Reviews For Harry Potter and the War Against Voldemort
Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2009.10.29 - 08:10PM Title: Wormtail's Betrayal I don't know what it is, but I've read two stories now that had Sirius downing a goblet of the truth serum. It takes only three drops to get the desired affect. I don't know what would happen if someone too more than that, but they wouldn't most likely be under the effect for hours, if they aren't killed by the amount. There is something about that one thing that always bugs me. I'm sure your story will be brilliant in its own way, but I can see now that this is not going to go any way I want to join in on. Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2009.10.29 - 08:07PM Title: Wormtail's Betrayal I don't know what it is, but I've read two stories now that had Sirius downing a goblet of the truth serum. It takes only three drops to get the desired affect. I don't know what would happen if someone too more than that, but they wouldn't most likely be under the effect for hours, if they aren't killed by the amount. There is something about that one thing that always bugs me. I'm sure your story will be brilliant in its own way, but I can see now that this is not going to go any way I want to join in on. Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.12.22 - 09:23PM Title: Wormtail's Betrayal “I know. I can’t even afford a place to live.” Sirius already had a decent inheritance from an uncle, so he really had no financial problems. But I suppose there's something to the story here. Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.12.18 - 04:52PM Title: Wormtail's Betrayal A great beginning to your story, should ne interesting. Reviewer: CmdrHawkes Signed Date: 2008.12.17 - 08:58PM Title: Wormtail's Betrayal Very nice begining - great twist on canon! Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2008.12.17 - 01:39PM Title: Wormtail's Betrayal Your use is of Veritaserum is confusing. I'm not sure when in the story Sirius gets the antidote, or overcomes the serum. Did I miss something? Reviewer: sinnerman Signed Date: 2008.12.16 - 02:07PM Title: Wormtail's Betrayal I love sirius story's...especially ones that don't have him Azkaban. Just one little question: At the start of this chapter you mentioned that Sirius was expectin to see Harry "the only hope for the wozarding world" dead like his parents. At that point, just how did Sirius know that. Did he already know the complete prophecy, or just the part that everyone else knew? Reviewer: NotACat Signed Date: 2008.12.16 - 10:52AM Title: Wormtail's Betrayal An interesting premise, one I've seen done before but a new approach is always worth exploring. I'm most intrigued to see where you're going to put them. Another issue is whether you're going to give Harry a mother-figure: one of my favourite AU settings has Harry growing up with a family and siblings (Remus and Sirius both married and other children acquired from various sources—those who know me have no need to ask which story this is ;-) which makes a huge difference in his approach to life. I also reckon Remus and Sirius deserve to be something more than just "Harry's guardians". | |||||||
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