Reviews For After Ten Years
Reviewer: ALigirl Signed Date: 2010.10.25 - 08:41PM Title: Chapter 4: The Question Asked LOVE THIS you are such a great writer! Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.05.20 - 12:26PM Title: Chapter 4: The Question Asked good chapter Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2008.03.31 - 07:41PM Title: Chapter 4: The Question Asked I have to agree with previous reviewers. This story needs a beta because too much of it is simply fantastical and unrealistic in the extreme. I find it too unlikely and unrealistic to be enjoyable. A good beta could really help bring our story out because at the moment it is being lost in the strange unrealistic moments. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.03.31 - 06:05PM Title: Chapter 4: The Question Asked they will have to deal with it at some point but not today...fun story...like how it moves...needs some break but thats it..kutgw Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2008.03.31 - 02:25PM Title: Chapter 4: The Question Asked so cute! Please hurry with the next chapter! | |||||||
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