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Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2011.04.30 - 10:28PM Title: Murder City

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Gosh, can you imagine how hard Ron's heart sank into the pit of his stomach and degree of heartache he experienced when heard the whole story from Remus. Remus has carried the largest burden of Harry's existence. I do feel sorry for him. Your excellent story skills are evident here.

Author's Response: Thanks again for your review! I've tried to make Remus a character which you can either a) dislike because of him keeping Harry's survival secret or b) feel sorry and pity for him because of the impossible situation he was put in. I'll let everyone make that choice :)



Reviewer: daisymom Signed Date: 2011.04.25 - 01:04AM Title: Murder City

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Yeah Harry's alive!!! *Doing happy dance here* This is such a fantastic read and I'm loving every minute of it! I can't wait for more...thanks for taking the time to write!!

Author's Response: Harry is alive and well :) Was there every any doubt? hehe I appreciate the thanks, they're always welcome. Thank you for reading!



Reviewer: RedHeadGin Signed Date: 2011.04.24 - 09:46AM Title: Murder City

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Awww, I want to hug Ron and Jackson, Ron for hearing the shocking news and for Jackson, being as stubborn as his dad, following his instincts, had started something magical.

Author's Response: He has started something magical :) Thanks!



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2011.04.23 - 01:22AM Title: Murder City

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yeah! updated! excellent stuff can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: borokat Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 03:32PM Title: Murder City

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Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 01:18PM Title: Murder City

Oops. I didn't realize you submitted 2 chapters and read the second one first. I wondered what Ron told Hermione about what he had learned and now I know and Harry's role in the whole thing. Hope the next update comes as quickly as these two.

Author's Response: I was wondering if that might confuse people...but I wanted to get these chapters out quickly, one after the other. The next chapter will probably be out late Sunday...maybe Monday morning depending on how long it takes to do final edits.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 12:48PM Title: Murder City

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Why is it such a complicated and bad thing for everybody to know Harry is alive? I think Jackson should shout back at Ginny for slapping him when it turns out he was right. Good story though.

Author's Response: I think the hesitancy in just telling everyone comes from the fact that they can't all just rush on over and take him back...so why tell everyone until R/Hr and sure of what to expect. Harry may have a life, a family and that may or may not effect the others. And Jackson won't shout at Ginny...but I will tell you he won't be happy with 1 person when he finds out. But that's probably 2 chapters from now :) So hang on!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 09:44AM Title: Murder City

Well Ron is right about a lot to things but then again Remus and mcg and snape will soon have a Ginny potter on there case and thats never a good thing...kutgw



Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 12:29AM Title: Murder City

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Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2011.04.21 - 11:12PM Title: Murder City

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Oh man! I hope you do get the next chapter up quickly. I am itching for more. Poor Harry / Ginny / Jackson. It's going to be an interesting meeting. What a secret to be kept!

Author's Response: You'll get it tomorrow morning :) I'm finishing up the final edits and it should be posted before I head off to work. And it is quite a secret.




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