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Reviews For Taking the Train

Reviewer: potslicker Signed Date: 2008.05.18 - 11:45AM Title: Us


I loved you ending, WOW, I could not have done it better or improved either.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2008.05.18 - 11:08AM Title: Us


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Reviewer: jennyelf Signed Date: 2008.05.18 - 10:41AM Title: Us


I love the ending. This was a great story. I can see how you wanted to finish it here rather than at the end of last chapter.

Author's Response: I am glad this chapter worked - as I posted, I was a little uncertain about it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Zapatorf Signed Date: 2008.05.18 - 10:23AM Title: Us


I can't seem to find the proper words.... I've actually been having that particular problem a lot lately. Rest assured, this does make for a good finish.

Author's Response: Thanks Zap! I am glad the finish didn't seem wimpy - that was my fear.

Reviewer: Pooky Anonymous Date: 2008.05.18 - 10:11AM Title: Us


Nice finish, Mel! Great story even though it was a difficult journey! I can't wait to read more of your works!

Chris (Pooky)

Author's Response: Thanks Chris - yes, a difficult journey, but one I really enjoyed writing, even though I don't think Harry would ever had made this decision (contrast this to A Kiss Before Dying - and he is going back to King's Cross in the sequel to that - we will see how different his thought process is then.) - Mel

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