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Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.07.05 - 05:39PM Title: Decisions

A couple typos, but a nice chapter.
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Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.03 - 04:43PM Title: Decisions

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Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 09:14PM Title: Decisions

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That was a nice chat.

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Reviewer: afpease Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 12:51PM Title: Decisions

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Still keeping with the Harry POV, I see, and still doing well with it.

I was initially a little disappointed in how slowly you have the H/G connection re-establish itself, but on reflection, you CAN make a case for grief and recovery taking precedence over intimacy and passion. At least you don't have Ginny still being angry with Harry.

Harry's little conversation with Hermione is nice - he definitely would be very welcoming of R/H finally getting together, and the mention of the mid-battle snog is perfect.

I like the little bit of introspection where Harry thinks about his career. I was actually a little surprised that JKR gave no indication that Harry might have played Quidditch - I would have thought he'd at least consider that path.

I also liked the little bit about Andromeda and Teddy - that Harry had offered to take Teddy on full-time. A believable but ill-thought out offer - part of Harry whole "saving people" thing. Andromeda does the right thing in refusing - Teddy IS the only family she has left.

Kingsley's personal letter to Harry concerning the ball was, I think, a requirement. Harry does tend to avoid the spotlight, and it's good for Kingsley to show him that this is the right way to move forward with the least amount of fuss. There's no way Harry can avoid being a public figure, but maybe he can start setting limits on his exposure.

The H/G ball conversation is kind of cute, especially coming after George starts to behave like a twin again, AND with basically the whole family listening in. Good on Harry that he's starting to act like the 18 year old man that defeated old Voldy, especially when it come to his love life!

I look forward to the next chapter - thank you!




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