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Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.11.17 - 07:10PM Title: A Snowy Evening.

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I'd never expected Aunt Muriel to react that way!



Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2008.03.12 - 01:37AM Title: A Snowy Evening.

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Judged for competition.

Interesting story. So you said that you wrote this as AU because the challenge parameters originally stated that this had to be the winter _right_ after HBP. Well, don't worry about the misunderstanding -- after all, several writers had their challenge fics take place during the winter Harry is 17, so your fic does fit right in.

The tricky thing about this fic is for Harry to find ways to prevent Ginny from leaving magically. It was easy to stop Ginny from Apparating, as you point out that Ginny is only 16, but the Knight Bus? You are actually the second writer I've read so far to have her consider taking the Knight Bus. In both that fic and yours, Harry stops her essentially by snogging her senseless.

The ending is rather funny. Many of the entrants mention Muriel, but yours takes the cake. LOL!

Overall, great job, and good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Thanx - I had lots of fun writing this!



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.03.05 - 04:16PM Title: A Snowy Evening.

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You provided us with some very interesting conversation and characterizations. Harry and Ginny's moods both seemed to change frequently as the story progressed, but it added to the progressive scene we were witnessing. I don't think that I've seen Harry as agressive before, nor Ginny as submissive to his charms. It all built to a good grand finale with an unexpected follow through. I really enjoyed it. Thanks. Eric B.

Author's Response: Thanx 4 reviewing :)



Reviewer: Dianne Signed Date: 2008.02.20 - 06:17PM Title: A Snowy Evening.

Nice story! I enjoyed the angst and fluff as well. I like the fact that Ginny thought of the Knight Bus because as a witch, it would be a viable means of transport for one who is stranded, so good job there. Congratulations on your first challenge story, you did very well. You used the song very effectively to build your plot. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanx 4 reviewing - I couldn't help myself, putting the Knight Bus in there, it would have annoyed me 4 weeks if I hadn't.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2008.02.20 - 03:37PM Title: A Snowy Evening.

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I really enjoyed this. I thought that Harry, maybe was a bit too pushy in his attempts to get her to stay, but it's also a change from him being noble and not putting himself first. I would love to know what was said after Aunt Muriels blunt, but very accurate comments!

Author's Response: MayB I could do another chapter in which we C the aftermath of Great Aunt Muriel's tongue... An idea, @ Ny rate. Fair point with Harry's efforts 2 get Ginny 2 stay, but theyR in a war and the wine might have loosened his tongue a little....



Reviewer: Blossomlily Signed Date: 2008.02.20 - 12:47AM Title: A Snowy Evening.

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I think that's a superb entry to the challenge... It's going to be quite tough to beat that one. Yes, there isn't a very major plot, but you'll get loads of points for the characterization, the atmosphere, and of course, the fluff. I'm quite delighted by the alternative reaction to the break up you wrote for Ginny - in canon, she's unbelievably understanding and unselfish about the whole break-up thing, and in most fanfictions I've read about how she's annoyingly childish and tries to drag Harry back to her. But this reaction is extremely realistic and just like her. Although it'd have been quite funny if the twins had set up the whole thing of their own volition, I'm quite happy that Ginny took the initiative to get her way... indirectly. I'm glad you managed to keep them shy and distant in the beginning and then slowly turning back their old selves. Both of them are very much in character and believable. One major plus-point in your story is that it really captures the mood of the theme. You kept the theme alive and real throughout - it's just right. I think the judges (or whoever) will really like this story. I'm adding this to my favourites... Good luck!




Author's Response: Thanx - I put a lot of 4t in2 the atmosphere in this and I'm glad it paid off!



Reviewer: marybibik Signed Date: 2008.02.19 - 09:23PM Title: A Snowy Evening.

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That was fantastic! It was the best for the challenge put out so far in my opinion. I really enjoyed it, and how the song was incorporated into it. Nice job, and good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Thanx



Reviewer: dreamer2 Signed Date: 2008.02.19 - 04:54PM Title: A Snowy Evening.

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this is a very cute story and how i would have liked to see our couple get it together. very well thought out and written.

thanks for posting :)

Author's Response: Thanx 4 reviewing :)



Reviewer: ritaskeeta Signed Date: 2008.02.19 - 12:40PM Title: A Snowy Evening.

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cutee , good job

Author's Response: Glad U liked it!



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2008.02.19 - 09:21AM Title: A Snowy Evening.

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well done!

Author's Response: Thanx :D




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