Reviews For Foundations
Reviewer: mysinger Signed Date: 2011.11.06 - 06:29PM Title: Going back
This was such a good story. You left us wanting more. Well done!
Reviewer: Bware0313 Signed Date: 2009.07.09 - 04:46PM Title: Going back
Haha!!!! Poor Ron!!! That was great.
Reviewer: FirePhoenix86 Signed Date: 2009.03.29 - 11:58PM Title: Going back
i like this, it's really sweet.
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.01.15 - 09:40AM Title: Going back
Very sweet--I really enjoyed this, especially how calm it was, and lacking in angst.
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.01.15 - 09:34AM Title: Laying Foundations
Love the closing lines of this chapter--very cute!
Reviewer: kit9216 Signed Date: 2008.10.26 - 10:52PM Title: Going back
Reviewer: Steven Carnell Signed Date: 2008.10.03 - 05:16AM Title: Going back
Reviewer: deejinator Signed Date: 2008.09.17 - 03:50AM Title: Going back
Congratulations on the Honourable Mention in the contest. I can see after reading this that it was well deserved.
Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2008.09.14 - 06:30PM Title: Going back
Judged for competition.
Reviewer: pippan121 Signed Date: 2008.09.14 - 08:44AM Title: Going back
This was fabulous. I love how Harry decides on a new career.
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.09.06 - 08:47AM Title: Going back
Naughty, naughty Harry…doing that to poor Ron. I think a better career might be to have him learn to be a locksmith. The return to school was great and not a little bit surprising. I almost wish that you’d continue this line to see what will happen. As for Draco…I think that I believe pigs can fly now. This was really a great story, and I very much enjoyed it. Thanks! Eric B.
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.09.06 - 08:46AM Title: Laying Foundations
He seems to be handling the shock quite well, but I was worried about Ginny for just a second. I was holding my breath during the meeting with the goblin, especially since Harry had to go in alone. I trust those little slime balls about as far as I can hurl my six-foot-six brother-in-law. It sounds as if the young couple are off to a great start and the romantic moments you included made it all the better. By the way, Molly was the perfect choice for that job. It will ease both Fred’s passing and the empty nest syndrome that will soon set in.
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.09.06 - 08:45AM Title: Making Breakfast
Oh ho…Harry has a talent in the kitchen, or at least we hope he does. It really wasn’t fair considering what Ginny did to him. Either that or he’s been hanging around Seamus too long. I loved the interaction between the two, and it was as well paced and appropriate as it was timely. Molly and Arthur’s reactions were just what I expected and it led into the discussion very well. I’m drawn in and looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2008.09.04 - 11:56AM Title: Going back
Good story. I found the kitchen scene and the last part about Harry hexing Ron then thinking of Obliviating him quite funny. Arthur was great in giving Harry advice. I'm glad Kingsley suggested the foundation for use of most of the war spoils. Overall, very good.
Reviewer: lilyevans_Jan30 Signed Date: 2008.09.04 - 09:33AM Title: Going back
Hehehe. I'm still laughing at the ending. While I may disagree just a bit with how quickly you pushed Harry and Ginny into bed, given the way they were still getting used to each other, I don't have a problem with them sleeping together before marriage in general, so I won't fault you for it much. Over all, I liked the way this story flowed and the way you slipped fun little on-liners in. The story was just lovely, and your writing style was very clear and easy to read. Good luck with the challenge.
Reviewer: M_And Signed Date: 2008.09.01 - 10:56AM Title: Going back
Obliviator indeed! Sounds to me like they both better plan on being curse breakers assigned to ancient ruins somewhere. :) lol. Very well written story. I really enjoyed it. Good luck with the challenge! - Mike
Reviewer: BrunetteGinny Signed Date: 2008.08.24 - 09:47AM Title: Going back
Reviewer: skeet500 Signed Date: 2008.08.19 - 11:19PM Title: Going back
again, pretty vague, but this chapter was definately a lot funnier than the others. i must say in my opinion it just wouldn't be right if ron didn't walk in. pretty cliche, i know, but so perfect.
Reviewer: skeet500 Signed Date: 2008.08.19 - 11:03PM Title: Laying Foundations
i thought a lot of this chapter was very vague. i would have liked a few more details about the harry potter foundation.
Reviewer: skeet500 Signed Date: 2008.08.19 - 10:49PM Title: Making Breakfast
i thought the whole part about ottery st. catchpole at the beginging was incredibly well written, but totally unneccessary. i think you could have found a better way to lead into the story.