|
Reviewer: potionsprofessor Signed Date: 2008.05.06 - 01:45PM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
the story is hysterical! I am really enjoying it. You have done a good job of making it funny while still keeping as close to their "true" personalities" as possible!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: kingbobrules Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 02:34PM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
Funny :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 01:44PM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
HAHAHAHAHA! Knickers running away crying in the middle of the Common Room. LMAO! Brilliant! Girls asking for knickers back because they have run out! Hahahahaha! Harry telling Ron not to send him any of his undies if he told him the story. Yes yes yes. Under ware are very very funny in the right situations. Knickers flying left and right. My sister came into my room asking what the hell was wrong with me, because I was laughing so hard. haha! Keep it up.
Author's Response: I did have a lot of underwear humor in this chapter, didn't I? I think its my infatuation with the word "knickers" - being an American, we just say "underwear", which is not nearly as funny, IMO. Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: elaithin Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 01:10PM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
Okay, the charmed knickers is sheer genius. Good stuff! - Patrick
Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't quite realize how much underwear humor I had in this chapter, but I am glad it made people laugh.
Reviewer: Liebe rot Haare Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 12:44PM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
This was absolutely hilarious!!! You ended it so perfectly! This entire story has just been a comedy ride! Great humor!
Reviewer: swimsocceg Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 12:38PM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
lol, that was amazing keep up the good work
Reviewer: EvieMarie Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 11:10AM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
oh my goodness. i could not stop laughing through this whole chapter! :) i love this story so much. i love how you write harry. i was scared at first you were going to make him completely clueless, but you've managed to him completely "harry". you've done a lovely job with keeping all the characters true to themselves. i particularly loved the end of this chapter, it was hilarious and adorable. thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I am happier writing a less clueless Harry as well. It seemed like a good idea at the time I started this story, but got old pretty fast. Its much better now that he and Ginny are equals again.
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 11:09AM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
Now that's funny, said the princess who would not laugh. You're going to have a hard time topping this. Although I thought "Phallic Symbols run wild" was a little too much, I loved the charmed Knickers. Makes me wonder though, if they can be charmed to flirt, can they be charmed to go the other way, you know ...chastity knickers. Might be an appropriate revenge for R/H once they realize they've been had.
And letting by-gones be by-gones, I thought Ginny back to her sweet, loving, but mischevious self in this chapter. Well done.
Author's Response: I always feel a sense of accomplishment when you like one of my chapters. This one definitely made me laugh. Love the idea of the chastity knickers - I think I may work that into the next Chapter - although I would feel a little bad keeping Harry and Ginny from the pleasures of Chapter Ten for even another second. Glad you liked Ginny here - I threw her extra apology in for you and a couple of other reviewers who thought she wasn't contrite enough yet. I like her nice too. A little sneaky, but nice.
Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 09:15AM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
Oh my life... Brilliant Chapter, I had to stop reading several times as I was laughing so hard, it was quite embarrassing really as I am at my desk :)...
Oh I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Well, I hope I didn't get you in too much trouble at work, but a little laughter never hurt anyone - most offices are too stuffy anyway, right? Glad it made you laugh!
Reviewer: hgfan1111 Signed Date: 2008.03.24 - 08:37AM Title: If you don't like sexual innuendo, Skip This Chapter!
Very funny. That's really all I have to say about it. It was clever--I can just see the crowd of short kids surrounding Harry as the tales get larger and larger. Bravo on Harry and Ginny's imaginations for coming up with those spells Harry supposedly used to charm Ginny. Although it does seem as if the whole scheme may be up now, yeah? ;) Brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks - I had fun writing this, although coming up with spells is tough! I actually think that I ones I invented would probably not been that difficult, if you compare them to some of the things various students do in the books. Yep, the scheme is up. Ginny and Harry may have a tiny bit of apologizing to do to their friends before they finally get to see Chapter 10.
