Reviews For Trapped
Reviewer: skeet500 Signed Date: 2008.05.04 - 09:53PM Title: Chapter 1
i thought that that was really good, incredible for having been written in one sitting, i wish that i could do that. i can never finish a story. it was pretty funny, and i really wish that it had been a little longer to be truthful.
Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2008.03.14 - 02:51AM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good story on the whole, but... what on earth is a corn booth? There were another couple of logical problems with your story, too; for instance, doesn't the lift have an escape hatch? After all, they're only stuck between the first and second floors...
Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2008.03.08 - 01:50AM Title: Chapter 1
Judged for competition.
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.03.05 - 12:50PM Title: Chapter 1
Now how do you suppose Harry arranged to break the elevator that way? I read this with the strong opinion that he did somehow arrange the situation. The firewhisky was just a bit too convenient, and his rationalizations seemed to be rehearsed. He wanted it all to happen, but then was surprised with Ginny's reaction in the end. I wasn't expecting it either, but it was very entertaining. I'm trying to picture the next scene. This was a very nice read. Thank you. Eric B.
Reviewer: Dianne Signed Date: 2008.02.20 - 06:25PM Title: Chapter 1
MMM, that corn sounds marvelous! It was very appropriate for Harry and Ginny to get the idea to look for leather goods for Charlie as well in London. Getting caught on a lift was very original and clever too. Nice use of the song for your story. Well done. I appreciated reading your story.
Reviewer: Tearlit Signed Date: 2008.02.18 - 10:53PM Title: Chapter 1
The ending *was* cheesy, Zen, but just the very last line by Ginny, however it was quite good for 5:30am! I liked the story overall but Harry seemed...a little bit OOC. At times he sounded more like Hermione, what with his calm reasoning skills and "educational experience." Also...they were drunk enough to ramble and spill out the things they hadn't been able to say sober, but they didn't act otherwise like they had had anything to drink.
Reviewer: Mojomig Signed Date: 2008.02.18 - 09:42AM Title: Chapter 1
Imouto, it's not really my kind of thing but it's nice enough. Corn sellers in the UK? Not that I've ever seen. And Harry took the whisky from his career bag, not his carrier bag!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.02.16 - 03:34PM Title: Chapter 1
its always amazing how a little fate plays a big role...kutgw
Reviewer: Steven Carnell Signed Date: 2008.02.16 - 04:42AM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Penny Flamel Signed Date: 2008.02.16 - 01:28AM Title: Chapter 1
It was great, I absolutely loved it. Very original, and very interesting. The accidental kiss was a great touch, not at all cheesy. ^_^ Great job!
Reviewer: ReneeGinSoftie Signed Date: 2008.02.15 - 03:23PM Title: Chapter 1
i love it zen!!!!
Reviewer: gejufan Signed Date: 2008.02.15 - 12:41PM Title: Chapter 1
i think i'm inlove with this challenge. such amazing stories. this is defintly one of them