Reviews For Grey Maiden V: Sacrifice
Reviewer: calgary Signed Date: 2009.11.01 - 12:33PM Title: Chapter 15: Turning Point
Great chapter! Your writing has impressed me before., but I really liked the maturity you've shown with your narrative. I liked those conversations between Harry and Ron. Also the one with Peter and Luna. Your portrayal of Knott is really fascinating. I'm fascinated by him to begin with. One of these characters by Rowling that could be anything.
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2009.11.01 - 11:12AM Title: Chapter 15: Turning Point
I still say Madame Bones wil make a better minister.....
Reviewer: Shadow Knight Signed Date: 2009.11.01 - 09:22AM Title: Chapter 15: Turning Point
Glad to see this project continuing on. Are we going to get a Ginny POV at all?
Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2009.11.01 - 08:15AM Title: Chapter 15: Turning Point
I'm assuming. because you are still posting here, that Ginny returns to Harry's side in the not too distant future.
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2009.09.14 - 11:13PM Title: Chapter 14: Choices
Reviewer: rrauch Signed Date: 2009.09.11 - 03:23PM Title: Prologue: Vengeance
I have to tell you I was more than a little concerned of your bringing Harry in to the slytherin world. I however found your story writing to be very well thought out and balanced. You took the time to develop each character with their own personality inside of your stories. I especially liked how you brought out Luna. I personally have always been facinated to see another side of here apart from JK's stories. I have found myself diving more and more in to your plot. The best I can say about your story is that everything fits together. Most authors develop plots somewhere within the confines of JK's work. You have gone outside the boundaries and excelled. Thank you for your work and I eagerly await your next story. If you ever need beta help I would more than volunteer. However the Beta's you currently have are obviously outstanding adn you probably shouldn't mess with that. have a good Day.
Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2009.09.07 - 09:03PM Title: Chapter 14: Choices
Thank you for moving forward with this tale....I too miss Ginny...and can see that everything is going to get quite intense.
Reviewer: wvchemteach Signed Date: 2009.09.06 - 08:09PM Title: Chapter 14: Choices
I just wanted to take a moment and say I'm absolutely in awe of the restructuring you've done with the Harry Potter Universe... I've not seen this attention to detail since the Unbroken Universe. I love the way you've portrayed a Slytherin!Harry without him losing all his Gryffindor qualities that we know and love from canon. I like the parallels to canon you have... but at the same time I love many of the divergences as well.
Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2009.09.06 - 05:55PM Title: Chapter 14: Choices
Thanks for this chapter, its good to see things moving along. Whither Ginny?
Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2009.09.06 - 01:58PM Title: Chapter 14: Choices
You have set up Giselle as an interesting and questionable character. Looking forward to seeing which side she really is on. You have spent a good deal of this chapter with Aiden Greengrass and his attempts to gain support for Harry. It doesn't appear Voldemort got much idea of Harry's abilities from this failed attempt to capture/kill Harry at Hogsmead. Will he go for a bigger attack next time? And will Harry become too self absorbed blaming his presence for the injuries and deaths.
Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2009.09.05 - 11:30PM Title: Chapter 13: Waking Leo
OK...re-reading this before going to the new chapter. I hate the rift with Ginny, as well I should...but want to say what a powerful chapter this is. Now, I have to go.
Reviewer: Phx tears Signed Date: 2009.09.05 - 08:10PM Title: Chapter 14: Choices
Reviewer: pearlythepirate Signed Date: 2009.08.06 - 06:39PM Title: Chapter 13: Waking Leo
The die is cast indeed!!! Thanks for the awesome update! I can't wait to hear more from this epic series!
Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2009.07.30 - 07:41AM Title: Chapter 12: Promises to Keep
"men like Aiden Dressler believe that you could be" I thought it was Aiden Greengrass? Sorry, I know this is belated, but I went back to read the previous chapter to make sure I was up to speed before I went to read the new chapter.
Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2009.07.27 - 10:14PM Title: Chapter 13: Waking Leo
If I've read that correctly, Harry just sold out Daphane in order to gain Scrimgeour's support. Good chapter. Can' wait for an update. ~Jeff~
Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2009.07.27 - 11:06AM Title: Chapter 13: Waking Leo
So pleased and surprised to see an update. More action on the horizon. Wonderful. Looking forward to what Daphne is up to. Awesome to see Harry test the waters and take control of his destiny. Daphne would/will be proud.
Reviewer: melipy Signed Date: 2009.07.26 - 11:03PM Title: Chapter 13: Waking Leo
I love every update! Yay for updates! There was one line where Umbridge was talking, that I think you meant to write galleons and wrote dollars. Just thought I should mention that. Also, the end killed me. Poor Harry having to make decisions like that. I can't wait for more. Hopefully the next update won't take as long *wink wink*. Thanks for this one!
Reviewer: dangerousakki Signed Date: 2009.05.09 - 01:41AM Title: Prologue: Vengeance
Oh no dont tell me this story is not being continued :(
Reviewer: pearlythepirate Signed Date: 2009.01.13 - 12:41AM Title: Chapter 12: Promises to Keep
I love this series! I was shocked at the confrontation between Harry and Ginny and am anxiously awaiting a resolution! I hope there will be some nasty Umbridge moments where Harry reciprocates by totally owning her with his own awesomeness.
Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2008.11.14 - 06:01PM Title: Chapter 12: Promises to Keep
Welcome back. More, please ?