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SIYE Time:4:42 on 17th June 2021


Reviewer: afpease Signed Date: 2007.09.19 - 10:10AM Title: Somewhere Along The Line

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Altough I really like this being in Ginny's POV, I'm not crazy about the "internal monologue" aspect of it - seems a little forced to me.

I do like the story - especially the parallel of Victoire / Teddy to Ginny / Harry, and Harry's line, "Teddy's a goner" - when JKR had this scene in canon, I was hoping it would work out that Harry would end up a "goner" with Ginny - it just made sense to me.

So a great job - seems completely consistent with Jo's rather nebulous epilogue.

Keep up the good work, and thank you!

Author's Response: Mm, a lot of people aren't fond of the second person thing. In many ways it was more of an exercise for me with changing between styles. I'm glad you liked it anyway though XD I'm a fan of the parallels; as you've noticed they're everywhere with me, obvious or not. And I should be thanking you!




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