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Reviewer: Horatio Signed Date: 2007.11.06 - 09:02AM Title: Part I

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So what gives? You have written a very good first chapter and I'm thinking that this has a great deal of potential as a story, but now I want to know what happens next. Please continue with this story as soon as you can.



Reviewer: Reviewer Signed Date: 2007.09.23 - 04:21AM Title: Part I

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Excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: browneyes Signed Date: 2007.09.22 - 04:59PM Title: Part I

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I really enjoyed this. A first I thought was a bit strange that Harry was objecting Ginny becoming a Quidditch player, but it actually makes a lot of sense, especially after the way he tried to protect her in DH, I mean its hardly a safe career.

Looking forward to an update.

Author's Response: I'm glad you seemed to think the situation was plausible. I think Harry will see his decision has a rash one once he thinks about it. It was overreaction on his part. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm slowly chipping away at part II.



Reviewer: Penny Flamel Signed Date: 2007.09.22 - 01:03AM Title: Part I

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Awww so sweet how harry proposes, i love how he's portrayed as kind sweet gentle i love it, please update!! By the way you have a very artuculate writing style. Its very good. *cookies to author* !!

Author's Response: I'm seeing a division between the people who appreciate Harry's personality and those who have some reservations regarding his character. Irregardless, thank you very much for your kind review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.



Reviewer: Rose1981 Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 08:12PM Title: Part I

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Very cute story! I am looking forward to reading Part II.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm working on part II, but it's a slow process seeing as I'm involved in a couple other fics. Hopefully part II should see the light of day soon.



Reviewer: katydid13 Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 07:26PM Title: Part I

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Very interesting! I look forward to seeing the rest.

Author's Response: Part II is coming along slowly. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you like the story.



Reviewer: kat28 Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 06:53PM Title: Part I

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great writing - can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: THanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Hopefully more is on the way soon :)



Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 03:14PM Title: Part I

As I was saying before I prematurely hit the "submit" button...


yes, she should have told him that she wanted to try out, but Harry should not be too upset. After all, her entire family was invited to their "engagement luncheon" before he had even asked her. That was a bit presumptuous on his part.


Author's Response: Harry comes around eventually. There is a little bit more backstory to this that appears in part II. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 03:11PM Title: Part I

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Harry is right, she should have told him she was trying out.



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 02:03PM Title: Part I

Great start. If you don't already know I don't exactly review. Since I don't write, other than medical papers....the creative gene drwon in the pool.I don't feel I have the right to critique others writing.
BUT, I DO comment. Harry is being a bit of a prat. They weren't yet engaged when Ginny decided to try out for the Harpies. It was something she did for herself to feel like she was a person in her own right...not an extension of the Weasleys, nor for that matter Harry.
Believe me I know the look Harry gave her. My Mum can still get me with that look. It's worse than having someone yell at you.
I just hope he doesn't make too much of an issue of it, or break up with Ginny, yet again. I'm sure there are things HE does in his line of work that he's forbidden to tell Ginny.
I guess life without angst and drama wouldn't leave you with much of a plot though.
I look forward to seeing where you take us.

Darian



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 02:03PM Title: Part I

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Great start. If you don't already know I don't exactly review. Since I don't write, other than medical papers....the creative gene drwon in the pool.I don't feel I have the right to critique others writing.
BUT, I DO comment. Harry is being a bit of a prat. They weren't yet engaged when Ginny decided to try out for the Harpies. It was something she did for herself to feel like she was a person in her own right...not an extension of the Weasleys, nor for that matter Harry.
Believe me I know the look Harry gave her. My Mum can still get me with that look. It's worse than having someone yell at you.
I just hope he doesn't make too much of an issue of it, or break up with Ginny, yet again. I'm sure there are things HE does in his line of work that he's forbidden to tell Ginny.
I guess life without angst and drama wouldn't leave you with much of a plot though.
I look forward to seeing where you take us.

Darian

Author's Response: Well, I'm extremely pleased that you decided to comment on this story! There is a little bit more backstory to this that should hopefully clear up any questions about Harry's or Ginny's motives. I felt that it would be a bit too much to add everything in here; hence, that's why this story is broken up into multiple parts. Life is constantly changing. It's never static but then again, that's the whole beauty of it. Thanks for taking the time to read and especially review.



Reviewer: oeyp Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 12:43PM Title: Part I

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I find it slightly hypocritical of Harry to be mad at Ginny for keeping something as mundane as Quidditch try-outs from him, considering that he never exactly let her in on the whole Horcrux thing, did he? But then again, maybe he did tell her everything when they got back together, and they made a promise to each other never to keep secrets from each other again?

Still, a bit dramatic to just leave without even saying goodbye, especially after just proposing to her. And her brothers, not liking the idea that she's going to play professional Quidditch? Curious.

Anyway, I did like the fact that Ginny's trying to do something for herself. I look forward to see how this develops.

Author's Response: Well, there's a backstory to this that should give more insight into Harry and Ginny's characters. I did plan to put it into this chapter right after the proposal but I changed my mind and decided to place the flashback at the beginning of part II. So a little more patience and hopefully you'll learn the reason why things aren't exactly what they seem right now. I've always imagined her brothers still remaining fiercely protective of each other after Fred's death, and especially Ginny. But they shall learn the wrong of their ways, especially if Ginny has anything to say about it ;) Ginny is a very forceful character and she is the protagonist of this fic--not Harry. Sometimes, it catches people off guard. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Stay tuned for the second part!



Reviewer: AlbusSeverus Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 10:13AM Title: Part I

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Cool story- hope you continue it :D

Author's Response: Part II is coming along, albeit slowly. Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 09:14AM Title: Part I

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Great start

Harry a bit two faced though. Hope Ginny gives him his


LOOK FORWARD TO MORE


Ja ne


Jim

Author's Response: Gives him his what exactly? *grins* Thanks for reviewing. Part II is getting there.



Reviewer: James Evans Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 08:56AM Title: Part I

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good work...keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Najam Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 08:56AM Title: Part I

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people really do love angst i guess...hmm
still very nicely written.

Author's Response: And what is that supposed to mean? *grins* Sadly, I was given the prompt, I did the best I could :D Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: BeyondRedHorizons Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 08:55AM Title: Part I

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Interesting story, though I find it hard to believe that Ginny's managed to retain so much anonymity, given her relationship with Harry and the closeness of this story to Voldemort's defeat (I imagine Harry and every minute detail of his personal life would be front page news for months), or that she hasn't discussed Quidditch as a career option with Harry beforehand.

Harry's line about keeping secrets seemed a little out of place in the context of his conversation with Ginny, as well, and it was a little too obvious as a ploy to set up the conflict at the end of the chapter. To be honest, the whole argument seemed rather artificial to me. Ginny decided to try out on impulse, and only kept the fact that she'd done so a 'secret' for a matter of hours. It seems a consummately ridiculous thing for Harry to be angry at her about, and it really doesn't seem like Ginny to feel guilty about it.

I'm curious about the time frame, as well. If Harry and Ron are fully qualified Aurors, the story would presumably be taking place at least 2-3 years from the final battle, yet according to JKR, Ginny retires from professional Quidditch when she has James, 6 years out from the final battle (he is at least 12 in the epilogue). That'd mean that she'd only have 2-3 years as a professional player before falling pregnant and quitting - it hardly sounds like the career of a 'celebrated player.'

All that said (and yes, I know I've mainly nitpicked and criticised, but I suspect you'll get enough 'ZOMG fantastic story!!!!' reviews further down the track), I have enjoyed the story, and I look forward to reading the rest of it.



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.09.21 - 08:46AM Title: Part I

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I liked this and I can't wait for the next bit! Everyone is in character and that's half way to a good story IMO - I get distracted when they are all OOC for no good reason. You set up a nice plot too, bit of angst, some lovely shivery romance stuff. Very cool :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you seemed to think that everyone was in character--not always the easiest thing to do at times. Thanks for reading!




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