Reviews For If Lily Lived
Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2007.08.30 - 12:40AM Title: Chapter 1: The Boy Who Lived Nice twist here! I am sure Ginny would have loved to hear Ron say that...for once she's not "someone's sister"... Reviewer: aryell Signed Date: 2007.08.30 - 12:38AM Title: Chapter 1: The Boy Who Lived I like it!!! And cool how Snape could have been his step-father. Reviewer: James Evans Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 08:30PM Title: Chapter 1: The Boy Who Lived mmm, good start, a bit rushed but good notwithstanding...one question though: why make Lily survive only to kill her off so soon after, even if you did a favor to her by not letting the wedding be completed...Lily and Snape??? Oh c'mon...lool Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 05:49PM Title: Chapter 1: The Boy Who Lived It's a good premise but it felt quite rushed in places. I am confused why Lily did die as I thought it was about her not dying. How does her not sacrificing her life make Voldemort still die? I can't see Severus letting Harry go tbh. In Canon his eyes haunted him cos he never *had* Lily, if he did have her Harry's eyes would be more of a comfort, so i guess I don't really buy that bit. I think because it's too rushed to explore the emotons of it all. Reviewer: Sakabatou Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 04:51PM Title: Chapter 1: The Boy Who Lived You've got a good start off and a good idea. The part with Lily going to Severus... I could see it happing since they were best friends, but I think Lily wouldn't run off from her husband, James's, side; Either Sirius or Severus would have to pull her away, and don't forget, Severus called her a Mud Blood, so she would have to get over that. Whether she did or not, we're not sure since J.K. never got into it, but we can guess she didn't. since she hooked up with James. Reviewer: potteronpotluvhim Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 04:23PM Title: Chapter 1: The Boy Who Lived lily ended up dying anyway =( | |||||||
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