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Reviews For Let It Snow!

Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.07.16 - 01:11PM Title: Part 1: Into the Storm

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I reckon I can see where this is going
great chapter



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.03.05 - 01:28PM Title: Part 1: Into the Storm

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I enjoyed the Quidditch scene in this especially. We see more than a few situations where the two are enjoying a romantic interlude, but placing it in just the right context makes it all the more special. This flowed well and provided a realistic picture for us. We are still left with the question of where it would take us, and that makes the multi-chapter format more useful. I'm enjoying it very much. Thanks. Eric B.

Author's Response: :)



Reviewer: Zerotactics Signed Date: 2008.02.29 - 01:29AM Title: Part 1: Into the Storm

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Excellent :) I always enjoy reading your stories, Phil. Romantic, and a nice cliffhanger. I take it there are going to be more installments? Looking forward to it.

-Chris

Author's Response: Thanks Chris, honored that you're looking at my stuff when I'm years behind in yours! I wanted to get this banged out, and it ate all of my writing time. I'll get you your stuff soon. Thanks so much for the review!



Reviewer: Dianne Signed Date: 2008.02.28 - 04:04PM Title: Part 1: Into the Storm

Lurve the Shakespeare quote at the beginning! Goes well with the feel of the story. The names of your characters were very clever, Alda Seenyl, I thought of her as retiring because she's senile. Did you intend that? It was great. Also, Stratta Storm. So clever for the weather person. I love those little extras when people do them. The meal Harry and Ginny had was very romantic and I'd imagine after the life Harry up to the war's end, that dishes would seem relaxing to him. I really liked you story very much!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad that you caught the names and liked the quote. I hope you enjoy parts two and three!



Reviewer: Carmen Signed Date: 2008.02.27 - 09:58PM Title: Part 1: Into the Storm

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Ah..come on!
Just HAD to leave us with a cliffy, didn't ya, quinn?
Not that I really mind!

Author's Response: Yes, I did! Hope you enjoy the rest!



Reviewer: xxhgxx Signed Date: 2008.02.27 - 09:01PM Title: Part 1: Into the Storm

I really like this, I think its very cute.
However, I don't exactly get what it has to do with the whole challenge promt. Don't get me wrong, I love it, and maybe I'm just missing something, but...
I don't know. It seems like the story that goes along with the challenge should come after Ginny goes to try out, know what I mean?
Whatevs, if I'm totally missing the point ignore all these ramblings. Either way, I love it. It's great writing!

Author's Response: I appreciate the complements! Hopefully parts two and three explain things!




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