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Reviews For Blushes and Pranks

Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.05.06 - 10:22AM Title: Chapter 1: Crushes

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I really enjoyed how you've characterized both Harry and Ginny. Too often during this challenge we see them appearing to much older than they are supposed to be. Your version is true to both canon and to what we see with eleven and twevlve-year-olds. I loved Ron and Hermione's interaction, which is precisely what you would expect of them. It is especially fun knowing that they end up together one day despite their actions. It also leads to some great opportunities for Harry and Ginny to be alone together. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Thanks. Eric B.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was a focus of mine to keep Harry and Ginny in the mindset of a 12 and 11 year old respectively. While they will ultimately grow up faster than normal teenagers, they are still relatively innocent, especially Ginny as she's not yet had an interaction with the diary and I didn't want to characterize them beyond that.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.05.01 - 07:01PM Title: Chapter 1: Crushes

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I loved this story since the very beginning.

I'm so happy it go validated so quickly.

Author's Response: Glad you have enjoyed it. You got to watch it grow from just a poorly written outline to the four chapter version that exists now. I also appreciate the quick validation as I realize the people at SIYE work hard at keeping things flowing smoothly. Thanks for your help and all the time you put into bringing this story to completion.



Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2008.05.01 - 06:26PM Title: Chapter 1: Crushes

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Author's Response: Thanks for the rating. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.



Reviewer: Pooky Anonymous Date: 2008.05.01 - 02:28PM Title: Chapter 1: Crushes

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Cute, very cute! Though, I think this Harry acting just a little to exasperated at Ginny. Good job!

Chris (Pooky)

Author's Response: Maybe a little exhasperated, but the important thing to remember is that we're dealing with a 12 year old Harry that hasn't really been around Ginny very much. Add to it his annoyance at Ron for running off and already arguing with Hermione and I think it helps explain why he's so irratable and jumpy about her staring. Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it.




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