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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.08.20 - 10:47PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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awwww that was sooo sweet! and well weird! that she was there when that happened...with sirus and peter! wow this is turning out to be great!

CodeRomance



Reviewer: Little Miss SciFi Anonymous Date: 2007.08.19 - 04:33PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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this sounds really good! hope to see more soon!



Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 11:33AM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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Obviously the Ministry aurors weren't interested in interviewing witnesses before Obliviating them when Wormtail did that. It certainly falls in line with the way the Ministry absolutely refuses to investigate anything (for example, during Chamber of Secrets, aurors weren't interviewing witnesses and searching the school - instead Fudge just arrested Hagrid because of his record). I wonder if her story will come into play later on.



Reviewer: harry 4Eyes Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 09:18AM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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Hmmm....seems like a waste of an oxford education to me, working as a secondary school teacher. But I like your idea of Harry having someone who wants to be there for him, maybe she'll call the social services on the Dursleys, it would be an open and shut case if they did a raid and found a kid living under the stairs when they had 2 spare bedrooms.. (But that's all wishful thinking.)

So she witnessed Wormtail turning into a Rat? Is this your opening for her to be introduced to Harrys world once he's in Hogwarts he remembers her mentioning a man turning into a rat at the end of book 3? Because lets face it it's amazing how people remember something that was said years ago in the HP books, (Seriously Ron remember how Harry hissed at the tap 5 years after it happened?) So is she breaking through the memory charm placed on her?

Well as long as Maggie doesn't get paired with Remus i'm happy,
Good fic you have here
Hope you update soon
Harry



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 08:51AM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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I don't reckon Maggie was dremaing! Oh no, she got obliviated but it might have been a shoddy piece of obliviation there! lol

I am enjoying this so far and will keep an eye out for updates :)



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 12:19AM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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May I assume that the title has to do with the lives teacher's touch? I know I owe what I am today to a very special teacher...who in her own way convinsed me that I was in her words 'an old soul,' bright beyond my years, learned at an amazing rate, and my choices would be difficulat in one way, but simple in another. Ic ould be a first rate criminal, or be someone who made a difference. Seeing as how that teacher and I werre in an orphanage...I thought the possibility of either was bloody slim. But thanks to her, and her advice in my formative years...lol, I'm not a criminal, I'm a third year Intern (hous officer) in London.

I'm wondering how Maggie will touch the lives of Harry and all the rest? She has already dreamed a truth that harry knows nothing about. At that age, all Harry has seen is the green light and heard a woman screaming in his dreams. Amazing story so far.

Thanks for listening.
Darian



Reviewer: yentila22 Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 12:05AM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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I am intrigued by your very original plot and your character Maggie. I was so touched by your first chapter and your characterization of young Harry was heartbreaking. I loved how you cleverly tied your story to cannon with the inclusion of Peter Petergrew and Sirius Black. I cant wait for chapter 3 !



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 10:23PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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When I first read your summary I was thinking: "Oh please let Sirius be the love that he finds!" He is one of my favorite characters and SOOO deserves a chance for a happy life, filled with people that love him!...Well, your second chapter makes me even more hopeful. Very smooth way to connect this original character of yours to cannon! Please update SOON! You really have me hooked to your story now...;-)



Reviewer: carolquin Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 09:02PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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omg! this is such a wonderful story so far. it has my emotions all over the place.

i've been looking for a good new story to read...and honestly the stuff that has come out the last few weeks haven't caught my eyes...but your story did! i'm loving it.

carolyn



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 08:39PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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Just read chapters one and two. What a lovely idea. I'm a teacher myself so I'm really enjoying it. Keep up the good work.



Reviewer: Brizz333 Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 08:26PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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its so cute i love it make sure u update soon, i hate waiting lol



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 08:21PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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Hmmm. A witness of Pettigrew's "death". That sounds so interesting.

Update soon, please!



Reviewer: caitlyn62442 Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 08:07PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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You've got a great start so far! I love Maggie so far as a character. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop the Maggie side of the story while still keeping Harry's first 4 years at Hogwarts canon. I'm not saying no to a little AU by the way! ; )

Anyway, good job and please update soon! I can't wait to read more!



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 05:29PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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I am really enjoying Harry in this fantasy world you have created for him ..... even if it does have the Dursleys in it. Maggie's dream is intriguing ..... and if it's been ahppening for ten years, then she would have been twelve at the time. I wonder if she lived in Godric's Hollow and is somehow connected to the Potter family. In any event that dream is on Halloween, the night Harry's parents were murdered. Thaks for posting so quickly, your story is definitely on my favorites list.



Reviewer: Alphashard Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 03:40PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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I like this story, it's nice to see the muggles point of view. I certainly hope she investifates where HArry's gone, once she see's he's not at Stonewall or St. Brutus's those nasty Dursleys' are going to have some questions to answer! Go get 'em Maggie! :)



Reviewer: Jade Rid Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 02:40PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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!!!
She saw Peter and Sirius!! She could prove Sirius is inocent of murdering that rat!
(She's not aware of that of course, but still...)
I'm so glad that Harry has her as a friend! She really is great!
Now Harry has an "angel" looking out for him at school.
Keep it up, I really, really, really love this!
:)



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 02:17PM Title: Lunch and Stuff

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Sooo, Maggie has a History with Sirius.

FANTSASTIC CHAPTER.

Did the paw he waved have a missing toe?

I wonder what will happen when Harry doesn't show the next year?

Will she investigate?

Brillant story

Look forward to more

Ja ne

Jim




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