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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 03:49AM Title: Chapter 5: Home

thank you for writing this story



Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 03:36AM Title: Chapter 4: Tangled

Snivellus is also dead g
besides Quirrel, yippee



Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 03:11AM Title: Chapter 3: Frosty

loving this



Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 02:48AM Title: Chapter 2: Royal Gifts

yes, Sirius is free and hopefully, Harry will not fully trust Dumbledork



Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 01:51AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again

i love time travel story coz I know Harry will treat Ginny better than in canon. I don't have a problem with the ferret being dead though I wish the hateful annoying bookworm will die too in your story but sadly for me, I think you'll not do it



Reviewer: Geminiroyalty Signed Date: 2020.09.12 - 11:20AM Title: Chapter 5: Home

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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 09:46PM Title: Chapter 5: Home

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Very cool ride...kutgw



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 09:37PM Title: Chapter 4: Tangled

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Well at lease the hat stoped harry before he started...kutgw



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 09:08PM Title: Chapter 3: Frosty

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Well itís less of an adventure when you know where the prizes are...kutgw



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 08:25PM Title: Chapter 2: Royal Gifts

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Oh you could have had a lot more fun with shape there, and well deserved too....kutgw



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 07:43PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again

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Well i think you having it a little jumpy but over all very fun start and i cant wait to see what you do from here...kutgw



Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 09:02AM Title: Chapter 5: Home

All told, I enjoyed this fic.



Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 08:40AM Title: Chapter 4: Tangled

And the hat takes charge, Snape and Quirrel bite the dust (or more to the point get bitten), Kreacher is awesome, and this story rocks.



Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 08:23AM Title: Chapter 3: Frosty

I don't think I've seen that solution for the potion the locket was in before, and I've seen several.



Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 08:09AM Title: Chapter 2: Royal Gifts

Frolicking in the flowers... Bwa ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!



Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 07:45AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again

I can see the similarities to NoFP, but you've certainly taken it a different direction. I see that your last login was 2013 so you probably won't read this. Nevertheless, I think this story needs more reviews.



Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2015.01.12 - 06:10AM Title: Chapter 5: Home

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Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.02.25 - 02:18AM Title: Chapter 5: Home

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This was stunning loved it h hated it..at the same time. Harry at the beginning of chapter 1 was truly scary.
I appreciated the fiery red hair at the end, just to be sure he's with Ginny.
Tricia



Reviewer: Mongo Signed Date: 2009.06.05 - 08:28PM Title: Chapter 2: Royal Gifts

Hello, I was just re-reading this story and noticed that the second half of chapter two is missing. You may want to re-upload the chapter, as right now without the information from the second half of the chapter, the next chapter makes little sense.

Author's Response: There was a change made in the HTML parsing engine, and it apparently decided it no longer cared for the tags that framed the Daily Prophet excerpt. Thanks for pointing it out to me, I\'ve fixed it. Now I wonder how many other chapters in other stories are broken...



Reviewer: alzzu Signed Date: 2008.05.17 - 06:36AM Title: Chapter 5: Home

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