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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.10.06 - 04:50AM Title: Chapter 5

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I was a bit confused that the Dursleys were needed when Ginny's and Harry's circumstances have been explained. And I would have liked to know whether Dumbledore has mentioned Voldemort when he explained the events in the Chamber. (He usually omits this information).
The explanation of the Life-Force-Union is simply brilliant (I've never hear of such a union before). I assume that it didn't matter what kind of spell has hit the two of them, right?

I wonder if the Potter's will also give a short version of their life in the other universe. Oops, when Cherish told the twins about her Hogwarts time and about Snape, I've noticed what it really meant that the Potters were in a parallel universe. It really means that (nearly) everything was the same, minus Harry, minus Tom Riddle, plus Cherish, right. I wonder if Cherish knew the Weasley siblings in the other universe. Apparently, she was in the same class as Ginny. Maybe one class below.

Ah, yes. Molly, as usual, is the one who needs the longest to understand the consequences of their bond, or better, she refuses to accept them, lol.
Many thanks for another brilliant chapter. I cannot give any literary reasons, but I've noticed that this story is a more fluent reading experience for me than the prequel.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.02.10 - 01:19PM Title: Chapter 5

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I really like this chapter
already Lily, James and Cherish are fitting into the story well

Author's Response: you may rethink that later on as I tend to drift from Lily and James anyway



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.01.21 - 04:27AM Title: Chapter 5

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I do hope Molly can get to terms with all this rather sooner than later.
This could turn out to be quite the school year with this bond and Moldyshorts on the loose and on the hunt.
Good luck :)

Author's Response: You'll see about Molly in the next chapter. I hope it ends up being as exciting as I'm thinking it will be.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 08:46PM Title: Chapter 5

life is always ahrd for harry and now with ginny helping its just getting a ltitel easyer and molly is going to need to get over her scuples....kutgw

Author's Response: Wow, I can't believe the response regarding Molly I've gotten. She's just being a typical mom. Don't worry, she'll get better in the next chapter.



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 05:03PM Title: Chapter 5

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Another great chapter, I hope that Molly will easy up on them soon, after all they are adults and she can't actually stop them... I just hope that Harry doesn't get too hurt by her stubbonness.

Author's Response: Molly is just being a typical mom. They're adults but still very young. Don't worry things work out in the next chapter.



Reviewer: Manxman1831 Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 02:53PM Title: Chapter 5

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Another great chapter. I like where you are going with this story, keep at it.

Author's Response: thanks much.



Reviewer: swannygirl Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 01:41PM Title: Chapter 5

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Great chapter! I'm glad that Ginny could help Harry get over the dream. I expected Molly to act out like that, but I am glad Lily was there to talk to her.

Poor Ron and Hermione always getting made fun of.

Author's Response: Molly is your typical everyday mom, Lily is a bit more open. Ron and Hermione always get made fun of but it's all in good fun.



Reviewer: Goodygurl Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 11:04AM Title: Chapter 5

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Really good chapter! Molly needs to get off her high horse and realize that they wont do anything they're not ready for. I can't wait for more! Update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: You know Moms, always worrying about things. She'll come around, though.



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 11:02AM Title: Chapter 5

I wonder what will happen when Ginny points out that she has no choice in the matter?

Nice chapter, can't wait for the fireworks

ja ne

Jim

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it.




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