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Reviewer: RoseSpell Signed Date: 2012.06.14 - 05:42PM Title: 13 Midnight Lane

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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2011.09.02 - 03:34AM Title: 13 Midnight Lane

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Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2010.03.05 - 02:49PM Title: 13 Midnight Lane

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This is not a new story, but I'M new to SIYE, and I find this story quite wonderful. Normally there are chapter upon chapter of Harry and the Dursley's. This story has Sir NOT in Azkaban, but looking after Harry as it was meant to be.

We all know what the ending is supposed to be, but thanks for giving us another perspective on what COULD have been.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.12.22 - 09:47PM Title: 13 Midnight Lane

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A few typos here and there, but I still like this retelling.



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.12.18 - 05:20PM Title: 13 Midnight Lane

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Reviewer: CmdrHawkes Signed Date: 2008.12.17 - 09:10PM Title: 13 Midnight Lane

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Dang it! Forgot the rating.



Reviewer: CmdrHawkes Signed Date: 2008.12.17 - 09:04PM Title: 13 Midnight Lane

Awww! no growing up (as if 11 is an adult) stories. Oh well. Still a very good chapter.
It appears your going for a more "open" Albus, especially how he relates to Harry - no manipulations (so far) just honest concern for his well-being. Without all that "for the greater good" mantra getting in the way.

John

Author's Response: That was the idea. With Sirius around, Harry's legal guardian, and knowing everything it was not Albus' decision to keep anything from Harry. He has to accept whatever Sirius decides.



Reviewer: NotACat Signed Date: 2008.12.17 - 01:54PM Title: 13 Midnight Lane

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I'm slightly disappointed that you chose to skip the intervening ten years and just plunge into a canon rewrite. I would have preferred to have more detail of his upbringing. Also, like I said before, I would prefer that you developed Sirius and Remus into more rounded characters than simply "Harry's uncles".

Having said which, this chapter does the job it's been given very competently, and I like your Harry...I expect I'll get to like the "uncles" when we see more of them.

/me picks up his bean-bag and heads off to the next chapter...

Author's Response: I think it would have been awfully tedious to cover those ten years. They really didn't have anything exciting happen. As for Sirius and Remus, you will definitely see a lot of them. Sirius in particular.



Reviewer: sinnerman Signed Date: 2008.12.17 - 11:52AM Title: 13 Midnight Lane

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it would seem that you have this story plotted out, and that's GREAT. One thing I learnt from Abraxan was not to leave your readers waiting, or they might lose interest...a problem you don't seem to have!

Author's Response: I have some of it plotted out. So far I think I know how to deal with things through book 2, and I am currently working on book 3 and the overall plot. So hopefully I can keep things going pretty quickly.




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