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Reviewer: Defender Signed Date: 2008.08.16 - 11:36PM Title: Plans

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LOL, McGonagall was great in the end...love it! I like Cho's help in this chapter too. Great job! Thanks for your hard work on this story...it really shows in the quality.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.07.05 - 08:01PM Title: Plans

The gazebo was just perfect!



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.03 - 04:48PM Title: Plans

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ah how sweet! Keep on writing!
Cheers!



Reviewer: pokecharm Signed Date: 2007.11.13 - 11:26AM Title: Plans

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very sweet story overall :)



Reviewer: Alas123623 Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 08:28PM Title: Plans

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Awsome! Seriously, I am a big reader of this time period, and i have not yet read a story as good as yours. Wonderful job!!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 05:25PM Title: Plans

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lol its nice to see them work out how to get back int he swing of things and now ginny has put a little stop on the kids for a while and that is fine.....kutgw



Reviewer: Littletom45 Signed Date: 2007.11.11 - 11:48PM Title: Plans

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This is another great story. You really are talented. I really enjoyed that tough with Cho. I was also floored with the P.S. in your note back to him.



Reviewer: Rogue28 Signed Date: 2007.11.11 - 09:53PM Title: Plans

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Wow, this is a truly beautiful story. Can't wait to read more. Absolutly adore the proposal. It was impromptu and yet flowed very well. Loved how you created closure between Harry and Cho.



Reviewer: maz Signed Date: 2007.11.11 - 01:08PM Title: Plans

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Wow! This is absolutely amazing! I love the way you've put Cho into the story without any conflicts between her and Ginny. And the way you've bought Harry and Ginny back together is brilliant! Really steady story, update soon plz! luv, maz



Reviewer: christopher Signed Date: 2007.11.11 - 03:24AM Title: Plans

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Simply a delightful story. Delicious to read, well crafted. Thank you.



Reviewer: Nol_Potter Signed Date: 2007.11.10 - 11:56PM Title: Plans

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were well writen. i loved how you had Cho and Harry come to a great understanding. it is a rare thing in life when to poeple who have loved can come toghter after words in friend ship. i look forward to reading the next chapter.


thanks Nol_Potter



Reviewer: sweetdreamer285 Signed Date: 2007.11.10 - 12:37AM Title: Plans

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Yay, Cho's in the story! And not as a (what do they call them?) home-wrecker. It made me smile in a way that made my cheeks sore afterwards. ^_^ Love your story, hope to see more!



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 11:52PM Title: Plans

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This was beautiful!

Update soon, please!



Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 11:37PM Title: Plans

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Is Ginny crazy?!?

Leave Ron and Hermione at home! They had their time alone with Harry. it is her turn to have him to herself now and Harry's turn to be in an exclusive, loving relationship. He has belonged to the world for so long, he - and Ginny - deserve an opportunity to not have to share with anyone.



Reviewer: jeannet Anonymous Date: 2007.11.09 - 11:36PM Title: Plans

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A great 5 chapters. My favorite line was from Ginny to Hermione, "so how about those sleeping arrangements", and the Gazebo bit was perfect and almost, I do only mean almost had me feeling sorry for Cho. Great fic, and I look forward to more. J. 5 chapters earn you 5 O+++++++++++++,s.



Reviewer: MarissaBrienne Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 09:45PM Title: Plans

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hey, just wanted to let you know that I really like your story so far. I'm really looking forward to you updating. I really like the plot && it seems realistic, not too out there, lol. I wish you the best of luck wit hthe story. At first i was a little shocked with the whole Cho making the engagemnt ring thing. But then I got to thiking about it, and it sorta puts a finality on the whole Cho-Harry relationship, something many HarryCho shippers need so they can move on! hahaha.



Reviewer: ReneeGinSoftie Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 07:40PM Title: Plans

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this is awesome keep it up update soon!!!



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 05:10PM Title: Plans

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Perfect story, felt like you're moving on from were book 7 left of.
Hope more people wil find your story 'cause I think you do deserve more recognition.
I'll keep following this one. Thanx C



Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 04:49PM Title: Plans

Perfect, just sat down and read the whole thing - I hope you are going to write the "around the world with Potter and his entourage" story, I like your take on our fair couple and their interplay – very special the way you have it.

At first when I read Cho being the jewelers apprentice at the fair I kind of groaned but I very much liked the dialogue and her still wanting but knowing it’s no good attitude. I wonder though, would any woman really appreciate a ring made by an ex?

Would she take it as a reminder of someone else who got there first or would she feel victorious in that she got there last?

Anyway – great writing, a few typos and left our words but overall - perfect



Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 04:46PM Title: Plans

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Perfect, just sat down and read the whole thing - I hope you are going to write the "around the world with Potter and his entourage" story, I like your take on our fair couple and their interplay – very special the way you have it.

At first when I read Cho being the jewelers apprentice at the fair I kind of groaned but I very much liked the interplay and her still wanting but knowing it no good attitude. I wonder though, would any woman really appreciate a ring made by an ex?

Would she take it as a reminder of someone else who got there first or would she fell victorious in that she got there last?

Anyway – great writing, a few typos and left our words but overall - perfect




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