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Reviewer: dseay Signed Date: 2011.04.28 - 02:54PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

Very sweet story but I hope you do go back and finish this one. I have read your other stories and you are too good of a writer not to complete something that you have the availability to turn into another work of art.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.08.01 - 02:59PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Sweet



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2010.07.04 - 11:18PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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So cuuuuute. This was such a sweet story.



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2009.10.31 - 05:06PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Really good bit of romance.

Happy to see that you have a new story started.



Reviewer: jmpnjimbob Signed Date: 2009.06.25 - 01:11PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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I think that your characterizations were spot on. It was nice to see Harry being able to be a normal teenager for once. I enjoyed Harry’s nervousness and Ginny’s flirting, it brought back many memories. I hope you continue with the story. Now I’m off to start reading your other work.



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2008.11.11 - 07:52AM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Very sweet and enjoyable. Nice to see the happiness that Harry and Ginny bring to each other. I hope that you have the opportunity to write more of this.



Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2008.08.14 - 04:11PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

Aww, I love nervous!Harry and flirty!GInny. And I love Mrs. Weasley in this story as well. A great fun read.



Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.08.07 - 12:40PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Even being the hero of the wizarding world doesn't change Harry from questioning himself and worring about girls and dates. He has finally become a typical teen. He went the full nine yards and then some with new clothes and fresh shave and dinner plans to impress his girl. At least he didn't have the entire family there to scrutinize him. It's cute watching him fidget. Great start to the story.



Reviewer: Wolfric Signed Date: 2008.08.05 - 04:36AM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Reviewer: M_And Signed Date: 2008.08.04 - 01:14PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Now that was pure unadulterated FLUFF! And I enjoyed every word of it. Well done. The characterizations were fabulaous, and I enjoyed the interplay between Harry and Ginny. I have a vague recollection of what it was like at that age, and you hit seemed to have hit it pretty much spot on. I look forward to reading your next chapter. - Mike



Reviewer: tenorspaz Signed Date: 2008.08.03 - 05:58PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

Awwwww! That is so sweet! You do great fluff!
I like nervous Harry and how this extraodinary boy was for once, being a normal kid going on a first date. As always, Ginny made him both calmer and more excited at the same time.
Looking forward to more!
~~Spazzy~~



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.08.02 - 07:02PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

some times its the girl u really llok out for becuase no matter what they have on they are always a knock out...poor harry but he is doing alright so far...kutgw



Reviewer: Dando Signed Date: 2008.08.02 - 05:58PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Like another reviewer, I tend to like most of what you like and this was no exception. I thought it was lovely. Love nervous, analytical Harry, very in character and Ginny too. I noticed a couple of grammatical errors. "....grow some bullucks" I think you mean "bollocks". Bollocks is slang for male genitalia. Bullock is a castrated male cow.....totally different ;) also ".....spare our or two",..hour . But hey, we all slip from time to time. LOL. I'm looking forward to reading more of this and Normalcy.



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2008.08.02 - 02:37PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Cute story.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: SunB Signed Date: 2008.08.02 - 02:30PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

That was really good.I really enjoyed reading it. Are you going to continue it? I hope you do.

Author's Response: Yeah...there will probably be another chapter to this. I'm focusing on my other story right now so i'm not sure when it'll be up



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2008.08.02 - 12:49PM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Absolutely delightfully romantic. Yay!

Author's Response: Thank you. I've never really written straight fluff before so i'm glad people are liking it lol



Reviewer: lecook4 Signed Date: 2008.08.02 - 10:53AM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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I tend to like everything you write. You use excellent imagery and you really bring it to life for the reader, even the simple moments. I look forward to reading the next chapter and I'm glad to hear your not dropping your other story. - Lecook4

Author's Response: Thank you and hopefully after I get out the next chapter of Normalcy I'll have more of this written too.



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2008.08.02 - 10:25AM Title: Chapter 1: Fidgeting

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Looks promising... I like how nervous Harry was but hope he doesn't focus on what Dean or Michael may or may not have done, just focus on Ginny :).

Author's Response: Thanks.




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