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Reviews For Natural Order
Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 03:49AM Title: Chapter 5: Home thank you for writing this story Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 03:36AM Title: Chapter 4: Tangled Snivellus is also dead g Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 02:48AM Title: Chapter 2: Royal Gifts yes, Sirius is free and hopefully, Harry will not fully trust Dumbledork Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 01:51AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again i love time travel story coz I know Harry will treat Ginny better than in canon. I don't have a problem with the ferret being dead though I wish the hateful annoying bookworm will die too in your story but sadly for me, I think you'll not do it Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 09:46PM Title: Chapter 5: Home Very cool ride...kutgw Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 09:37PM Title: Chapter 4: Tangled Well at lease the hat stoped harry before he started...kutgw Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 09:08PM Title: Chapter 3: Frosty Well it’s less of an adventure when you know where the prizes are...kutgw Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 08:25PM Title: Chapter 2: Royal Gifts Oh you could have had a lot more fun with shape there, and well deserved too....kutgw Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 07:43PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again Well i think you having it a little jumpy but over all very fun start and i cant wait to see what you do from here...kutgw Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 09:02AM Title: Chapter 5: Home All told, I enjoyed this fic. Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 08:40AM Title: Chapter 4: Tangled And the hat takes charge, Snape and Quirrel bite the dust (or more to the point get bitten), Kreacher is awesome, and this story rocks. Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 08:23AM Title: Chapter 3: Frosty I don't think I've seen that solution for the potion the locket was in before, and I've seen several. Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 08:09AM Title: Chapter 2: Royal Gifts Frolicking in the flowers... Bwa ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!!! Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 07:45AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again I can see the similarities to NoFP, but you've certainly taken it a different direction. I see that your last login was 2013 so you probably won't read this. Nevertheless, I think this story needs more reviews. Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.02.25 - 02:18AM Title: Chapter 5: Home This was stunning loved it h hated it..at the same time. Harry at the beginning of chapter 1 was truly scary. Reviewer: Mongo Signed Date: 2009.06.05 - 08:28PM Title: Chapter 2: Royal Gifts Hello, I was just re-reading this story and noticed that the second half of chapter two is missing. You may want to re-upload the chapter, as right now without the information from the second half of the chapter, the next chapter makes little sense. | |||||||
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