chapter and I can't wait for the next one! =]
Author's Response: Unfortunately, he did. We'll have to see how that will work. I hope to post the next one by next week. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2008.02.08 - 04:12PM Title: Consequences of a prank
Well that the prophersey shot to hell.
I must admit iam not to keen on whta appears to be a common fan fic premis that sirus basically played the ffiled back in his school days & the fact that he seams to think it ok to pass that sort information onto a thirteen year old seams well irasponsable to say the least. The way he deals with ti show jjust how lacking in farther skills he is dispite what lilly tells him he just lays in to ti making the whol situation worse & effectavliy ffinishing any chance tha harry had of trying to patch up the diffrences between ti & the rest of the groupe.
At least in the next chapter i will hopefully get to see molly deal with ron & the twins when she finds out exactly what they did to ti,
James
Author's Response: Well, Sirius is still a bit immature. Before he started dating Sam and when he and Ti were just starting being in the same house, he regaled Ti with stories of his exploits at Hogwarts and gave him some advice on women which stuck to him. Ti just let his hormones run wild on him for a moment. Don't worry about it. There is still a chance for things to work out,
Thanks for the review. I hope to post the next chapter soon.
Reviewer: Black Rose Signed Date: 2008.02.06 - 11:44PM Title: Consequences of a prank
That was a very good chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work.--Black Rose
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I try my best to keep my stories in the same standard.
Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.02.06 - 08:01PM Title: Consequences of a prank
good job Ron, fred and George! really great! i just knew something like this would happen! ooh how sucky i hope it all works out! update soon!
CodeRomance
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope to have the next one out by next week.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.02.06 - 06:29PM Title: Consequences of a prank
some times life is not fun this is one of those times...and some time soon ti will have to tlak with them all..and maybe draco will talk with ahrry but that is nto a true thing....some people do change but some odont...ti just has not had tiem to think,,,and that is something that i think needs to be done....maybe lily would eb a good choice in somehting liek this and soon they will be ok about everything....kutgw
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Oh, he'll have time to think all right. You'll have to see how it goes. Next update will hopefully be next week.
Reviewer: FistyGinnyLover Signed Date: 2008.02.06 - 06:20PM Title: Consequences of a prank
nice story i hope they got together but plz tell me if he will leave them for good and if Dracos really cahnged and if Ti will go to the dark side
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry, you'll have to wait for the story to unfold further. LOL! :)
Reviewer: Pooky Anonymous Date: 2008.02.06 - 07:13AM Title: Consequences of a prank
I have never left a review on your story before so let me just say that I have throughly enjoyed both "The Twist of Fate" and this story. I especially love the relationship between Harry and Ginny and their Soul Bond and the way that both their relationship/bond has grown over time. I love that Ginny is such a strong character in your story. I do feel, however, that this drama between Rose and Ti is starting to feel a little too drawn out (at least 3 whole chapters dedicated to it so far) and it feels that it is slowing the story down too much. I know that you are trying to create drama and tension (especially in light of Ti's being mentioned in the prophecy and his new estrangement from the group), but this situation does seem to be kind of grinding the story down. In some ways the character's reactions to Ti and Rose's breakup are just a little unrealistic (especially the adults). I mean it is just a teenage romance: teenage romances end all the time and it is by far not the end of the world. I know that teenage couples (at least today) do a lot more than kiss, but it appears that a lot of couples in this story display an awful lot of physical affection (especially given their young ages and the more 'strict' attitude of the Wizarding World) and it sometimes seems a little Out-of-character. The only couple that I don't feel that way about is Harry and Ginny, and that is not only because of their Soul Bond, but their relationship and its development is a lot more realistic (for this world), deep, and beautiful. I also must say that I think that Sirius handled the situation with Ti like a complete arse! What a jerk he was! But that definately fits in with Sirius's character. Overall I love your story and will definately continue to read it, but please let this whole Rose/Ti drama go and move on with your story. Lets see a greater deepening between our favorite couple (H/G) and the movement of the larger story line! (My rating is only for this chapter: My overall rating for the story is a full five stars!!)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I understand your concerns. Be assured that, aside from Harry and Ginny, only Ti has tried to do more than kissing. Ron and Hermione have not gone beyong a little intense snogging. I'll try to move the story on but I just need to solve the dilemna of Ti and the Marauders.
Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2008.02.06 - 01:55AM Title: Consequences of a prank
Ti needs to grow up and take a peek at Draco's left arm!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Do you really think he'd be inducted so young? :)
Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2008.02.06 - 12:53AM Title: Consequences of a prank
Hmm interesting development, this will impact the prophecy and we will have to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Oh, it definitely will if it goes on.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2008.02.06 - 12:32AM Title: Consequences of a prank
Well, that wasn't as extreme as it could have been, I suppose: Ti might have demended to be able to spend time away from Siruis, the Potters, and the Weasleys, and with Draco..... Of course, the hols aren't over yet, either....
It does seem that Lily has justification for being rather put out with Padfoot, though.... :-}
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, there is that but then it's only the start of the holidays. You're rgiht about Lily.
