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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2016.10.06 - 05:21AM
Title: Chapter 6
It certainly was quite a shock for Snivellus when he saw... Oh, I'm not sure if it was the bigger shock to see Lily alive, or to see James alive, lol. I wonder if Snape will switch allies again. With Lily alive, his sole reason to go to Dumbledore isn't there anymore, right.
The description of the more spicy scenes was quite the balance act, lol. I said before, I prefer your more realistic approach over a hypocritical description of their relationship. I loved the way the two of them discussed their special circumstances and how they found a mutual agreement about the further proceeding.
Ron's relapse into his old behaviour was somehow to be expected. I wonder if it was intentional that Cherish didn't join the four of them during their walk around the lake. I'd thought that they would integrate her.
I really enjoyed this chapter. Thank you!
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2010.02.10 - 01:32PM
Title: Chapter 6
very sweet chapter
I can kind of see where Molly and Ron are coming from in this chapter and guess they'll just have to get used to it
Author's Response: I wanted to tell their sides a bit but yeah, they just have to get used to the idea
Reviewer: AlinnyPotter Signed
Date: 2009.01.26 - 11:26PM
Title: Chapter 6
Ahhh, this was good! I just finished INNOCENCE LOST and I just got caught up! I cannot wait for the next chapter to be validated!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the journey. Hopefully it won't take long for the chapters to be validated.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2009.01.23 - 09:42PM
Title: Chapter 6
ron gets a bad rap but then again he is a git to have this happen and take ti the way he does...he need to think more and talk less....glad harry and ginny can sleep and enjoy some benifts....kutgw
Author's Response: Ron's always been a bit immature and it shows. Yeah, Harry and Ginny won't be going much further than that.
Reviewer: starboy454 Signed
Date: 2009.01.22 - 08:39PM
Title: Chapter 6
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Reviewer: swannygirl Signed
Date: 2009.01.22 - 10:01AM
Title: Chapter 6
That was a GREAT chapter! I really like the idea of Harry and Ginny having a 'temporary' wedding ceremony. I was thinking about ideas about what they would do for the coming up school year and all I could think of was hiding it. I don't think hiding the fac that they are closer would be very effective because it would get out.
I'm glad that Harry and Ginny and trying to make it easier for Molly, she's was a mom for a 13 year old girl and then over night her daughter is married. I'm sure Ron will come around he normally does. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I really didn't want them to have to sneak around to be together so I came across the idea of a celtic hand-fasting. Finally, someone understands what Molly was going through. :) Yes, Ron will eventually come around.
Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed
Date: 2009.01.22 - 09:55AM
Title: Chapter 6
*snicker* looks like you have Ron pegged accurately!! Like your using "Life Force Union" instead of soul bond, and I LOVE the idea of a hand fasting! :)
Author's Response: Glad you think so. I often struggle with keeping the characters true to canon. I was looking for something other than 'soul bond' since it's been used often even though that's basically what it is. I thought the hand-fasting was appropriate.
Reviewer: Goodygurl Signed
Date: 2009.01.21 - 11:21PM
Title: Chapter 6
That was a pretty good chapter! I'm confused about the hand-fasting(?)...you didn't explain what it was enough. But other than that the chapter was very good. I can't wait for more! Update soon!
Author's Response: I didn't want to give away details to the ceremony. You'll see H/G's ceremony in a couple chapters.
Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed
Date: 2009.01.21 - 10:53PM
Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, I am glad that Molly realize just how important it was for Harry and Ginny to be together., and made it easier for them. I am glad they choice to wait too and although Ginny talked about it to Ron I think it would be good to tell Molly they are waiting.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next, I am sure there will be some fireworks from Ron.
Author's Response: Don't worry they'll let Molly know. As for Ron, he's anti-social for a while but will come around, as usual.
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