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Reviewer: electus unus Signed Date: 2010.05.06 - 12:09PM Title: Prologue: Vengeance
wheres the next update??????
Reviewer: rrauch Signed Date: 2009.09.11 - 03:23PM Title: Prologue: Vengeance
I have to tell you I was more than a little concerned of your bringing Harry in to the slytherin world. I however found your story writing to be very well thought out and balanced. You took the time to develop each character with their own personality inside of your stories. I especially liked how you brought out Luna. I personally have always been facinated to see another side of here apart from JK's stories. I have found myself diving more and more in to your plot. The best I can say about your story is that everything fits together. Most authors develop plots somewhere within the confines of JK's work. You have gone outside the boundaries and excelled. Thank you for your work and I eagerly await your next story. If you ever need beta help I would more than volunteer. However the Beta's you currently have are obviously outstanding adn you probably shouldn't mess with that. have a good Day.
Russ Rauch
Reviewer: dangerousakki Signed Date: 2009.05.09 - 01:41AM Title: Prologue: Vengeance
Oh no dont tell me this story is not being continued :(
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.12 - 01:49AM Title: Prologue: Vengeance
Well that was odd I liked it though seemed odd that we didn't know she was out doing this before maybe Ginny and Sirius have Daphne right maybe she has gone off the deep end.
