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Reviewer: NikaDawson Signed Date: 2007.09.09 - 12:17AM Title: Understanding

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I love this story, and I adore Maggie. Can't wait for another update.



Reviewer: irollam Signed Date: 2007.09.08 - 07:43PM Title: Understanding

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I love this story!



Reviewer: The Seeker Signed Date: 2007.09.08 - 03:38PM Title: Understanding

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I usually don't send reviews to authors who don't respond . . . but I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story. The quality of your writing seems to improve each chapter, and this one flowed more smoothly than the previous chapters. Having Maggie play a central role in the story really moves it out of the ordinary fare. You're establishing her relationship with Sirius very well.

Looking forward to your next update, since the meeting with Dumbledore should be very interesting.



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.09.08 - 10:03AM Title: Understanding

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uh oh...what happened? why does Dumbledore want Sirius and Maggie to come? and oh so romantic! heeeheee the start of something i would say haaaa! great chapter and update soon!

CodeRomance



Reviewer: Little Miss SciFi Anonymous Date: 2007.09.08 - 06:51AM Title: Understanding

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Yeah!!! Brill!!! chapter! Hope to see more soon!!!



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.09.08 - 05:17AM Title: Understanding

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Hopefully, Sirius is finding something in Maggie that has been so very lacking.I was thinking (and that's always scarey, trust me on that one) that if Maggie was in danger...she could be the new Muggle Studies teacher at Hogwarts...but logic got the better of me. Hogwarts and safe don't really equate, since Tom has managed to try and kill Harry every year, with the exception of the year they found Peter. Not to mention Snape is there...but maybe while Maggie sees DD she and Sirius can find a way to let her parent's know shes okay. Actually it's looking like she's MORE than okay.
I know I'm witing to the big empty, since you don't acknowlege reviews, but at least you know we all love your story, yeah?

Darian



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.09.08 - 03:56AM Title: Understanding

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I really liked this chapter, I think it was your best. Lots of description and emotions and stuff. I have come to the conclusion that I am a shocking reviewer cos i really can't say what I mean to say...but rest assured I think your writing is getting better in the things it conveys :D .



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.09.08 - 01:52AM Title: Understanding

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"...patch of died blood." Isn't it 'dried'?
And I think it's Hogwarts, not Hogwart's (as usual, sorry, too good a story to let those pass)

Nice chapter. Maggie getting Sirius to tell his tale might make him feel better. Can't wait for the meeting with Dumbledore.

Don't you think that safety would dictate to call Sirius by some code name like Padfoot o Snuffles? I mean, since Kingsley is using some code for Maggie calling her 'The Magnolia' instead of just Magnolia or Maggie.

Update soon, please!




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