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Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2011.05.01 - 11:34AM Title: See The Light

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Wonderful chapter. Building the suspense in perfect tempo. You had me guessing just how Hermione and Ron were going to explain themselves. So glad they don't have to have that conversation but now there is a more important conversation to come. Will be waiting for Ron to reveal Jackson. Did I say this was a great chapter!

Author's Response: I think they have a general overall feeling that pressing too much into the heavy territory might scare or push Harry away from them. And I hate to disappoint you....but Ron won't be the one to spill the beans about Jackson. It definitely will be coming soon...but it won't be him :) Thanks again!



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2011.04.27 - 06:29PM Title: See The Light

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HOLY#$%@! i was not prepared for that! you are an amazing author who has woven a perfect spell that has knocked me on my rear. the possibilities are endless, of course harry has made a new life for himself but what about the life he left? can he really ignore ginny and do we want him too? so many unanswered questions. love your story and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'll take that vehement exclamation as a compliment :) And you'll find out the answers to pretty much all your questions coming up. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.04.25 - 04:25PM Title: See The Light

Oh, wow! At least Harry didn't know anything this whole time. That makes me feel slightly bettter. I feel bad for Remus, but to let Ginny think Harry was dead and Jackson grow up without a Dad.... That sucks! I hope Harry doesn't pull a runner on them. My bet is that Sophie is his daughter. I would guess that Harry still doesn't know about Jackson. And as to how the spells failed, I'm guessing there is still some sort of mystery going on here.

Author's Response: Yeah...I definitely put Remus in a precarious and impossible situation. I made him choose between the thing that he's always wanted--his own family--and going Harry's wishes to save another family. I'll assure you that Harry doesn't run...although he's not going to come running back home so easy either. And the reason the spells failed is a mystery...although I'm not sure we'll every understand exactly why they did. Just that they did and there are things that are going to happen as a result. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: GinnyP7 Signed Date: 2011.04.25 - 12:46AM Title: See The Light

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Oh my! "I know that, Hermione" has to be the best line of the story so far. I like where you're taking this story and am looking forward to finding out how you tie all the elements together. How quickly can you update?

Author's Response: I'm glad that line is really catching people. I wrote it in so many different ways, so I'm glad the stand alone worked the best :) And the update will come later today. I was running late and my computer was being a butthead this morning before I left for work, so it'll have to wait until after I get home. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2011.04.24 - 06:45PM Title: See The Light

PS: Came back to acknowledge a truly wonderful moment of storytelling in terms of the build up to it -- “I know that, Hermione.”

...yeah, simple...but it's about context.

Author's Response: Thanks for returning to tell me this :) Very much appreciated. I rewrote that line and that section probably 5 or 6 times before I decided on just having it a simple stand alone sentence. Thanks again!



Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2011.04.24 - 09:53AM Title: See The Light

I have to add my guess - Harry is divorced and Sophie is his daughter.

Author's Response: I'm loving these guesses from readers! You'll all find out next chapter :)



Reviewer: RedHeadGin Signed Date: 2011.04.24 - 09:23AM Title: See The Light

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An intriguing, interesting story! When Harry said "Hermione" - so glad he remembered his friends. I'm waiting for that chapter when Harry meets Jackson & Ginny. Sophie - Harry's pet dog? If she's his GF, whew, more angst ahead.

Author's Response: Thanks! And the Harry meeting Jackson and Ginny chapter will be coming. There will probably be two chapters in between before that happens though. And I'm loving the guesses about who Sophie is :) You shall find out in the next chapter!



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2011.04.23 - 04:56PM Title: See The Light

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Wow. This is quite a complicated story...and I am impressed, as usual, with how well you're weaving the threads together.

An extremely satisfying chapter!

Thank you.

Author's Response: Things are gradually starting to clear up...but there's always a bit of mystery ahead. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Pilargirl Signed Date: 2011.04.23 - 02:59PM Title: See The Light

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I can't belive this! I started reading this about 40 minutes ago and I have been dreading to reach this chapter since I started...I can't believe there's no more to read! You have to update REALLY SOOn...This story is outstanding ;D

Author's Response: It's looking like the update will come tomorrow night or Monday morning. So never fear! Glad you've liked it so far and thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.04.23 - 08:59AM Title: See The Light

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Wow! Powerfull chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2011.04.23 - 12:39AM Title: See The Light

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I loved the reveal in the office! It is a 9 because Ron didn't say, "lift."

Author's Response: I didn't even think of that! I wasn't Brit-picking at all because they're in the U.S. right now. But I'll have to change that :) Thanks!



Reviewer: sockless Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 11:18PM Title: See The Light

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AHHHHHHHHHHHHRG! oh heavens. must. know. what. happens!

Author's Response: I know what happens...:) But never fear, the next installment isn't far away. I promise.



Reviewer: tloulee Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 05:03PM Title: See The Light

I just found this story....can't wait for more...I've been sucked in =)

Author's Response: Strap in for the ride! Thanks!



Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 04:14PM Title: See The Light

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Thank you!!!! Great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope we don't have to wait too long. I'm with some other readers regarding Sophie - I don't think she's a daughter or partner. But you never know! I'm so glad he remembers. It'll make it all a little easier, especially as it's going to be hard enough anyway. I cannot wait to see Ginny's reaction!

Author's Response: You shouldn't have to wait long ( I know I've said that before)...I have the whole weekend to work on it and I'm about halfway done and it's the part of the story I've had laid out in my head forever. So....it should just pour out. We will find out who/what Sophie is next chapter :). I think making a story where he doesn't remember at all would be so much more difficult. So it was much easier to make his regaining of memories coincide with the events of his rediscovery by Jackson/Remus/Ron etc. And Ginny's reaction won't be for another chapter...but we'll get there.Thanks again!



Reviewer: borokat Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 03:32PM Title: See The Light

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Reviewer: r3in9 Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 01:36PM Title: See The Light

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Nice job, you made me cry! I'm gonna make my own story why harry remembered them: maybe that was the time jackson and anna were in NY, that harry was so close to where jackson is, that the connection made him remember.
Others think Sophie is a dog, could be, yeah. I might think she's a daughter that her mother passed away or she could be an orphan and, Elizabeth is a sister-in-law?
If harry isn't married, it's either he had married but died :) or it's either he's seeing ginny in his dream and knows someone is waiting. there! i made my own story. LOL.
True, true. So many surprises! Excited for the next chapter!


Author's Response: Making people cry is my aim :) Sorry. I love it when people give me their ideas about what's happening. It makes it even sweeter when they find out if they've been right or wrong later on.I'm going to be evil and I'm not going to tell you anything about who/what Sophie is or isn't...but I will tell you that Elizabeth really is just a fellow professor and a friend... Thanks!



Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 12:40PM Title: See The Light

I didn't want this chapter to end. There were so many surprises. The fact that Remus knew Harry had survived. It sounds like Harry is the one who planned the whole thing. When Harry said I know Hermione I almost jumped out of my chair. The beginning was written beautifully with Hermione pausing to let Ron speak and get his thoughts together. Also when you had them hold each others hand as they approached the university building I felt you really captured their characters. I was glad you had the drink spilled on Ron and not a drinking problem, very clever way to bring up a past drinking problem.

Author's Response: Harry is the one who planned things--letting his noble streak override most everything else, I'm afraid. I'm glad the line "I know, Hermione," was as effective as I'd hoped. I was actually going to end the chapter there and leave you all hanging...but even I'm not that evil, I think... And I had thought of actually making Ron fall off the wagon with his drinking again. I had planned it out that way. But I then decided I wanted to show how much he's grown from that. And plus, it was easier for Hermione to believe him when he was sober, I think. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: sidnandragin Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 12:39PM Title: See The Light

I too feel like Sophie is a dog, looks like Sirius.. or bird..
I was starting to lose it and then I read harder and realized that you wrote Ron and Hermione so well that i was like GREAT! she understands my man Ron!

Author's Response: You'll find out exactly who Sophie is or isn't in the next chapter :) And thanks for the compliments on the R/Hr interactions. I love writing them, but it can sometimes be tricky to get them right. Thanks!



Reviewer: Miss Weasely Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 11:39AM Title: See The Light

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U kept your promise, Harry's back:) Just hope the h/g angle starts soon now. Btw, why do I have this feeling that Sophie is not who Ron thinks she is! You haven't really been conventional in this story, so I am assuming you will not take the old cliched route of having someone in Harry's life just to add more romantic conflict to the story. There is a lot of tension already, so an OC character with Harry would seem kinda forced. Anyway, that's my assumption. Will be following the story to see how you take this forward.

Author's Response: Yep...Harry was always there. It was just a matter of setting things up so I could drop him into the story. That H/G may take a few more chapters to start. The next chapter will focus on the three catching up, piecing together the whole story and we'll find out exactly who Sophie is :) Thanks again!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.04.22 - 11:28AM Title: See The Light

Well that went a lot better then I thought it would have...then again its a good thing Ginny is not here or the shit really would fly....kutgw




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