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SIYE Time:16:06 on 10th May 2021

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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2021.04.21 - 01:51AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again

i love time travel story coz I know Harry will treat Ginny better than in canon. I don't have a problem with the ferret being dead though I wish the hateful annoying bookworm will die too in your story but sadly for me, I think you'll not do it



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.10.22 - 07:43PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again

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Well i think you having it a little jumpy but over all very fun start and i cant wait to see what you do from here...kutgw



Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2019.10.17 - 07:45AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again

I can see the similarities to NoFP, but you've certainly taken it a different direction. I see that your last login was 2013 so you probably won't read this. Nevertheless, I think this story needs more reviews.



Reviewer: TRV Signed Date: 2008.01.10 - 12:24PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again

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Harry's rather sadistic in this story don't you think? Slow painful death for Voldy... Bye bye Malfoy you're in the way (and i'll make sure you won't kill Ginny again by killing you)...
I'd say it's rather... interesting, i guess. Evil Harry saves the world...
meh might be fun ^^

Author's Response: Hopefully you read through to the end of Ch5, where the (extended) A/N was inserted due to the reactions this received when it first posted at PSnet during SIYE's technical woes. There were a lot of comments in there since so many people focused on how sick Harry was in Ch1, but few seemed to think about the why of it all. At any rate, I hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.



Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2008.01.09 - 06:22PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello Again

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I enjoyed the cruelty to Voldemort at the beginning.
I also liked the way this Harry is willing to kill the Death Eaters and look forward to him killing more of them. That's truthfully the only way to deal with terrorists.

Author's Response: Cruelty and Compassion are easily mixed in so many fun ways. Glad you enjoyed the start of this little escapade...




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