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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2016.10.06 - 04:18AM
Title: Chapter 4
I hope Molly remains as reasonable as she has been when she gets the news about their bond. The scene when Dudley flirted with the girl in the painting was hilarious. I had to grin. The scene when Ginny and Harry perform magic in front of the clueless Hermione and Ron was funny, too.
Wow, that's a surprise. The Potters are back. Well, the explanation of their disappearance and reappearance is a bit, not lame as you stated in your note, I'd say remarkable. Nevertheless, why not. After giving it a second thought, I liked the idea, partly because it happens so rarely.
However, it's just a thought, wouldn't there be, beside of happiness of course, also fear? Fear if his parents really are how he'd imagined them? Fear if they really love him (still or again), if he meets their expectations. After all, their reappearance is a kind of a shock for Harry. I think that happiness will defeat the fear as soon as Harry realizes that everything is good and reality.
The explosion of magic at the end was impressive. I wonder if the two of them will become more powerful now? Will they have a chance when they're in danger, even without the backup of the adults? We will see...
Oops, I just noticed that I'm reading the ffnet version of the story. I should switch to the Siye version to get a few more chapters.
Oh, and by the way, you mentioned that you're planning a rework of this story sometime in the future. I'd be honoured if the one or the other of my ramblings and silly thoughts could be of help for you. I really like this story.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2010.02.10 - 01:07PM
Title: Chapter 4
go Harry and Ginny!
an interesting twist to the story and I loved the sarcasm with Cherish - fluff and sarcasm are my weak points :)
got to agree with you about Cho. I've never liked her in the books and even less so in fanfics
Author's Response: well, glad you're liking it so far
yay, someone else who doesn't like Cho!
Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed
Date: 2009.02.20 - 10:24PM
Title: Chapter 4
EXCELLENT!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: starboy454 Signed
Date: 2009.01.18 - 05:50PM
Title: Chapter 4
No Review
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed
Date: 2009.01.18 - 06:36AM
Title: Chapter 4
First of all, I finished the other story or else I wouldn't get this one (might wanna put that in your summary)
and I loved that one so on to this one.
I don't mind that you brought in the Potters, the more the merrier. As long as you can handle the extra characters and do please use and develop them, I'd love that.
Will you explain in future chapter just which spell was used on Harry & Ginny and where they appeared, was that the other universe where the Potters were? Did the wards on Privet Drive fail due to the bond forming fully or because of the spell Harry was hit with.
Questions, questions, I hope you don't mind but you'll find that I love to puzzel out chapters and ask questions a lot. I like to form theories on how a story will go. Not on every chapter because time is not always available but....most of the time.
Until next time, take care. C
Author's Response: I think I did mention this was the sequel to the other story. Just assumed people would understand to read that one first. I will explain in later chaps and no I don't mind the questions. They keep me on my toes. This one I can answer now. Yes, the wards failed because the bond was complete making H/G adults.
Reviewer: Ron Obsessed Signed
Date: 2009.01.17 - 07:19PM
Title: Chapter 4
Very good story. I always enjoy the Harry/Ginny soul mates sharing a special bond kind of stories. Can't wait to see how their relationship develops.
I'll have to see what you do with James and Lily being back, I'm undecided to whether or not it's a good thing. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks. I've always liked the bond stories too. As far as James and Lily being back, they're not going to be playing a MAJOR role.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2009.01.16 - 08:50AM
Title: Chapter 4
im glad to see this twist becuase it fun to see harry meet new people and family at that....hope the dursleys have some of the treatment they had given harry...hope they are alright...kutgw
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so far. I was a bit worried that people wouldn't like the fact I brought Lily and James back. The Dursleys out of their hatred for all things magical will be a non-entity for a few chapters. It wouldn't be a Harry/Ginny story without Harry/Ginny. Course they're alright.
Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed
Date: 2009.01.15 - 11:28PM
Title: Chapter 4
Oh boy another great chapter and it sure seems that Petunia and Vernon have a great deal of explaining to do.
Looking forward to seeing what happens
Author's Response: Thanks. You know the Dursleys. Would they really bother to explain themselves to "freaks"?
Reviewer: phunt Signed
Date: 2009.01.15 - 10:48PM
Title: Chapter 4
I love the twists that you have included. The return of Lily and James...with a daughter. Insteresting...
The most dissappointing thing about it is that I have now read it and have to wait for more. Good work, though.
Author's Response: Glad you like the little twists. Some don't. Hopefully, the chapters will be validated quickly.
Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed
Date: 2009.01.15 - 07:27PM
Title: Chapter 4
Ah, Ron is stupid...and Hermione is NOT thinking!
They are at Hogwarts..at their school...therefore they should realize that they are able to do magic, and that is why Harry and Ginny are doing magic!!
Can't wait to see what Lily does to Petunia!
Author's Response: They're at school but during the summer so it actually does make a difference. Sorry that wasn't made any clearer.
As for Lily's revenge, well you'll have to wait and see.
Reviewer: Phx tears Signed
Date: 2009.01.15 - 06:04PM
Title: Chapter 4
..hmm. i..gosh I dunno what to say. Im really really not a fan of 'lily and james potter are really alive' because A. it doesn't make sense and B. it's just like..why don't you accept they're gone?
by A i mean - lily and james were hit by a killing curse and once you're hit you're dead. The house only exploded After the curse was cast at harry and the whole rebounding thing happened.
Dumbledore said they assumed the bodies had disintegrated but if they disintegrated why didn't most of the house disintegrate i.e. if something blows up, it doesn't disintegrate, it falls apart, blasted into different parts etc. ..anyways :P
keep at it. i might not like it but others might.
Author's Response: Sorry, you're having trouble enjoying the story. I always thought Harry had gone through enough heartache, he needed something else good, besides Ginny. Don't give up on me, you may end up liking the rest.
Reviewer: serious_blue Signed
Date: 2009.01.15 - 06:02PM
Title: Chapter 4
Awesome story, nice drawing together of several different threads I have seen in different stories.
Author's Response: I hope no one thinks I copied from those stories. Most of my ideas I had before reading them and I didn't want to change my story just because someone else did something similar. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: swannygirl Signed
Date: 2009.01.15 - 05:43PM
Title: Chapter 4
Finally! I had been waiting forever for this to be validated.
WOW!!! I had not expected that at all! I like that James and Lily are back and maybe Harry can have them back. I look forward to what everyone is going to have to say about the bond.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it.
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