Reviews For 00 Potter
Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2008.10.27 - 05:44AM Title: Brotherly Love It's a great concept, but could use a little work in the grammar dept. The difference between too and to, then and than, its and it's, they're and their, so forth; need to be watched a bit more carefully. You might want to get a 2nd beta to take a look at it as well, an extra set of eyes never hurts. Reviewer: KaKe3535 Signed Date: 2007.10.07 - 03:43AM Title: Brotherly Love aww.. they are soo cute.. i hope they get together soon Reviewer: HarryGinnyMustLiveOn Signed Date: 2007.09.28 - 12:51AM Title: Brotherly Love This was great! I love this original idea. There is a few mistakes in there that I noticed, but nothing a quick read over by a friend or beta reader wouldn't fix :) I can't wait to read the next chapter. Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.08.24 - 07:11PM Title: Brotherly Love now that my computer has recovered from the Dementor's blue screen of death, not before having sucked all the files out however...I'm playing catch-up on SIYE. I really hope you don't abandon this story. Reviewer: Strider Signed Date: 2007.05.29 - 04:02PM Title: Brotherly Love I liked that moment between them on their picnic. You show a degree of intimacy that is friendly, but goes even deeper than that. --Strider Reviewer: Victor Aagaard Signed Date: 2007.05.25 - 07:30PM Title: Brotherly Love The numerous mechanical errors are very distracting, but this is otherwise a great story so far. Keep up the good work, etc. Reviewer: magical princess Signed Date: 2007.05.25 - 06:57AM Title: Brotherly Love I love your writing. Especially since you are so young. People your age don't normally write so well. Great job. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.05.24 - 10:29PM Title: Brotherly Love I'm enjoying your story and am happy to see that Harry and Ginny are getting along so well. If I could make one suggestion it would be to enhance your narrative by adding more of what each thought about the other. Are they both harboring deep thoughts of love for the other and are just to afraid to say something or are they just truly best friends? Ginny mentioned Dean and Ron chasing off all her boyfriends. Just how many romantic entanglements has she had? If this story is post-HBP, then what happened to their relationship after Voldemort was killed? Reviewer: Sir Ollivander Signed Date: 2007.05.24 - 10:00PM Title: Brotherly Love Edited for minor spelling: Apparated is capitalized. St. Mungo's has an apostrophe. | |||||||
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