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Reviewer: GinervaMollyWeasley Signed Date: 2013.10.26 - 12:24AM Title: Chapter 1
This was truly, very amazing. I was hooked the whole time and I really loved how you made it magical, with their little connection and how close to canon the characters were.
Amazing job.
~GMW
Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2010.04.04 - 02:02AM Title: Chapter 1
"You've beaten the bad guy, and gotten the girl, Harry. What does our hero do now? What's next?"
"The happily ever after."
i think one of the best lines i have ever read, i was waiting for him to say something else, but that answer was so shockingly simple and perfect. especially for harry potter, and so i started tearing.
great story.
Reviewer: Joan Glover Signed Date: 2009.08.07 - 08:29PM Title: Chapter 1
Marvelous! I didn't see the proposal coming until you mentioned the box she might find. Foolish me, I thought he was after only a shag, and I've known this song for longer than I'll own up to. Thank you.
Reviewer: Joan Glover Signed Date: 2009.08.07 - 08:29PM Title: Chapter 1
Marvelous! I didn't see the proposal coming until you mentioned the box she might find. Foolish me, I thought he was after only a shag, and I've known this song for longer than I'll own up to. Thank you.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.07.18 - 10:33AM Title: Chapter 1
aww, major sugar hit alert
loved it
Reviewer: ReisMacleod Signed Date: 2009.03.25 - 12:14AM Title: Chapter 1
Very well written, VERY well written, nicely done.
Author's Response: Well, thank you!
Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2008.12.21 - 04:48PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: CyanGreenBreath Signed Date: 2008.10.16 - 07:00PM Title: Chapter 1
A great little story, I may not have had the viscious presence of mind to really dealve into it systemactically, but there was nothing that stood out as being out of place or incorect. I thought it was a really great way to tie in that challange that it was too and your other story. This one, while it could have stood alone, was abosolutely solid next to VV&D. I loved it as a missing moment companion piece. I hope it makes it into VV&D when that time comes. It's tricky to try and write a loveing / surprise scene when your characters have powers of partial omniscience over each other. I liked a lot that Harry was not able to completely block Ginny's understanding of his feelings or thoughts, and that it occured to her that it might be a bit out of place, a tricky concept beautifully done. Hopefully I never have to write a scene like that. Anyway great work here, and I like your other story as well, keep writting please, and many thanks for your strong efforts,
Author's Response: It actually fits a bit more in the Veil of Shadows universe, rather than the VVD one. This is a looooooong way off in the latter. And after all - I could have something completely different in mind there. :D
It was a fun little story to write, though. Thanks for the review! - Patrick
Reviewer: Octavian Signed Date: 2008.05.06 - 03:07PM Title: Chapter 1
I truely do love your material i mean you just never know what your going get
and i just have to say that this is truely remarkable
congrats
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the review! - Patrick
Reviewer: MyGinevra Signed Date: 2008.03.22 - 10:33PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, so romantic! This one truly deserved the award it got. I loved it.
--Peter
Author's Response: Peter, coming from you, man, that means everything. Thanks. - Patrick
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2008.03.22 - 09:27PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful--I can't think of anything I'd change.
Author's Response: I can think of a few, but then, every author is his own worst enemy, they say. Thanks for the review! - Patrick
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2008.03.20 - 07:35PM Title: Chapter 1
Really, really wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! - Patrick
Reviewer: Francheesecake Signed Date: 2008.03.20 - 07:20PM Title: Chapter 1
Awwww!!!! that was amazing!!! i love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! - Patrick
Reviewer: hopeless romantic Signed Date: 2008.03.17 - 02:02PM Title: Chapter 1
That was absolutely wonderful! :)
Author's Response: Well, thank you! - Patrick
Reviewer: masoomlarki Signed Date: 2008.03.17 - 09:33AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww I see why this won
Author's Response:
Reviewer: masoomlarki Signed Date: 2008.03.17 - 09:33AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww I see why this won
Author's Response: :) Thanks for the review! - Patrick
Reviewer: God_Ginny Signed Date: 2008.03.17 - 06:49AM Title: Chapter 1
Overall, it was excellent.
I just want to say something about the proposal, the situation, the "accidental" snowstorm....It's Romance Redefined.
Author's Response: Well, thank you - that's certainly a flattering way to put it! Thanks for the review! - Patrick
Reviewer: Magdalene Rose Signed Date: 2008.03.15 - 10:47PM Title: Chapter 1
very nice!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! - Patrick
Reviewer: Sundevil6 Signed Date: 2008.03.15 - 08:07PM Title: Chapter 1
excellent just excellent
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! - Patrick
