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Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2010.01.16 - 01:05AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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THAT is a pretty wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Why thank you ;)



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.01.11 - 06:18PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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This was the BEST. I didn't think it could get any funnier until Harry thought this: "Harry held the little box out mutely, too terrified to open his mouth again in case some of whatever the hell it was just came out started spewing again like a lava fountain." And then his comment: "And … I admit it; I thought I might get to touch your breasts because, Godric, they are just so perfect."

But although I say it's funny I mean that as no insult, because it was also SO cute!

Bravo!



Reviewer: juice14 Signed Date: 2009.08.12 - 08:05AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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*sob* Swans mate for life... Wow very touching proposal!



Reviewer: NotACat Signed Date: 2009.02.04 - 05:35AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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Oh, that's just perfick.

Author's Response: Babbling ... but perfick ...



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2009.02.04 - 12:33AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.02.03 - 05:59PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

im sorry but some point in time they would ahve said somethign to each other even iof they have intrutions and all....but then again this is harry and ginny we are talking about.....kutgw in all u do.

Author's Response: Yep, it was only a matter of time ... a looooong time lol



Reviewer: Phoeness Signed Date: 2009.02.03 - 05:32PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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It’s a very cute chapter. In fact it’s brilliant ! Touching, real... So I was right when I said they would hide themselves from the familly !!
I love the comparison with the swans and the conversation Ginny and Harry have. The prosposal is great, I’ve never heard of one like this one, it’s perfect ! And it’s a very good idea to give Ginny’s point of view about it. I wonder how their first time will be, it must be something very special for them... Let see Neville’s wedding first ;) ! Bye !

Author's Response: I wrote Harry's proposal and then realised we absolutely *had* to see Ginny's reaction to it. She came through beautifully, didn't she? LOL



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.02.03 - 01:53PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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perfect. I've definatly just had a major sugar hit.

Author's Response: Go to the dentist! :P



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.02.03 - 08:43AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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Best. Proposal. Ever!!!
I love Ginny's take on it... and he had half a Voldemort.....

And thank you for letting them be each other's first!
Wonderful!

Author's Response: I confess - I love the half a Voldemort line. There are moments when I crack myself up. And of course they would be each other's firsts!



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.02.03 - 06:33AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

See my LJ and then you'll see. Or check hgfan1111's bio-page here on SIYE or Pooky's and then you'll see.
My favourite is the wedding pic I made *grin*
Now Ginny in a pale yellow dress is in the making! Haaah!

Author's Response: Ooooh I get it now - art! lolz Very cool.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.02.03 - 06:09AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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Oh my Goodness that was so ...*gliding to the floor dissolving to a huge puddle of goo* ... lovely, beautiful, delicious, wonderfully romantic. I could just see her in that dress and ....no stop, before I do a Harry and start babbling.
I loved how he spouted out all those silly little things about her and the silent vice versa from Ginny. Really quite silly but it made me sigh anyway. If only I had ...... nope not going there, I'm happy right now and we'll see what comes.
Now let's not get philosophical and just tell you that it is wonderful and I'll still look forward to Nev's wedding but you gave me a great new 'art' idea to work on for my LJ *grins happily* Thanx!

Until next time, take care.

Author's Response: YES! Another puddle of goo has been created! I have lost count of the numbers of puddles of goo this fic has generated. My beta melted into about 5 all on her own *grin*. I'm glad I could help with the 'art' ideas ... *shrugs, having no idea what you mena but happy to help anyway*



Reviewer: KMACKD Signed Date: 2009.02.03 - 04:53AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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So tell me was Geoge's little experiment in Ginny's apartment a nudge by George to get them together? I like the fact that Ginny is the one who is all into getting together like the swans, in other words shagging like the swans and Harry has to be coaxed into the idea.

You know, I think that Harry's over abundant dialog is the most I've seen Harry speak in any story. I like it and it's really written well. It's just like maybe Harry had one too many cups of coffe when he got up and just can't stop himself. I think Ginny is usually the one to run at the mouth.

I like that Ginny feels that Harry is the one person who makes her feel safe, makes he feel like she can say or do anything. She finally realizes that Harry is the one person that she fits with and who would be the perfect person to get together like the swans with, finally.

Excellent chapter. I'm going to hate to dee this end.

Author's Response: No, George's experiment was quite accidental lol. And yeah I think nerves made him run off at the mouth LOL.



Reviewer: Harrylovesginny Signed Date: 2009.02.03 - 04:47AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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Reviewer: tangle elfwand Signed Date: 2009.02.03 - 02:56AM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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YAY!!!! Getting engaged after one week, though? Oh well, I suppose they'd be avoiding all their feelings for months, and then the years before that. Actually, in that way, it took them far too long! But still, everyone married in their early twenties...

Still love it to pieces though :D

PS. Hope it's gotten cooler for you, today was almost bearable around here. Imagine, some places in the world it's acually SNOWING. Hehe

Author's Response: Well that's what I figured - it took them far too long so a week - what's that in the scheme of things! It's cooler but not cold enough yet. Roll on Saturday evening!



Reviewer: M_And Signed Date: 2009.02.02 - 11:51PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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She's his Lobster! (or swan - hey it's your fic after all). Sorry, couldn't resist. It's still one of my favorite lines from that show. Pheobe was such a hoot. That was a lovely piece of fluff. Rich and yet superisingly low cal (okay, so I'm a bit loopy tonight, I spent most of the day in a dark room conducting research). I got nothing really other than to say very well done. That was a thoroughly satisfying chapter. - Mike

Author's Response: I love that line too! She *is* his lobster/swan!



Reviewer: sagefemme Signed Date: 2009.02.02 - 11:47PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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YES!

That is dialogue worth of an episode of Gilmore Girls. I'm a sucker for fast running dialogue....especially when the rambling is an H/G proposal moment like none I've read before. This is being such a fun ride, thank you for writing it.

Author's Response: I have never seen Gilmore Girls but I'm glad you liked the proposal!



Reviewer: my3goldensnitches Signed Date: 2009.02.02 - 11:44PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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I LOVE this story! Not good for the insomia though, but hey, it did gave me something good to start reading when I wasn't sleeping and since I was already awake with no chance of catching any more zzzz's.....
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Well ... at least it wasn't bad enough to put you to sleep ... ROFLOL



Reviewer: psumathgirl Signed Date: 2009.02.02 - 10:06PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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So cute :) I absolutely love this story. Nicely done!!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: swimsocceg Signed Date: 2009.02.02 - 09:52PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

aaaaw


Author's Response: I know! *squees*



Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2009.02.02 - 09:50PM Title: I'll be there for you when the rain starts to pour

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Awwwwww....the payoff. Very sweet and nicely stupid ( you do know what I mean by that, don't you? Harry's babbling is endearingly wacky) and Ginny's distraction is entirely human and the overall effect is completely believable and real and touching.

Well done.

What's next? The wedding? BTW, have H/G even had a date yet?

Author's Response: I lurve Harry's babbling! Neville's wedding is next :D A date ... erm not as such lol. But I'm pretty sure they went out for Italian on Tuesday ... ;)




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