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Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2010.05.05 - 07:40AM Title: Grimmauld Place: Explanations

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first time reader, excellent! so many people have written very well about "after" the series. but few have captured how important the "little" things mean to the characters. well done.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This story is a mix of big things, little things, school, and action. I only hope that it works. It is actually a sequel to 'Grave Days' (though you don't have to read it). - N -



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.05.02 - 11:24PM Title: Grimmauld Place: Explanations

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Let's hope the shop picks up!

Author's Response: We'll see. (-; N



Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2010.05.02 - 09:54PM Title: Grimmauld Place: Explanations

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Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2010.05.02 - 09:05PM Title: Grimmauld Place: Explanations

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Great chapter. I'm glad they found some of the Muggleborns. I'd like to see Ginny's reaction to that newspaper article. I hope they solve this case soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Ginny's initial reaction was in the last chapter. Solve the case soon? But there's still at least ten chapters to go! N



Reviewer: Phx tears Signed Date: 2010.05.02 - 08:23PM Title: Grimmauld Place: Explanations

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Interesting thing you've come up with, it's very detailed :)

I hope Ginny does think the article is bollocks because an "annoyed Ginny because of a stupid article/Harry comforting her over it" isn't as funny as "Ginny taking the mickey out of harry over it".

Why have you written the joke shop as unsuccessful. I mean, Zonko's goes along fine right? Why shouldn't their store? Plus in hogwarts it was really popular and the things described in the books were really interesting. The 6th book even says that their store was the only busy one in diagon alley - it had kids inside. Not everyone was interested in the shields. It just seems unbelievable :P

Author's Response: Thanks. Ginny and Harry will get back together soon (and not before time). there will be more information about the Joke shop, too.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2010.05.02 - 03:23PM Title: Grimmauld Place: Explanations

i think its time ron gives up the armors and gose to goegoe and fixes the mess...kutgw

Author's Response: I think differently, as you'll see. N



Reviewer: Potterfan922 Signed Date: 2010.05.02 - 02:20PM Title: Grimmauld Place: Explanations

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Nice chapter! Good insight on Auror life. I love Ron in this chapter! Poor Harry and the Pansy issue... hopefully the other Weasley's will be ok with it!

Author's Response: Thanks, I think that I need to write more Ron - chapter 13, probably. Harry's woes won't last too long.. N



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.05.02 - 12:12PM Title: Grimmauld Place: Explanations

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very nice chapter
Ron provides the comic relief as always :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Ron's a very busy man. He has nothing to distract him. :)



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2010.05.02 - 12:09PM Title: Grimmauld Place: Explanations

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Great Chapter! It's good to see what's going on with Ron and Harry!

Author's Response: Thanks. Point of view will change again next chapter. N




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