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Reviewer: Ashish3389 Signed
Date: 2009.11.01 - 08:15AM
Title: Rose's recovery
It's really getting very interesting and can't wait for the next chapter!
Though I do have to ask you... Will there be a next or will you finish it off In this one?
And also I'd like to point out what I think are a couple of plot inconsistencies that I noticed
•I think this was in hptof where martha tells rose that No one can force her to use her seer powers, not even under the imperius. I know voldemort doesn't succeed, but while under the curse, a part of rose wants to help voldemort. Just a confusion there
•I think this was also in HPTOF, when James and albus are talking and James is worried about harry and ginny's physical relationship, and say he doesn't want to be a grandfather yet. Albus tells him not to worry as there are protections around hogwarts to prevent those "activities".
But, a few chaps ago(where harry found Neville and rose in Neville's bed), harry and ginny have done it in harry's dorm, which, should not be possible.
Apart from that, it's great reading.
Cheers!
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed
Date: 2009.10.31 - 12:15PM
Title: Rose's recovery
All is well again but for how long ..... only you know the answer to that.
It's coming together nicely isn't it.
Good luck on the next chapter.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed
Date: 2009.10.31 - 10:11AM
Title: Rose's recovery
Yeah, I can see how Rose might freak out a bit on seeing Ti (without knowing the full story). He (Ti) seems to have matured a bit; perhaps realizing that Draco was playing him for a fool had something to do with that.
And I suppose Ron would be way too out-of-character if he didn't open his mouth without engaging his brain first now & then. :-}
Rose's reaction to the flying ban (even though it's temporary) will likely be ... memorable. :-} I wonder who will get the honors of being the messenger for that bit of news -- and about the extent to which Rose is likely to "shoot the messenger." :-}
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2009.10.31 - 03:53AM
Title: Rose's recovery
I really understand Rose'e reaction to Ti but I am glad that she has believed that he couldn't do that.
Professor Dumbledore has a nerve to interogate Rose when both James and Lilly and Madam Pomphrey all told him not to. Let's hope he has a bit more thought before he tries that again.
I really enjoy reading this story and am awaiting the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to update in a couple of weeks.
Reviewer: heathw Signed
Date: 2009.10.31 - 12:48AM
Title: Rose's recovery
If someone interrogated my daughter after not ony I, but her doctor also said not too, I would break their face. I would do so regardless of their position. James is supposed to be the minister of magic and let us not forget: "family is the most important thing to a Potter." This makes his lack of reaction completely unbelievable, in my opinion.
Author's Response: Well, let's not forget that they still have enormous respect for Dumbledore in spite of their suspicion of his motives. So they give him a bit of leeway. If Dumbledore had tried that immediately after she came back or tried to wake her up to do that, James would have been livid. He won't allow Dumbledore to interrogate her again until Rose agrees. Sorry if it came out wrong for you. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed
Date: 2009.10.30 - 11:47PM
Title: Rose's recovery
No Review
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2009.10.30 - 10:50PM
Title: Rose's recovery
Well im glad they where all there to help rose but ti has every right and worng to be feeling what he is....kutgw
Author's Response: That's true. His hopes were all shattered by Draco then one of his best friends thought he had gone bad. Really a bad situation for him. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: GoDons Signed
Date: 2009.10.30 - 09:39PM
Title: Rose's recovery
No Review
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating.
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