Reviews For The Lives We Touch
Reviewer: harry 4Eyes Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 02:12PM Title: Lost in London
Wow you certainly update quickly.....brilliant. and certainly fast moving, we've moved from age 10 to 15 in a few chapters, I will admit I was hoping for more moments between Maggie and Harry, but oh well, will be interesting to see how things have changed from the original.
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 01:04PM Title: Lost in London
Author's are allowed all kinds of literary license to create any kind of coincidence they want to bring parties together. And so we have Maggie stroll around to Grimmauld Place, run into Lucius Malfoy and then get rescued by Padfoot and Harrry. This hould be put to a song! Loved the fact that Maggie is back in the picture though and got a very close look at magic for the first time.
Reviewer: faded memories Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 12:18PM Title: Lost in London
-DH SPOILER SPACE-
Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 07:21AM Title: Lost in London
no they cant apparate into grimmauld place but they can apparate to the steps right in front of them...but what did you do! why oh why did you cut it off like that! ohh no! oh and what about getting harry the leaky cauldron after 2nd year? did she manage to do that? just wondering cuz it was abruptly cut off...but ya update soon! i love this!
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 05:16AM Title: Lost in London
You have to admit, even Jo was writing fiction and went where her mind took her, as you are doing.
Reviewer: animeluvr8 Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 02:23AM Title: Lost in London
Ooo! THis is interesting. Sorry I didnt get to review the last chap, but it was nice too.
Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 01:43AM Title: Lost in London
Herione apparates both Ron and Harry after the wedding in DH, so yeah I reckon that can happen :D .
Reviewer: adamovita Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 12:33AM Title: Lost in London
This is my first review.
Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2007.08.21 - 11:23PM Title: Lost in London
Maggie Vs. Sirius.
Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2007.08.21 - 11:15PM Title: Lost in London
Ahhhh! What a cliffy! Thank you for updating at such lightning speed...but now I really, REALLY want to see the next scene inside. I have a feeling that Sirius might be quite taken with such a feisty little lady...especially when she shows such dedication and concern for Harry ;-)
Reviewer: Alphashard Signed Date: 2007.08.21 - 11:10PM Title: Lost in London
I would say since Dobby was able to Apparate with Dean, Luna and Ollivander that yes more the one passenger side along apparation is possible.
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.08.21 - 11:01PM Title: Lost in London
"unfamiliar with it's inner workings" I think it should be its, because it's a possessive. Sorry about the nagging, but your story is too good to let those things diminish it.