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Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2008.10.01 - 12:02PM Title: Surprises in the new term

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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.10.01 - 12:33AM Title: Surprises in the new term

Really I am finding it hard to read this tripe I really think you messed up with Rose and Ti like I said I am sorry but this was not very good I have made my feelings felt for this and so have some others it is to bad the way you went with this story I really don't think I will continue on with this you make it out all of a sudden as Ti as the bad guy not Rose that is what really bothers me you changing things 80 some chapters in is what has destroyed this story for me I will try to read the rest but highly doubt I will be able to which is sad you did have some potential with this story and the first 75 chaps were great just these last 7 to 10 or so have just been awful.

Author's Response: That's too bad. I already had this in the plot so I'm not changing it. I formed the pairings long before I started the first story and and have been angling for them. Ti and Rose is not the one for me. Sorry about that but I will not change it just to keep one reader. If you look at the other reviews, most of my readers like the idea of Neville and Rose. Even if they didn't, I'd keep it because that's what I want and I'm the author.



Reviewer: scarlett_witch Signed Date: 2008.09.28 - 11:32AM Title: Surprises in the new term

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awww... ron and hermione are really sweet
i can't wait to see what happens with draco!
that was a good chapter. i don't like the fact
that romilda vane and ti are together... im
so sorry for maggie.
anyway... i can't wait for the next chapter!!
good work...

scarlett*

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, love making those sweet moments.



Reviewer: Defender Signed Date: 2008.09.28 - 03:45AM Title: Surprises in the new term

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What is Draco up to? Do you post these on LiveJournal an anything too? I know SIYE holds up the postings, so I thought I'd ask. Anyhow, Great job on another chapter and having Kingsley teach is a great move, but I'll miss the Slug Club a bit. With James still alive though, it's probably better not to have Snape teach DADA.

also, this line doesn't sound right. "I’ve never had a birthday party with other than my parents." I think you're missing "party with ANYONE other" but still a good post!

Thanks for working on this story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I have the story on Fanfiction and Phoenixsong. Thanks for that correction.



Reviewer: sweetdreamer285 Signed Date: 2008.09.28 - 03:31AM Title: Surprises in the new term

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Aw, poor Maggie. I can relate, but I'm hoping she gets involved with someone new while Ti finally opens his eyes, it would be a great read!

I've always wondered and may be too late (or out of context) to ask but... If Cedric didn't die in this AU and was supposed to be dating Cho, Why did she flirt with Harry in 5th year and then suddenly stop at the end of that year? Subplot? Just curious. ^_^;

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Well, you'll have to see how Maggie copes. As to Cho, there was a subplot but it will be revealed later.



Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2008.09.27 - 04:17PM Title: Surprises in the new term

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Harry and Ginny should've thrown the party for Hermione independantly of Ron and not reminded him of Hermione's birthday to see if he could remember it on his own. If he is not capable of doing so, then he doesn't deserve her, and certainly doesn't deserve the credit for remembering it or trying to get her a decent gift. If they keep helping him, Ron will never learn how to treat Hermione right on his own.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, I know. It'll bite him back in the end.



Reviewer: mworth1019 Signed Date: 2008.09.27 - 01:40PM Title: Surprises in the new term

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Very nice. I still wish I knew if Draco was lying to everyone. I hope he really doesnt turn evil. It would hurt Ti too much and I hate it when Ron is right when he is being a git.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Well, you'll have to wait and see how it goes.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2008.09.27 - 12:20PM Title: Surprises in the new term

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Yeah, someone was forced to distract & delay Hermione. It's a tough job, but Ron's up for it. :-}

While unmitigated hatred of Draco may not be called for, a healthy dose of skepticism seems quite appropriate.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. One should definitely be skeptical at this point.



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.27 - 10:58AM Title: Surprises in the new term

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more fluff!!!! but what is malfoy up to, we just can't trust him!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. There will be more fluff in later chapters.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.09.27 - 09:14AM Title: Surprises in the new term

well ron got out of another close call but he is almost out of them and will need to think more about hermione soon then other things and that is going to hurt ron alot...then again hermione will hurt ot but not as much as ron and other parts of his body...kutgw

Author's Response: Yeah, Ron may run out of luck soon. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2008.09.27 - 08:56AM Title: Surprises in the new term

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Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.09.27 - 08:14AM Title: Surprises in the new term

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What a great chapter! Especially the Mione/Ron parts but poor old Ron needs to put his girlfriend first and start planning by himself.


Beautiful writing as always,

gryff_princess

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, Ron will have to prove himself at some point.




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