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Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.02.29 - 12:00PM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
This is hysterical. I love it. Had me laughing out loud. Very, very funny.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.07.16 - 01:18PM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
fantastic ending
loved it!
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.04.27 - 04:57PM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
Screamingly funny, very enjoyable, Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! This was a fun one to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: carolquin Signed Date: 2008.03.08 - 12:51PM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
this story is being reviewed for judging purposes...
i enjoyed this a lot! i would like to think that JK would approve of the way Ginny made it on to the Harpies.
story was well written and flowed nicely. it was a good read.
good luck in the competition.
Author's Response: Thanks! I guess I'd have to say that Ginny's career as a professional Chaser left me a bit wanting. It's very easy, isn't it? I wanted to flesh it out a bit. Thanks for taking the time to judge the awesome amount of entries in the contest, and especially for taking a few extra minutes to review!
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.03.05 - 01:37PM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
I'm glad that we got your chapters in before the deadline. This was great. I loved how you set up the nice atmosphere for them, their creative rationalizations and the surprising ending. I don't know if Vince Lomabardi or Tom Landry ever had a similar experience with their prospects. This was very entertaining. Thanks. Eric B.
Author's Response: I'm very nearly certain that this is how all professional tryouts are handled. Glad you liked it, and I especially appreciate that you took the time to review both parts!
Reviewer: pokecharm Signed Date: 2008.03.03 - 01:00PM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
very sweet story :) not at all what I expected!
Author's Response: Thanks! That is, after all, part of what I was going for! Thanks for the review,
Reviewer: xxhgxx Signed Date: 2008.03.01 - 07:17PM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
Haha woww this makes so much more sense now. So I guess ignore my nonsensical ramblings and just listen to this review. Love it times ten! This just seems so perfect. I can totally see Gwenog being like that, and Ginny and Harry's reactions to being caught in such a compromising situation seem totally realistic. Its great!
Author's Response: Thanks! Having everybody in character is very important to me, so that is a high compliment. Thanks for the second review!
Reviewer: Dianne Signed Date: 2008.03.01 - 01:22PM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
Cool, thanks for letting us off the cliff! I read the first chapter some days ago and was wondering what was going to happen. Now I know why you had the quote at the beginning 'most plain girls are virtuous because of scarcity of opportunity to be otherwise.' The Holyhead Harpies were looking for someone with gusto, not a prude. Neat concept. It was clever to have the Muggles think the pitch was a toothpaste factory and for the Floo to have hours giving them a reason to be stuck. I really liked your conclusion very much, thanks for sharing it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! To be honest, this was one of those 'there's no way I'm going to be able to finish this' months. I had the outline done about two weeks before the deadline, and then 'ENTER REAL LIFE STAGE RIGHT'. Ah well, I'm glad I finishes and that you found the conclusion satisfying. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2008.03.01 - 06:23AM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
hilariously good, funny and plain wel written
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it! I really appreciate the review.
Reviewer: ginny_weasley_fan53 Signed Date: 2008.03.01 - 03:13AM Title: Part 2: Opportunity & Part3: A Good Impression
Hello
That was a really good story. I loved the way you used the challenge, I have read a lot of challenges where it is ginny and harry in a house and one is trying to leave, but you put a twist in it by making the place a quidditch stadium, making the reason because Ginny had a try-out or she though he did, and I loved the whole getting caught and then being told she would fit right in because she got caught with her boyfriend lol. That was a really good take and I LOVED reading it.
GREAT JOB!
Good luch in the competition!
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Jessie(ginny_weasley_fan53)
< i>Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad that the Quidditch stadium angle didn't occur to more people. In conversation with some folks since I posted, I've found out that the new setting was a bit confusing. Just because I know that Gwenog's office was farther up the corridor and not connected to the stadium's lobby doesn't mean the reader does! Still, I'm glad the setting worked for you. Thanks!
