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Reviewer: wwwednesday Signed Date: 2011.08.21 - 12:37AM Title: Scattered

When are you going to update!!!!???? All your loyal fans have been waiting and waiting. Please, please throw us a bone/new chapter soon.


Author's Response: I can finally promise that the chapter will be posted by Sunday afternoon. It's written...I'm just going through and editing :)



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2011.07.29 - 05:39PM Title: Scattered

Am surprised that Maria and Steve wouldn't have told him about the visit from the young Brit who looks almost like him when he was back there a couple of weekends earlier.

PS: you write Sophie so adorably...I suspect that might be one of your favorite parts.

Author's Response: Steve may have mentioned in passing that a few students asked about him...but that was it on his part. And I think it's safe to say that the meeting affected Maria more than let on and she's still processing instead of mentioning :) And I do like writing Sophie. Although I was worried how readers would take to her...she's always been a part of the story in my head :)



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2011.06.22 - 09:38PM Title: Scattered

Had to re-read this chapter of your brilliant story. What a cusp we're on: all sorts of things can come out before too long.

May the words flow from you with great ease over the next few months.

Thank you.

Author's Response: Oh yes, we've got all sorts of goodies coming up. But the words haven't been coming as easily as I'd hoped. I've had a rough few weeks, writing and in real life, so it'll be another week or so before the next installment is out. But we're creeping closer to the eventual meetings :)



Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2011.06.21 - 09:59PM Title: Scattered

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Ron and Hermione must have given the reveal of Harry some serious thought. Jackson definitely needs to understand Harry's decision to remove the Horcurx and sacrifice his contact with the Weasleys to give himself some dignity while he coped with his own health crisis. After the initial shock, Jackson might begin to think of how heroic Harry was. I am proud of Remus. Imagine Remus' misery, watching Jackson's and Ginny's life without Harry but knowing he was Harry's ONLY hope to do this under his terms. Having old unfamilar memories come back wouldn't necessarily encourage Harry to to jump right back to England. Yes Harry had friends but he also had enemies; even the head of wizarding government never helped Harry. Harry would never endanger Sofie's life if he thought there was a hint of danger towards himself or his daughter. There would have to be more than just friends to pull Harry back and I think you won't see Harry return until he learns about Jackson. And then, Harry will suffer deeply for his decisions. He won't forgive himself. Ron will then question if he had made the right decision to expose Harry. Looking forward to Jackson's and Sofie's introduction to each other's family. And of course Ginny's reaction to the newer harry and family.


Author's Response: Oh, yes. Both Ron and Hermione and myself :) have given a lot of thought into who/when Jackson should be revealed to Harry. And I think we'll find that Jackson--while he has his anger and his overwhelming feelings--may be a bit more forgiving and understanding of Harry's reasonings and willing to just want to start and grow a relationship with his dad. And while I know you sympathize with Remus--remember--his memories of his involvement faded over time and right up until Jackson went looking for Harry, Remus had forgotten completely. So he didn't suffer all that much as time went on with his decision. And you've got my reason's for Harry's return not being immediate spot on--there's just too much that could go wrong. Harry's guilt will grow and it'll be a confusing guilt....Thanks again for reading!



Reviewer: Pretend Jane Signed Date: 2011.06.19 - 06:16PM Title: Scattered

So far I really like where this story is going. I'm glad you gave Harry a daughter. It's really believable because most people that age have at least one kid unless they can't have them or choose not to have them. I can't imagine Harry not wanting a kid.

Harry seems really intriguing. I think how he's changed is the most interesting because it's so unexpected. I'm curious what it will be like when this changed Harry meets Ginny again who's only memories are of the old Harry. I can't wait to see when Harry finds out about his son. That was the only thing that bugged me, that Ron and Hermione didn't tell Harry about Jackson.

I can understand why Harry hasn't gone back to England yet. He's putting his daughter first, which is what he should do. I think his priorities will and would have changed if he had known about Jackson.

Author's Response: Even though the way Sophie 'came about' isn't how I think Harry would have ever envisioned having children, you're right, she's amazingly important to him and he couldn't imagine not having her in his life. And while the old Harry is still there, the way it mixes with Evan is going to be interesting, not only when it comes to Harry/Ginny relationships, but in the story overall. Thanks!



Reviewer: serious_blue Signed Date: 2011.06.08 - 12:19PM Title: Scattered

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I have to say I have loved both Normalcy and this story. You have a great way of drawing out the characters and I have enjoyed all of this story. I can't wait for the next chapter as I envision quite the reunion. Wonder how you are going to handle the Jackson/Harry issue and the subsequent reunion with Ginny and her reactions. Keep it up and don't let the ignorant reviews get to you.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you've enjoyed both stories so far. I've tried to put a lot into them and the way I present the characters, so It's very reassuring to hear your kind words. And other reviews don't get me down or deter me from writing. If I quit now, I'd have this plot sitting in my head, driving me crazy forever ;)



Reviewer: Firestorm2004 Signed Date: 2011.06.07 - 09:28PM Title: Scattered

Well, after reading the chapter again, and reading a lot of the reviews and their responses, I have to apologize. My last review wasn't very long, or really good.

I really like what you've done with the story, and although I don't care for certain elements, well... the best written stories always have parts you wish were different. It's what makes you keep coming back - you want to see them resolved.

I have to agree with you and other readers, I believe what you had Harry do was right with his character as JKR portrayed him. He would give everything up, sacrifice everything so his friends wouldn't be burdened with him if he managed to survive, but wasn't completely there anymore. He would see that as a defeat, more than a victory, and would do anything to stop it from happening.

I can't say I'm happy for Remus' actions, but I understand why he did what he did. I noticed, almost no one has said it, but Lupin really didn't have a choice in the matter. He was almost forced into the vow, and once the vow took hold, and he knew Harry's condition, I believe it was more humane for him to let the Weasley's, Ginny and Jackson especially, believe what Harry had wanted them to believe. It probably would've been much harder on them to care for Harry when he remembered nothing. I know some are going to say he might have remembered sooner, but there also was a good chance he would never have. It was one of those choices where there was no good action, for both would hurt others - especially the ones they cared for.

I think the reveal, the way you did it, was absolutely necessary that way. It was the only way I think Jackson, and Ginny especially, would've accepted it, and for them to learn of Remus' part. He had to tell, or there would always be some doubt.

Readers complaining about Harry not returning, or trying to contact anyone when he regained his memory, are ... kind of ignorant, I feel, not to put them down or anything. You said so in the chapter when Ron and Hermione see him again, he believed them to not be completely true until he saw the two of them appear in front of him out of thin air. After living a completely muggle life for 17 years, suddenly getting memories of a totally different world would make you question your own sanity until you received proof that the memories were real.

And, while I wish he would have asked about Ginny, I can understand why he didn't. To him, it's too tender of a subject. Going off of your review responses, it seems he still loves her, and for him to hear anything about her, after hearing she had a family, would just be pouring salt and lemon juice on the wound.

Good chapter, though!

Author's Response: I have to say I really enjoy your review. While everyone may not agree with what I'm doing or how I'm approaching it, I'm glad to see you've understood my reasoning. So thanks :) You've hit a lot of the points in my thought process that I wish others could see. Thanks again!



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2011.06.07 - 07:05PM Title: Scattered

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(doing the happy dance) outstanding chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully you'll keep getting to do that dance as we go along :)



Reviewer: virgie2x2 Signed Date: 2011.06.07 - 04:27AM Title: Scattered

Hey , just wanted to say that I've thought about my very last comment (from about the second I posted it, I get extreme reviewers remorse) and hope you don't take anything I say harshly. Usually I re-read my posts and try and soften them with funny comments and such but was in a hurry. I have a 3 month old and I was rushing. I tend to only have time in the middle of the night so I finally got a chance to say... I do love this story and get where you and Harry are coming from. Even though I may not see it the exactly same way and I may comment again if i get irked, it is still an awesome story. I seem to have this crazy need to defend Ginny, so bare with me here. I know you have it all worked out and really could feel his sadness in the chapter, my crazy H/G heart just wanted another "how's Gin" for the poor girls sake. I have the patience of a 2 yr old when it comes so a good story and I'm sure you'll get there and I'll love it.

Author's Response: I get an initial cranky reaction...but I don't ever take anything really personally here. So don't worry ;) I'm hoping you'll stick with it and enjoy where we're going from here. Thanks again!



Reviewer: redheadedfervor Signed Date: 2011.06.06 - 03:13AM Title: Scattered

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First of all I would like to say that I'm really, really enjoying this story. So many times there are these great fanfic story concepts that never seem to live up to their ultimate potential, and your's is different and I love the arcs that have been created. I can't wait for the next chapter. Everyone is being so hard on the decision that Harry made to keep the "horcrux" bit a secret. But honestly I think the way you have explained his thought process behind it all is very much something that canon Harry would do, or at least consider given the situation you've put him in. I don't know if he would have actually gone through with it, but I think it would have been a battle that raged within him. Also I like the way that you aren't having him jump on the Ginny train quite so suddenly after he's regained his memory. He was never very loquacious with Ron and Hermione about his feelings toward Ginny, their relationship was always sort of something that they shared very intimately together. So I like the direction it seems to be heading in. Once again, I love your story and I am anxiously awaiting the next update! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your awesome compliments. They always help with the ego boost :) And I'm glad you and others are seeing where I'm trying to go in explaining the reasoning behind Harry's decisions. Harry as we know him is flawed in that he tries to protect and keep those he loves from harm--and in doing so (in this case) may have done the opposite. Thanks again!



Reviewer: de88jr Signed Date: 2011.06.06 - 01:27AM Title: Scattered

Wow, we sure are a feisty and vocal fandom aren't we? I just wanted to say that while I know we seem to have let loose on our feelings about this chapter (and Harry, amongst others), I hope you remember that it is rooted in a love of Harry and Ginny as a couple (if we weren't so passionate about them, none of us would be on this site would we), and while we may get snippy about what is happening right now, you have once again ignited a fire, some good and some not-so-good, in all of us. In my opinion, by creating a story that has triggered this very passionate dialogue, you have done your job as a writer. You did the same thing when you wrote 'Normalcy' and it turned out beautifully. Please bear with us and our desire to see our favorite couple behave as if this love of theirs is truly as important and consuming as we all feel it should be, and we'll promise to trust that you'll get them (and us) to a happily ever after in one piece.

Maybe we should also have a 24 hour 'cooling off period' before we're allowed to review? LOL Thanks and looking forward to the happily ever after. :)

Author's Response: Yes, this chapter has certainly gotten quite the response. And while my very initial reaction to some comments is to take offence and get cranky...I do take my "cooling off period" and take some time to take the whole comment in. And I usually end up seeing things exactly as you've put them. If this story was getting zero reviews and no reaction, I'd be worried. But since it's actually drawing all different sorts of comments and such emotional reactions...I'm rather proud of that. Thanks again!



Reviewer: redandraven Signed Date: 2011.06.05 - 05:30PM Title: Scattered

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I've been reading for a while and anxiously awaiting updates - but I'm sorry I've never gotten around to commenting! I noticed a lot of your reviewers don't seem to agree with you, but I wanted to chime in that I love this fic. The idea of Harry turning into an American Muggle photographer, of all things, is quite fun. It took me a while to digest the idea that Harry did this on purpose, but the more I thought about it, to me it would have . . . defeated the purpose of sacraficing himself to save everyone else if he would have been a burden later. Harry always wanted to fix everything for the people he loved, and if they had to suffer the consequenses later by nursing him back to health it would have lessened what he accomplished. At least, that is how I see Harry's reasoning. And some people thought he was cruel to not ask about Ginny more, but I don't think that means he hasn't thought about her a lot. He just doesn't want to ask her own brother how much he had devestated the life of the woman he loved and left behind. Not a subject I would want to bring up in detail either. Oh, and about Harry not coming to England to see them all: the mental picture I had of that made me laugh really hard. How is a muggle supposed to find the magical world? I could just see him staring at the houses on Grimmauld Place, looking for #13 - or walking in circles in Ottery St. Catchpole when the muggle-repelling wards of the Burrow made him forget where he was going - or standing outside of the Leaky trying to convincea Wizard walking in that he used to be Harry Potter. "No, I know he's dead! But I'm not! I just lost my lightning bolt scar, I swear - please tell the Weasleys where I am!" Anyway, keep up the good work here.

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm under the same idea that this is supposed to be a different and perhaps even fun story in that respect. While I understand some reader's dislike of some of the story so far...this is ultimately my chance at writing something different than the norm. And I like your mental picture of Harry trying to find and gain entrance to the magical world in England. Def. the comment I needed to make me laugh :) Thanks again!



Reviewer: RedHeadGin Signed Date: 2011.06.05 - 02:47PM Title: Scattered

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I honestly feel disappointed on the revelations in this chapter:

First, Harry has regained his memories for sometime (months). Although he have his family in the States, wouldn't he be curious of what happened to his friends? He's been w/ them thru thick and thin, it matters that he should know what happened to them coz they've shared so much life changing moments together - the Weasleys, Hermione, etc.

Second, Harry has shown so little faith in his friends, by thinking he'll be a burden to them, in case something really bad happened to him (getting crippled for life). He's 18, made a mistake by thinking so, but not contacting them after regaining his memory....

Third, Harry, when told about Ginny's life, having her own family, is just "stoic/ cold". Not excited to know more about her, no burning desire to contact her, whatsoever. It's like, yeah, she's my past - the end. Got to move on, raise my daughter. So I'm doubting, like others if this is really an H/G.

Fourth, I'm mad how Ron/Hermione, handled the big reveal. Why not talk first to Ginny, to prepare her on how to tell Jackson in private. They're grown up, but doesn't have the sensibility nor the sensitivity on breaking such a heartbreaking news to mother and son.

Fifth - You mentioned

"I just think back to DH when Harry chose not to stop and say goodbye to Ginny in the grounds of Hogwarts or seek out Ron and Hermione before he went into the Forbidden Forest to meet his doom. That rationalization may not help...but in my mind Harry's not being an ass...he's just trying to wrap his head around all this and do the best he can."

The reason why he didn't stop when he saw Ginny was because he felt he might not have the strength to pursue what is right - sacrificing himself - in case Ginny will stop him in his track. Same case w/ Ron/Hermione. Both would stubbornly stop him or go w/ him.


Author's Response: The only comment I'll make is that Harry may not be telling them everything right now and I'll repeat that this is def. H/G and Harry certainly has not forgotten about Ginny or stopped being curious about her just because he hasn't asked Ron and Hermione a million questions. And I don't see Harry's reluctance about going back as him being an ass. Part of the reason that he won't go back directly right now is def. his life in the states...but also because he doesn't want to throw everyone else's life into chaos. To me that's not cold or asinine. I'm going to continue on the track I've planned...and I can't guarantee that it'll satisfy everyone. Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.06.05 - 04:52AM Title: Scattered

I just took the time to read through the previous reviews for this chapter, and it made me realize I left a few things out that I wanted to say.

I am sure you have your reasons, but I was very put out with Harry for not seeming to show a real interest in Ginny.

Okay, realizing it's quite a bit so I'm just going to list it. Do not feel obligated to reply to each of these comments, or any of them if you don't wish to:

1. I'm rather shocked that Ron was able to keep from flying off the handle with his old friend as he did with Remus. His best friend CHOSE to leave, and granted Harry didn't know, but there was a baby! I believe the old Ron from JKR would have had a thing or two to say about this, and not in a light manner.

2. While I can see WHY you placed everyone in the room together for the beg reveal, I must say that I'm a little surprised that Ginny wasn't approached first and privately, for that matter. Not only might she have had a better idea of how to tell her son, she is bound to have tons of feelings about this, but now it seems the time she should have been allowed to think and feel her way through the mess is postponed for her son. Of course that is expected since she is an excellent mother, but it would have been nice if she had had that initial reaction for herself.

3. I also must say that I as well find it hard to see how H/G will reconcile after this whole mess. I know you've said that he was eighteen at the time that he made the decision, and I see your point from the DH when he basically walked alone to his doom, but it really kind of kills the H/G factor a little. And while I can deal with his decision from long ago, and while I can see how Ginny might have been able to forgive him, it is just plain mind boggling to know that he remembers her and didn't want to find her again.

4. Yes, yes, I know; he has his daughter and parental figures in the states, but hello, they are his family, and I would think that if they really loved him they would be excited for him to remember and learn about his past. Finding his past doesn't have to mean giving up everything and everyone you have now. Come on, Harry...

5. Okay, I'm sure that a few minutes ago I had much more roiling around in my brain that I wanted to comment on, but this seems to be getting a bit long, and I don't really reamember it all anyway. I stick by my earlier comments, that this really is an excellent story...just remember that we all want to be able to love Harry at the end of this, and right now, it's not going so hot for him.

Author's Response: I think I'll address your points in the same manner and hopefully give my reasoning :) 1. I find in my mind that Ron has grown up quite a bit since he was a teen. It's not the same fly off the handle, or off the cuff sort of Ron we might have had in the books...but he's really learned to reign in those more uncontrolled reactions. Believe me...he doesn't feel the same about Remus as he once did. 2. Everyone was in the room because I needed to get Remus there to be forced to lend his side of the story to make sure everyone would believe him. It was a situation I struggled with in how I was going to present it and to have Remus forced to explain was what I came up with. Nothing else felt right and everything else just prolonged the inevitable. 3. It's supposed to make the H/G a bit tough to fathom...but hopefully show how strong that love is. And I wouldn't say that he hasn't wanted to find her or hasn't tried.... 4. It's not about them not being excited...but they don't know about the magical world. How does Harry explain how he ended up in that park without trying to explain the magical world. 5. Thanks again and I'm hoping that you're willing to stick with Harry.



Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2011.06.05 - 04:24AM Title: Scattered

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Wow...

First I'll say that I was extremely excited to see this update. I first started reading it just a couple of months ago, and I've been checking, hoping, nearly longing for an update since then. I love this story. It's so unique.

Second, I am glad to see the story is moving forward some. I was worried it would be several more chapters before the truth was revealed to Ginny and Jackson. I didn't like at first what you'd done with Harry's character. It just seems so unlike him to want to stay hidden from these people that he loves, but I'm beginning to warm up to it. Can't say I would have done it the same way, but then I'm not the writer, am I? :)

I like how this chapter unfolded. I saw a little more of the old Harry here, and the big reveal to the rest of the family was nicely done. The one thing I'm not sure about is not getting more of Ginny's reaction after the news, after the message on the cell. But....I'm sure we'll get more on it later. It really is a fantastic story, and I absolutely love what you've done with Ron and Jackson's characters, who they've grown into. Keep up the good work, and don't make us wait too long for the next update. I implore you!



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.06.04 - 10:53PM Title: Scattered

Whoa! Heavy chapter. I'm glad Harry decided to let them tell the family. Poor Ginny must feel devastated and betrayed that he didn't come for her. And Jackson. I can see why he would be upset with Remus, but turning from his mother, not sure of the motivation there. I'm also not quite sure how much of the whole story everyone knows, ie. the loss of memory, magic, Sophie, etc. Great job.

Author's Response: Ginny's certainly feeling a lot of things right now and it'll complicate and make future situations all the more interesting. And Jackson is simply confused and overwhelmed and it wasn't so much turning from Ginny...but needed to get away from everyone. Thanks!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.06.04 - 08:07AM Title: Scattered

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Worth the wait. I thought Jackson`s reaction was spectacular.

Author's Response: Thanks :)



Reviewer: virgie2x2 Signed Date: 2011.06.04 - 01:58AM Title: Scattered

Well guess that theory goes out the window. Maybe the problem here is that he just seems so indifferent about ginny right now and she was so destroyed by his death and so sure he would never leave her. It seems off balance and sad. Sure, he chose to leave when he was young but he also chose not to come back and tried to just move on. if he had just bothered to check on her he might have known he had a son. anyhooo it was mostly ron and hermione who mad me mad here. Ive got 3 kids and would be more than a little mad to have the choice of how to tell my child his father was alive taken away from me. I think most parents would be a little more than pissed at them.

Author's Response: He may seem indifferent about Ginny...but believe me...he's not. He's just not sharing everything with Ron and Hermione. And I understand about people not agreeing with the way that Ron and Hermione chose to reveal that Harry was alive. It was something that I struggled with for a while on how to do...but the key was that in order to get Ginny to perhaps believe...I needed to get Remus involved to confess and he wasn't going to do it of his own accord. He was forced to in this situation.



Reviewer: de88jr Signed Date: 2011.06.03 - 10:40PM Title: Scattered

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Umm, yeah, if Ginny doesn't kick Harry in the balls or bat bogey him when she sees him, then I will be disappointed in her. He CHOSE to leave her? Thanks for loving her. I have read your previous responses about Harry's state of mind regarding Ginny, but so far he is only coming off as selfish, callous and a total ass. I hope he and Ginny get after Remus for his decisions. I'm glad Jackson hit him... he knew everything and kept it all hidden. Both Harry and Ginny had a right to know what was going on and then make decisions on their own. Remus took that away. Anyway, I know you have said in reviews that this is a H/G story, but I really dont see how Harry and his choices can be redeemed at this point, and having Ginny forgive and forget... doubtful. I dont think Harry could possibly explain, justify, grovel, or beg his way out of this one. I agree with the previous reviewer... I've had enough of 'poor Harry, he's been through so much'... whatever. Ginny and Jackson deserved a hell of a lot better. As always, you write amazing stories, but I doubt even you can save Harry this time.

Author's Response: Well...I'm not sure she'll have THOSE reactions :) but there will come a time when she confronts those feelings (and him). And while I understand people's disappointment in Harry's decision...I think I've looked it in the realization that Harry was 18 when he made these decision. He was young and scared and as Harry does...he was thinking about how best to minimize the burden on others. I just think back to DH when Harry chose not to stop and say goodbye to Ginny in the grounds of Hogwarts or seek out Ron and Hermione before he went into the Forbidden Forest to meet his doom. That rationalization may not help...but in my mind Harry's not being an ass...he's just trying to wrap his head around all this and do the best he can. And I don't think he's every asked anyone to feel sorry for him...he's just asked Ron and Hermione to understand the thought process he's going through. The choice he made was the single most difficult thing he'll ever have to do and as we'll see...there hasn't been a moment since he's remembered that he hasn't let the regret drift into his mind...Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: virgie2x2 Signed Date: 2011.06.03 - 05:28PM Title: Scattered

I think i may have to be another on that waits till this is finished to read any farther. The last couple chapters had me irked at Harry and just feeling sad for Ginny and Jackson. This is a case of the choices you make matter and effect others in drastic ways, not just you. Harry ruined a couple lives by leaving and I know I'm supposed to be all sympathetic because he had a hard time but he chose to be alone and guess what.... thinking your loved one is dead and gone can be pretty damn painful too. I just think Harry, If he ever really loved Ginny , would fight to be with her once he remembered or act a little more like he cared. The only thing I can come up with is that he doesn't remember loving her at all, maybe he just thinks they dated of she was a fling or something. His reaction (or non reaction) to info on her is just odd and when Ginny says " the only thing that would have kept him from me is death" well that was just sad and how do you ever get around that feeling, knowing it was a lie and you voice it out loud to everyone and they're gonna be like, well actually .....he has this whole other life that he seems to be really happy with and would have stayed in had we not found him sooooo. There are some stories that make me want H/g not to get back together .. I mean you spend half your life pinning for someone who gave it all away and really seems indifferent. Once again, I am hoping he doesn't remember what they had cause that seems to really be the only excuse. Sorry I just hate a week Ginny who lets harry get away with crap in the name of .. I'm Harry ,I've suffered and it's not even him half the time that bugs me but the people around them who are like ..come on now he's Harry just let it go. Ahhh sorry, I came her to say that after reading again It is not even Harry as much as Ron and Hermione who drove me bonkers in this chap (can you believe that one). They really should have pulled Ginny and Jackson aside and told them first. This effects them more than anyone and to just sit everyone down and tell them all together and not give Ginny any options for how to tell her own child is a little careless. She's like "why is my son here" that's crazy!!!!!! I was like gooo Jackson, I would have beat the crap out of all of them. Ok so believe it or not I like the story and if it was bad i would just move on and not even bother, but it is good and made me leave this way to long review. Fear of the unknown and a major dislike of pinny sappy doormat Ginny lead me here. First review i've left in a very long time...your prob like.. well Gee thanks. But I did like it just hope there are good reasons behind it all and ron n hermione get a little talking to.

Author's Response: Harry remembers exactly what he had with Ginny. He knows he loves her and that leaving her was the single most difficult thing he's ever had to do. I know that makes it worse to think about the decision and Harry as a result...but I think we've got to remember that Harry was 18 years old when he started his life down this path. Now at 36, he sees the world a bit differently...and we'll find out exactly how he feels about Ginny as we go. And I don't plan on showing a weak Ginny. Confused and conflicted at first with her feelings about whether to be angry at him...and those feelings of love that are still there after all this time. And I actually welcome your review. I like any reaction I can get from readers...good or bad or in between. Thanks for reading!




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