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Reviewer: mworth1019 Signed Date: 2009.09.09 - 01:52PM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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not another cliffie!!!!!!!! Shame on you... hurry up and get your muse on and finish the story already!!!! I just hate the wait... love the story though

Author's Response: I know, it's a bit difficult to write more than a few hours a day and sometimes i lose track of what I'm writing. But don't worry, I'll try my best to update every two weeks. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: ccmullins Signed Date: 2009.09.07 - 05:45PM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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Excellent, enjoy the suspense, a real cliffy.
Thanks
Charles

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. Though I like writing fluff, it's always best to have several elements in a story.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2009.09.07 - 07:25AM Title: Teenage confusion and visions


What can I say? I never trusted Draco and his 'changed ways'. Ha Ha. His conversation with Ti, apologising for his attack on him was just sooo 'Put-on'.

Ti must have been imperialised to have kidnapped Rose.

PLEASE update soon as you can't leave us with a 'cliffe' for to long.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2009.09.07 - 07:23AM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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What can I say? I never trusted Draco and his 'changed ways'. Ha Ha. His conversation with Ti, apologising for his attack on him was just sooo 'Put-on'.

Ti must have been imperialised to have kidnapped Rose.

PLEASE update soon as you can't leave us with a 'cliffe' for to long.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope I don't keep you waiting long for the next one.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.09.06 - 05:46AM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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Wow!

Poor Ti, he's finaly learning that his brother may not have sworn off his wicked ways but it's to late now, isn't it.
The ROR was probably in use by Draco and his vanishing cabinet and I just know that it was him, in a Ti-polyjuice coating, stunning Rose and he'll probably try to send her through the cabinet to Borgin's & Burkes.
But will that happen or will Nev realise something is way off and come to her rescue.

DeathEaters attacking the Ministry ....... hope James will be forwarned enough to save the day.

Until next time, take care. C


Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You'll have to wait for the next chapter to know what happened there. I hope it's not a long wait.



Reviewer: harmoine Signed Date: 2009.09.05 - 08:23PM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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HOW COULD YOU ALLOW HER TO BE KIDNAPPED LIKE THAT! EITHER TIE WAS IMPERSINATED BY POLYJUICE OR HELL I DON'T EVEN WANT TO KNOW! YOU HAD BETTER HAVE HER RESCUED VERY QUICKLY OR THIS IS ONE PERSON WHO CEASE AND EXIST TO READ THIS STORY. OH FOR WHAT YOU DID TO ROSE A RATING OF 1 IS THAT THIS CHAPTER SHALL BE RECEIVING.

Author's Response: Well, it's your choice whether to read it or not. One thing I will tell you, I hate killing off main characters. I do plan her rescue in the next one. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.09.05 - 11:29AM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

Now we all know that its going to be a bad day in paridae...harry and nevell will be dealing with draco now and soon ti is going to see the light of how wrong he was....kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. That last part may or may not come true, depending on how I write it. :)



Reviewer: HG4HOOD Signed Date: 2009.09.05 - 09:51AM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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I can say, i never trusted Ti...... plz update soon..

Author's Response: Ti? Really? Hmm, well, you'll find out the truth one day. LOL! Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2009.09.05 - 06:57AM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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Update soon.......

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and rating, I'll really try to update within two weeks.



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2009.09.05 - 04:23AM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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Author's Response: Thanks for the rating.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2009.09.05 - 01:03AM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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Hmmm... why would I suspect that the person Neville & Rose encountered was (despite appearances) not Ti...? :-}

Things aren't looking too good for Rose.

Author's Response: Ooh, I don't know, maybe because there was a clue that said it wasn't really Ti? LOL! Thanks for your review. Things are definitely not good for Rose.



Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2009.09.04 - 09:37PM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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Oops, Rose is in a trap now, isn't she? I had the feeling it would happen as I got to the end of this chapter. Looks like another rescue mission is on again for Harry and co, this time to save Rose.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers,
GoDons

Author's Response: Yeah, looks that way. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2009.09.04 - 08:08PM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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Well either its polyjuice or its the Imperius Curse, or maybe a combination of the two. Either way, Ti would not do that on his own free will. Great chapter, but you know you must update REAL soon! You can't leave us with a cliffhanger like that! ~Jeff~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll really try to give you the next one faster than the last one.



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2009.09.04 - 07:00PM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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Draco shows his true colors next chapter.

Thanks for writing
MPF

Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. :) Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: jmcmutt Signed Date: 2009.09.04 - 04:18PM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

Intriguing chapter - poor Ti, he just wants so desparately to believe in Draco yet he knows in his heart things are not quite right. Poor Rose & Neville - Neville will be beside himself when he finds it was an imposter who took Rose.

Author's Response: Oh, that's for sure. I can just imagine it, just like Harry in the books. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: sacrutchfield Signed Date: 2009.09.04 - 03:18PM Title: Teenage confusion and visions

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! it has to draco not it, but it be the neckless that draco gave ti. update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You'll have to wait to find out what exactly happened. I hope to update within two weeks.




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