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Reviews For Seasons Of Love

Reviewer: faded memories Signed Date: 2007.08.17 - 03:56PM Title: Chapter 1 - Dear Lily

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This is good!



Reviewer: Marauder Evans Signed Date: 2007.02.22 - 02:53AM Title: Chapter 1 - Dear Lily

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Awww! I loved this story! *wipes away tear* It was really powerful, not ot mention I was feeling every moment of this! Lol, there is an American Wizarding world i s'pose so you're just different than the Brittish! And not ot mention, it didn't matter! The letter to Lily covered it all! I think this calls for a sequal! Again, nicely done!



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.02.21 - 11:32PM Title: Chapter 1 - Dear Lily

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First story? A damn good one too. I don't really think you have to know much "wizarding" as you put it. As long as you knwo (and you obviosly do) the basics, you know as much as we. Just because I'm a Brit doesn't mean we know more. I'll catch you out on any American words, that have other meanings, etc. in the UK. When we lived in Virginia, I was gobsmacked at the Americanisms, and they though I was a bit round the twist. i.e. Knock you up means WAKE you up in the UK, and you do NOT ask a gril in VA when she wants you to knock her up!!!
This is, after all a love story, no matter what you write later.

For now, jus concentrate on your story, so we can read MORE.



Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2007.02.21 - 10:45PM Title: Chapter 1 - Dear Lily

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So cute!



Reviewer: Jonathan Avery Signed Date: 2007.02.21 - 08:36PM Title: Chapter 1 - Dear Lily

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Ah fluff . . . to be truthful I was not sure if I would like this fic. The first few paragraphs had not really caught my attention, but the diary entry caught my eye. You really captured and portrayed your version of Ginny very quickly, I could almost hear her voice and see her nibbling on a quill and then scratching away again as she tried to find a connection to a person she could never know. It was very Rockwellian in nature, and it alludes to a story that could be satisfying in its elegant simplicity.

It would be nice if your story became a kind of kitchen table visit between good friends as they caught up on life and shared those little problem, victories, and foibles that make life so rewarding. Keep up the good start.

-Jonathan




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