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Reviewer: RedHeadGin Signed
Date: 2011.03.07 - 02:10AM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
Very nice chapter! Finally - Harry having the courage to tell her personally the 3 little words and at the place where they first met, and Ginny reciprocating it. Harry's so sweet arranging for their 1st date.
Ginny not wearing anything under her jumper :D Aside from Ginny's feistyness, I love her naughtiness and making Harry laugh w/ her antics. Their playful together - love it.
I respect Harry's will power, not pouncing on Ginny. They're both passionate, so .... for now just wet dreams - for both of them.
Author's Response: This particular chapter (from King’s Cross to the sweater) was one of those which was planned from the start of the story. Preventing Harry and ginny from having the conversation any sooner was difficult. I had to put dozens of obstacles in their way. The sweater joke was planned from chapter 5. As for the pouncing, well, that will happen with a considerable amount of Spontaneity. ;-) -N-
Reviewer: Birlan Signed
Date: 2010.06.14 - 01:06PM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
I enjoyed this.
I am also enjoying the stories you are posting about the Werewolf Auror on anther site--and particularly yours about Hermione's secret diary. I don't review over there so figured I should compliment you here.
Its interesting how Ginny gets it right this time--as opposed to the two earlier visits to Hogsmeade and Hogwarts where she was wrong-footed. Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thanks Bare and Moon are certainly not H/G stories and I know better than to post them here (because they don't meet the submission guidelines). Arguing that Bare takes place on the same day as First Sight wouldn't work. :-) The Secret Diary of Hermione Granger is my Anti-Dramione story (having recently discovered that Draco/Ginny fics exist (what? why? how?) I may have to write an antidote to those, too. As for this story, Ginny has had several weeks of correspondence since her earlier misfires, which weren't entirely her fault, anyway (I hope that I managed to convey that). Lots more H/G in the next few chapters.-N-
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed
Date: 2010.06.14 - 09:44AM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
I really liked this chapter. I thought their 'confession of love' extremely well done. Interesting that while Harry was thinking of their date, Ginny was sexually aroused. Just another of the many differences between men and women, they really are from Venus.
The scene with Ron and Hermione, especially with Ginny's imitations, had just the right amount of low key humor. Oh, and a very nice goodnight kiss, who wouldn't have pleasant dreams.
Author's Response: I’m not so sure that this is a man/woman thing, more a Ginny/Harry thing. Ginny is often described as passionate, so is Harry. But passion towards a girl is something which, even at (a very inexperienced) eighteen, I think that he’d have difficulty with. I’ve been criticised for making him uncertain around girls, but only once.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2010.06.14 - 04:59AM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
aww, very sweet
it's about time that there was some Harry/Ginny time :)
keep up the good work
Author's Response: I kept them apart as long as I could, but it was becoming a struggle.
N
Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed
Date: 2010.06.14 - 12:42AM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
It was nice to finally get some Harry and Ginny moments! Poor Harry coming home to Ron and Hermione making out on the sofa. I would want to sterilize it and warn the two to keep the amorous activities to the bedroom!
Author's Response: More Harry and Ginny (and Ron and Hermione) moments to follow. Bedroom? Do you think that those two have made it to the bedroom already?
Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed
Date: 2010.06.13 - 10:43PM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
so sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter. :]
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm trying to speed up my submissions.
Reviewer: destin4fl Signed
Date: 2010.06.13 - 10:29PM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
very good!
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: GoDons Signed
Date: 2010.06.13 - 09:34PM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
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Reviewer: Potterfan922 Signed
Date: 2010.06.13 - 09:09PM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
Good chapter! I hope you continue with more of the Christmas holidays! I need more reunion time!!!
Author's Response: There will be more than three Christmas chapters, I’m not 100% certain how many more yet.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2010.06.13 - 08:54PM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
molly is going to have to be ok soon enoght her daughter is old enoguht to make her own choices, and harry is responable....on top of which even kingsley knows not to cross molly but molly can not pull what she did...kutgw
Author's Response: Everything that the Aurors told Ron and Harry is true, they are unmarried young working men, and as such, at families come first.
Reviewer: Phx tears Signed
Date: 2010.06.13 - 08:17PM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
hahah oh my! I'm glad they're not jumping each other. It wouldn't make sense for Harry - a guy who has no experience with not only girls but physical touch - to be so forward. Good job.
Author's Response: I’m playing around with canon locations for important events. Kings cross looms large in Harry’s life. The first time he saw Ginny was at Kings Cross, so that had to be the place where he finally said those three little words. Jumping each other? Where could that happen?
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed
Date: 2010.06.13 - 08:16PM
Title: Christmas: Declaration
Oh, oh! We've got some formatting problems.
Loved the wise phrase!
Author's Response: This has happened to me before. The html code is correct and it looks right when I preview the story, but the version you see is centre justified. Very strange! I’ll try to fix it
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