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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.14 - 07:23AM Title: A Moment Interrupted

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running onto the next, can't wait to see the rest duel!



Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.08.11 - 05:53AM Title: A Moment Interrupted

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.03.23 - 05:24PM Title: A Moment Interrupted

haaa lol that was great! i loved it! i cant wait to read harry's duel! and neville! he almost kissed Rose! oohhh I can't wait for it...though i do wish there was more ginny/harry action...just in general...the story seems to be more about the other characters then ginny and harry and i'm starting to miss them! well anyway update soon!

CodeRomance

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, there are other characters in this story though Harry and Ginny are the main focus. The fifth year duels and the rest of the tournament will be in the next one. I'll try to write more H/G fluff.



Reviewer: ProfessorBinns Signed Date: 2008.03.22 - 09:22PM Title: A Moment Interrupted

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Great fun. I've really enjoyed this story so far, and the previous one as well. I like how you've made everything better for Harry and company, but not perfect. Ginny and Harry might benefit from a little more angst, though. I look forward to seeing how you work out the defeat of Moldyshorts.

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. Have considered that but we'll see about some angst for our favorite couple.



Reviewer: GryffindorGal87 Signed Date: 2008.03.22 - 03:35PM Title: A Moment Interrupted

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Great job! I loved reading the duels. Luna's just cracked me up! I can't wait for the next chapter. =]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Luna's great, isn't she? I found it hard to make her part of the group because she couldn't fit into the prophecy but this is my solution.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.03.22 - 10:15AM Title: A Moment Interrupted

well im sorry that harry did nto dule but then again glad rose colon luna and rose did....hope rose is just going to be sore...where draco.....ti would need his suport to but then again it may be the start of the end of ti and draco...kutgw nevelle and rose will be kiss soon and they will be happy just keep ron away for a long time

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Don't worry, the fifth year duels are coming up along with the other rounds of the tournament. Nev/Rose will happen though not for a couple more chapters unless inspiration hits me.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2008.03.22 - 08:28AM Title: A Moment Interrupted

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Good interactions & duels (among other things). Wouldn't the schedule Harry & his class received be for O.W.L.s, rather than N.E.W.T.s?

It should be interesting to see how things progress between Neville & Rose.

And somehow, I suspect that draco's absence does not bode well.

Author's Response: It is for O.W.L.s. Sorry, that was typo. My bad. Thanks for spotting it. Nope, Draco's absence isn't good for our heroes.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2008.03.22 - 04:29AM Title: A Moment Interrupted

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Happy Easter to you too! Lay of the eggs :)

Stupid Ron and his interuptions. Come on Neville show some balls!
No Draco watching the Duell, I bet he's up to something.
Loved Luna/Colin she could beat an opponent by just confusing him LOL
I would've expected Neville to show something of his feelings when Rose got smashed to the floor but maybe we'll see his point of view next chapter.
You're doing a great job with the duell and I hope you wil update soon because now you've stopped smack in the middle.

Author's Response: Yeah, don't worry, Neville will come around. I couldn't show his reaction since that part was from Rose's point of view. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: harmoine Signed Date: 2008.03.22 - 01:14AM Title: A Moment Interrupted

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Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2008.03.21 - 11:31PM Title: A Moment Interrupted

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It seems to have become a tradition for fanfic authors to write a scene in which Ron messes up a perfect moment. You should have had Rose hex Ron. Great chapter. ~Jeff~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, it's just that Ron is so lacking in sensitivity at this age, it's a sure scene readers would love (love to hate). LOL!



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2008.03.21 - 07:56PM Title: A Moment Interrupted

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Another great Chapter... I am glad that their training is being put to use, I hope that whatever Rose is feeling will not effect the group.

Looking forward to the next Chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's why they're having the tourny. Nope, it's not that bad.




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