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Reviewer: RoseSpell Signed
Date: 2012.06.14 - 05:42PM
Title: 13 Midnight Lane
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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed
Date: 2011.09.02 - 03:34AM
Title: 13 Midnight Lane
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Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed
Date: 2010.03.05 - 02:49PM
Title: 13 Midnight Lane
This is not a new story, but I'M new to SIYE, and I find this story quite wonderful. Normally there are chapter upon chapter of Harry and the Dursley's. This story has Sir NOT in Azkaban, but looking after Harry as it was meant to be.
We all know what the ending is supposed to be, but thanks for giving us another perspective on what COULD have been.
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed
Date: 2008.12.22 - 09:47PM
Title: 13 Midnight Lane
A few typos here and there, but I still like this retelling.
Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed
Date: 2008.12.18 - 05:20PM
Title: 13 Midnight Lane
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Reviewer: CmdrHawkes Signed
Date: 2008.12.17 - 09:10PM
Title: 13 Midnight Lane
Dang it! Forgot the rating.
Reviewer: CmdrHawkes Signed
Date: 2008.12.17 - 09:04PM
Title: 13 Midnight Lane
Awww! no growing up (as if 11 is an adult) stories. Oh well. Still a very good chapter.
It appears your going for a more "open" Albus, especially how he relates to Harry - no manipulations (so far) just honest concern for his well-being. Without all that "for the greater good" mantra getting in the way.
John
Author's Response: That was the idea. With Sirius around, Harry's legal guardian, and knowing everything it was not Albus' decision to keep anything from Harry. He has to accept whatever Sirius decides.
Reviewer: NotACat Signed
Date: 2008.12.17 - 01:54PM
Title: 13 Midnight Lane
I'm slightly disappointed that you chose to skip the intervening ten years and just plunge into a canon rewrite. I would have preferred to have more detail of his upbringing. Also, like I said before, I would prefer that you developed Sirius and Remus into more rounded characters than simply "Harry's uncles".
Having said which, this chapter does the job it's been given very competently, and I like your Harry...I expect I'll get to like the "uncles" when we see more of them.
/me picks up his bean-bag and heads off to the next chapter...
Author's Response: I think it would have been awfully tedious to cover those ten years. They really didn't have anything exciting happen. As for Sirius and Remus, you will definitely see a lot of them. Sirius in particular.
Reviewer: sinnerman Signed
Date: 2008.12.17 - 11:52AM
Title: 13 Midnight Lane
it would seem that you have this story plotted out, and that's GREAT. One thing I learnt from Abraxan was not to leave your readers waiting, or they might lose interest...a problem you don't seem to have!
Author's Response: I have some of it plotted out. So far I think I know how to deal with things through book 2, and I am currently working on book 3 and the overall plot. So hopefully I can keep things going pretty quickly.
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