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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.03.28 - 11:57PM Title: Element the First: Water

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Intriguing idea, using the Chamber of Secrets for the good of the whole school. I've only seen it to be used for Harry or his closest friends. I do have to say, I can't imagine Hermione and Ron being made Head Boy and Girl for this upcoming year. If they'd finished school on time, possibly, but they weren't there the previous year and have no idea what happened to the students. I think Ginny would be the perfect head girl, but it should at least be from her year. Sorry for the little rant - that's a pet peeve of mine. I do like the custom broom for him - he would appreciate that! The sexy howler at the funeral was a great idea - Fred would have loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! In defense of Ron and Hermione as heads, I wrote this shortly after reading Deathly Hallows and hadn't given a lot of thought to what the students had gone through the previous year. It is a point well made, and I would probably choose someone else if I was writing it now. - gd



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 10:21PM Title: Element the First: Water

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I like this beginning.
Running to the next!

Author's Response: I hope you like the rest as well! :-)



Reviewer: Lizzie_Harrison Signed Date: 2007.10.28 - 12:29PM Title: Element the First: Water

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Neat idea!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks - I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic as well.



Reviewer: hopeless romantic Signed Date: 2007.10.27 - 01:25PM Title: Element the First: Water

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What a great start! I loved the part about the love note "Howler." Only George would see that as a prank sent from Heaven! :D I was feeling embarassed for Harry and cracked up at George's reaction. I've spent a lot of time thinking about how George would never recover from the loss of his closest friend--I'm glad you could repair something I thought was permanently broken.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! In honesty, I was inspired to include the scene with George by many excellent stories on SIYE that go into much further depth about how he deals with the loss. It does serve the purpose of bridging the gap from DH to this fic. Also, George will make another appearance before we're done :-)



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.10.24 - 03:57AM Title: Element the First: Water

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A different approach to the challenge...Turn the most evil and foreboding part of Hogwarts into a recreation area for muggles and purebloods. If there is a hell Tom is turning in his firey grave right about now!

Personally, I love it!

Darian

Author's Response: Thanks, that was the idea. And Tom won't be the only one turning in his grave, as ch 2 will reveal




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