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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.02.11 - 12:45PM Title: Chapter 23

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Ron and "broom maintenance" was absolutly hilarious
stands to reason that Harry and Ginny would have to be unusualy even in their animagus forms

Author's Response: you'd think Ron would have learned enough not to ask anymore wouldn't you? Harry will always be different, no getting around it and since he's bonded with Ginny and she's special in her own right...



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2009.07.22 - 12:53AM Title: Chapter 23

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Can't wait to see what they do to Tort next!!! Good for Sirius teaching Harry and Ginny to be animagus!!

Author's Response: thanks. i'll be starting the next chapter soon.



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2009.07.22 - 12:42AM Title: Chapter 23

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Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to leave a rating.



Reviewer: de88jr Signed Date: 2009.07.21 - 10:32PM Title: Chapter 23

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Another fabulous chapter! I love this series because it has action, intrigue (who is out to get Harry?), and above all, dead-on humor. I loved the scene at the table when Hermione was trying to lead the Ron-horse to water. Will he ever figure out that they are married and not only allowed to touch each other, but that it is a good thing? I always eagerly await your updates, and waiting for the next one will be no different. kutgw!

Author's Response: I find it ironic that you like it for the humor because I usually struggle doing that part. You know how thick Ron is. It's more like that they are married and WILL be touching each other. I've finished my other story's chapter so I'll be getting back to this one soon. If you don't like a lot of drama/angst, don't read Harry's Homecoming but would love your opinion there anyway.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.07.21 - 04:34PM Title: Chapter 23

well i see snape is still a pain in the butt and will countine to be...as for the transformation i can see ginny but not so much harry...harry i have more of a lion but thats me....kutgw right line wrong cat

Author's Response: Snape will be Snape. I debated with the cats. I took Harry's slight stature and quickness on a broom into account when I decided on the cheetah. Plus everyone's done lions or leopards, but not a cheetah and I wanted something different. Thanks.



Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2009.07.21 - 01:45PM Title: Chapter 23

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Good chapter. update soon I like were this is going with the pranks on Tort.

Author's Response: I've just finished a chapter on my other story so I'll be getting back to this one soon. The pranks will continue. Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2009.07.21 - 01:08PM Title: Chapter 23

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Author's Response: Thanks for reading and rating.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.07.21 - 12:45PM Title: Chapter 23

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Oh that was GOOOOOD!
UNCLE Cornelius? Oh my goodness. So once, a long time ago, A Tort did a Fudge? Thank god that that is passé.

Harry's deadpanned "Broom Maintenance" cracked me up and I'm glad that I wasn't drinking but I was eating which can be messy as well.

Sirius' warning.....mmmmm......wouldn't it be a fine coincedence should that happen around a Tortures Tort? Pity that Harry feels guilty about anything bad happening and I can imagine she'd taste horrible. *slaps palm for haven these terrible thoughts*

Until next time, take care. C


Author's Response: I loved writing this chapter so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm glad you weren't drinking either, I'd hate to be the cause of a computer loss due to liquid sprays. To be honest, not sure when exactly it will happen, but it will. As for tasting Tort, talk about indigestion! Thanks Collinda. Always look forward to your reviews.



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2009.07.21 - 10:43AM Title: Chapter 23

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Cheatah huh?

A bit spotty, what.


Nice chapter. I missed why Harry is allergic to Witch Hazel.

Will Hermie ever stop defending Snape (Git)?

Look forward to more

Ja ne

Jim

Author's Response: very funny. Harry's sensitivity was touched on back at Christmas. With the enhanced smell, something about the 'chemical makeup of the scent', if you will, bothers him since he hasn't had a lifetime of being around it. Much like some are allergic to flowers and others aren't. Ginny's been around it all her life so it doesn't bother her. Well, Snape DID put that tracking charm on Harry's watch the previous year. To her mind, it redeemed him, a little. More will be coming soon, I hope. Glad you're liking it.



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2009.07.21 - 09:41AM Title: Chapter 23

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Great chapter... Oh boy I would have loved to see the expression on Ron's face when he finally worked out what Harry's broom maintenance meant :).

Great prank on Tort :).

Looking forward to seeing how quickly the progress with the Animagus transformations.

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, the horror, the disgust. I can see it plainly. Tort will be getting more of the same type of stuff and then some. The transformations will go quickly since H/G can already control the ebb and flow of their magic.




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