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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.02.11 - 11:11AM Title: Chapter 17

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urgh, I really hate Tort
also, Dumbledore's got far too manupulative and sneaky - not just in this story but in the books as well. I've always thought that he hid the truth from Harry for far too long about various things
got to agree with you about no one wanting predictable in a story. if a story gets predictable it gets boring and readers lose interest

Author's Response: good, you were supposed to hate Tort Dumbledore was a manipulative old coot. I often wondered if he truly loved Harry as he claimed.



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.08.18 - 10:09PM Title: Chapter 17

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Man, she is meaner than the one in the book!

Author's Response: or more misguided, you choose. thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: Phil42 Signed Date: 2009.07.01 - 12:42PM Title: Chapter 17

Sorry, but I think that, with the Potter parents around, the whole poisoning situation and the Tort situation is rather ridiculous. Responible parents would have removed their children from a school like that a long time ago, and probably have left the country.

Author's Response: You could be right. You're entitled to that opinion. For the purposes of my story, this is how it goes. I'm no expert, this is only my second real story. Thanks anyway for reading and taking the time to give me your opinion, and believe me, I'll be taking it to heart and perhaps use it to better my next story.



Reviewer: MissWeasley Signed Date: 2009.04.09 - 07:14PM Title: Chapter 17

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WOW .
That was explosive !
'm really hating this professor - hope she goes soon :P
The attacks on Harry were a good twist and i'm really enjoying this !
Good luck & update soon (:
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Author's Response: In the middle of the next chapter now. I've hit a small snag and hope to have it worked out soon so I can post it. Glad you enjoyed that chapter. Getting her office demolished was the least of what she deserves.



Reviewer: tear_away Signed Date: 2009.04.07 - 11:29PM Title: Chapter 17

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what a bitch.... i hope to see some serious harm come her way and soon.

Author's Response: Yes, she is, isn't she. It'll take a little while but it'll happen. Have patience.



Reviewer: phunt Signed Date: 2009.04.04 - 12:15AM Title: Chapter 17

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This story started with so many twists that it took a bit for me to adjust, but I really enjoyed this last chapter. Tort is even more infuriating than Umbridge was. And I really like the way Harry and Ginny relate to each other, it just seems natural. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Glad you stuck it out so far. Tort was meant to be more infuriating. We'll be seeing the end of her soon. Glad you think my H/G interaction is natural. Sometimes I feel it's forced.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.04.03 - 07:22PM Title: Chapter 17

umbridge is going to wish she was never born....i think harry should have just done the world a favor and killed her then and now....kutgw

Author's Response: TORT will definitely wish it by the time the story's done. Harry's got too much love inside to outright kill.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.04.03 - 05:09PM Title: Chapter 17

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I think I have just lost my speach here.
That piece of filth called LeStrange, that was so discustingly disturbing to even imagine! Even worse than TortyFudge or FudgyTort.
Speeking of Tort.
That Torty Tarty Bitch! I can't believe that ....! Someone has to stop that ...... woman from doing this stuff. This is just ........ unbelievable!
*Feel free to fill in the blanks with your own choice of words* :D

Author's Response: I did put up a story warning of disturbing imagery. Thankfully Ginny's the type to keep her cool. Someone will be stopping her, it'll just take a while. BTW, are you calling me disturbing? You said the scene with Lestrange was too disturbing to imagine and since I did imagine it... LOL



Reviewer: fdn Signed Date: 2009.04.03 - 01:19AM Title: Chapter 17

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really good
but i have a question though why is it that harry and ginny don't do anything more drastic about Professor Tort. i mean i know that you don't want them to be dark or anything but seeing them getting tossed around and controlled gets sort of annoying at time, i mean why do they have to put up with this if harry and ginny are so powerful. it doesn't make sense to me.

Author's Response: If they did anything more serious, they'd be expelled or worse. They're quietly defying her with HEDGE and well, Harry did blow up her office. Hang in there, things will be coming to a head soon.



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2009.04.02 - 10:42PM Title: Chapter 17

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Another great chapter, I am so glad that Harry got Ginny out of there and am glad that she thought quickly and stopped Lestrange from forcing her to anything to him.

Oh man Tort is bad, I hope that she is deal with soon so that they can get back to their normal lives...

Author's Response: Of course Harry saves the day, he's Harry. And Ginny always struck me as being cool and collected in the face of adversity.



Reviewer: GinnySavesHarry1998 Signed Date: 2009.04.02 - 10:26PM Title: Chapter 17

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I HATE HER!!! It's actually a little hard to read because I hate her SO MUCH! It's like Order of the Phoenix all over again. X-)

Author's Response: That was my intention, to make you hate her. If you feel that strongly, then my goal was achieved. I'm happy.




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