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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2020.02.12 - 04:09AM Title: Messing with Molly

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Reviewer: Ronald8472 Signed Date: 2018.01.13 - 12:47AM Title: Messing with Molly

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This was awesome. It's now among my favorite fics.



Reviewer: Silverwolfsm Signed Date: 2012.04.23 - 08:12PM Title: Messing with Molly

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Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.03.05 - 08:53PM Title: Messing with Molly

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Reviewer: Borsoka Signed Date: 2009.03.03 - 10:54AM Title: Messing with Molly

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Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2008.10.14 - 12:01PM Title: Messing with Molly

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A great ending to a great story.



Reviewer: FirePhoenix86 Signed Date: 2008.09.02 - 07:39PM Title: Messing with Molly

Awe! so cute! Loved it!



Reviewer: mutualunderstanding Signed Date: 2008.08.27 - 01:15PM Title: Messing with Molly

Awwwww, what a cute story. I love how younger Harry and Ginny were so natural with the kids after a while and how Lily and James kept arguing.
This was my favorite time travel story for the humor and romance. :]
Julie

Author's Response: Thank you!! I had a lot of fun writing it.



Reviewer: hmrpotter Signed Date: 2008.08.10 - 06:03PM Title: Messing with Molly

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Sorry, I don't usually leave chapter-by-chapter reviews. This story had me rolling in tears of laughter from beginning to end! It was hilarious!

Author's Response: I'm glad the story made you laugh - it was a lot of fun to write from my end too.



Reviewer: skeet500 Signed Date: 2008.08.07 - 07:36PM Title: Messing with Molly

the ending had a very nice twist, the whole sex ed class was completely unexpected. i thought the whole story as a whole was very cute and funny. nice work

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and that I managed a surprise at the end. thanks for the review! -Mel



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.08.06 - 08:01PM Title: Messing with Molly

I never saw this coming at all. I really enjoyed all of the humor, romance, and love in this story. It was a lot of fun to read. :-)

Author's Response: I'm glad I kept the surprise until the end. Thanks forthe review!



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.08.06 - 07:58PM Title: Messing with Molly

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I never saw this coming at all. I really enjoyed all of the humor, romance, and love in this story. It was a lot of fun to read. :-)



Reviewer: twinsmom Signed Date: 2008.08.05 - 06:06PM Title: Messing with Molly

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That was a great story idea. Well thought out and written.~

Chrsisty


Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: penny_potter Signed Date: 2008.07.30 - 01:33AM Title: Messing with Molly

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This should have gotten best overall!!
I loved it!! I have read most of the entries and this one is definatly the best!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.



Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2008.07.24 - 08:51PM Title: Messing with Molly

Great story - funny and light. Though a bit sad about "memory people". :)



Reviewer: Domino Signed Date: 2008.07.21 - 03:06AM Title: Messing with Molly

Hi

That was really interesting explanation on a time travel mystery - it interesting how quickly everyone guessed what was happening, but what I really like about the story is Harry and Ginny's reactions.

As Molly put it "...that it only took the younger two of you five minutes on a couple of broomsticks to start making googly eyes at each other and get all mushy about the thought of being able to take care of Lily and James!"

I always thought a catalyst would have started the relationship a lot sooner...well if Harry hadn't been blind, and it was fun to read the twins messing with the younger H/G, albeit it unintentionally.

Congrats on your win.

Author's Response: Thanks Domino. Your challenge idea was just great and this was a lot of fun to write. You know, a couple of reviewers mentioned how fast everyone seemed to figure out what was going on and it occurred to me that I really should add something about that - maybe a comment by the adult Harry and Ginny that the adult Hermione must have purposely added memories that would help her figure things out the fastest, or something else to show that the somewhat controlled environment made it easier for the characters to learn quickly. I may have to go back and play with that a bit. Anyway, thanks!!



Reviewer: SunDevil05 Signed Date: 2008.07.19 - 04:41PM Title: Messing with Molly

That certainly was a lot of fun to read!

I really liked this take on the challenge. It was very different from the other stories I've read and really creative.

Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I always love entering the challenges, and this one was really fun to write. -Lilyevans_Jan30



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.07.13 - 09:48AM Title: Messing with Molly

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Merlin’s saggy…what? I love your ending, and it all makes perfect sense. Of course Harry and Ginny felt that way. I halfway expected James and Lily to point out to Ron and Hermione how they should be together as well. I am a bit disappointed in the prize they had at stake. I was expecting the loser to have to de-gnome the garden while dressed as a purple dinosaur. Maybe that is more in line with Fred and/or George. Overall this was a great story and a lot of fun to read. Thanks! Eric B.

Author's Response: Purple dinosaur??? If we're going for sugary pre-school childrens' programming, I would have made the loser dress as a Wiggle. Actually, now that I think about it, the loser should have had to go with Molly to teach her sex education class. Ginny could have handled it. Harry, on the other hand. . . Thanks for all the reviews and stars! -Mel



Reviewer: sugarquill112 Signed Date: 2008.07.13 - 06:44AM Title: Messing with Molly

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This was a very good interpretation of the challenge. Yours is different from the others that I have read. I loved the entire concept and the way you used the bonus phrases. I like the way you included Fred and George into it, too, and your Lily and James are so cute. All in all, I had a very enjoyable read.

Good luck.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I had a lot of fun writing this one. -Lilyevans_Jan30



Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2008.07.04 - 02:40AM Title: Messing with Molly

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Judged for competition.

Another delightful challenge entry of yours! I always look forward to reading your challenge entries, and you definitely didn't disappoint!

I've only read a few of the entries so far. Naturally most of the others so far have a Time Turner as the mechanism for our young twins to go back to the past, but you use a Pensieve. That was a very interesting idea, as well as the idea of using italics so that we may establish which Harry and Ginny are saying what!

The kids James and Lily are characterized very well! I noticed how you mentioned your first grade child being home for the summer -- first grade, about the same age as James and Lily -- but you've already stated that you will neither confirm nor deny that James/Lily is based on your own children, so I leave it at that.

Ginny, pregnant? With Albus, presumably? (No need to explain that James/Lily being twins is not canon, since all the other entrants have to deal with that as well!)

That was a very surprising ending! And I agree with the others that I wouldn't mind seeing a Rose and Hugo version of this fic...

Overall, great job. I wish you luck in the challenge! And I hope that you and your children have a wonderful Fourth of July!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review - I always look forward to reading your thoughts. I chose the Pensieve to get the twins back in time because I really wanted to focus on Harry and Ginny's interactions with them, without having to worry about changing the future or anything. As a parent, I have to admit, this was a lot of fun to write, even if I may have incriminated my own kids a bit! Thanks! - Lilyevans_Jan30




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