Reviews For Restless Heart Syndrome
Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2011.11.20 - 04:06PM Title: The Last One... Hi - I can't review over at LiveJournal but I wanted to thank you for the new chapter. To describe Ginny as lost just seemed like the right word. Teddy was wonderful, your writing expressed a great relationship between the two. I am hoping the next chapter is the big one. Can't wait. Reviewer: Ciscochic Signed Date: 2011.11.15 - 06:36AM Title: The Last One... This is an amazing story! What the heck was Harry thinking? I really hope you're able to update soon. It sounds like Ginny decided to not make the trip? I hope she pays him a visit soon, along with Jackson. That will be an interesting meeting! Reviewer: Firestorm2004 Signed Date: 2011.10.20 - 12:16PM Title: The Last One... I love your story, and I'm sorry you are feeling the need to move. I will be still reading it on livejournal, but I may not be able to leave comments for you there. For some reason, the site doesn't want to work completely with my computer. Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.10.17 - 12:56PM Title: The Last One... Please keep updating here. I have just read through your reviews and you certainly generate a lot of comment. It is a wonderfully original story and the characters are your own developments. I may or may not like them but they are "interesting" and I am desperate to see how you get it all to play out. I am not too sure if I am too old to find your Live Journal page! Reviewer: Alifromnm Signed Date: 2011.10.17 - 11:07AM Title: The Last One... Really nice chapter. I have so enjoyed this story. Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2011.10.16 - 10:59PM Title: The Last One... awesome simply awesome! the anticipation of harry and ginny meeting again and when harry meets jackson! simply awesome. Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2011.10.16 - 04:30PM Title: The Last One... It was so nice to see that you had posted another chapter. I like that you have Jackson want to talk to Anne. It may have been a bit too expected to have him compare his feelings with Ginny. I also like the way you are handling the meetings with Harry and his wizard friends and family. You included Tonks which was nice and leads me to hope that Remus will be included. The reunion with Mrs. Weasley would be another one of the emotional ones so it was good to separate this from Ginny's. The cliffhanger is whether Ginny will come at all. I hope that will be resolved in the next chapter. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2011.10.14 - 04:31PM Title: The Last One... Harry is going in to the unknow, but then again they all are. Ginny and Jackson need to meet on an off time and just have a weekend or week to work out all that has happen with out the help and the rest including Ron and hermione....kutgw Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2011.10.14 - 12:33PM Title: The Last One... Good emotions in the chapter. I felt extremely frustrated with Ginny's family, especially Ron, Hermione, and Molly. She's been through a lot. Pretty much abandoned. He hasn't made an effort to contact her, for whatever reason, and to me it's not surprising she's not embracing his return to life with open arms. And I certainly don't blame her for not wanting to face him with a son for the first time in front of everyone. Harry sounds like he still has a ways to go to reconcile his two lives. He's made some decisions and now he's going to have to live with the consequences. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Well done. Reviewer: Pilargirl Signed Date: 2011.10.14 - 11:19AM Title: The Last One... I just came in from school, sick as can be... Reviewer: r3in9 Signed Date: 2011.10.13 - 06:19PM Title: The Last One... oh and BTW, I love the Harry/Sophie's little scene on the kitchen. Sophie's really cute on how you write about her. I'm still excited to see how the story goes when Harry found out about Jackson. I think I like Jackson's character more than Harry on this story. Reviewer: tloulee Signed Date: 2011.10.13 - 06:02PM Title: The Last One... Can't wait for more....absolutely love this story..... Reviewer: r3in9 Signed Date: 2011.10.13 - 06:01PM Title: The Last One... Reading with most of the reviews, I have to agree most of them. There seems to be a lot of missing from Harry's POV. I don't remember Harry thinking about Ginny, especially when all the Weasley females came except with Fleur (which is acceptable with Molly's explanation) but Harry doesn't seem to notice Ginny is missing or even asked being the only Weasley female missing. IMO, you made the readers assume that Harry still love Ginny even though I don't see any hints that he's still have these feelings or even care about her. I think his focus is on the Weasleys even though it seems obviously he knows that they've forgiven him, but there's no hint of worrying about how Ginny's reaction alone. I would have thought that Harry would think of Ginny for this chapter even just for a little. Reviewer: dseay Signed Date: 2011.10.13 - 04:12PM Title: The Last One... Must say what a wonderful chapter but now we have to wait and see if Ginny will show up. This story is absolutely wonderful and please don't make us wait too long for an update. I know that is cruel to ask of you with real life and all but honestly, your writing style and the story are just so well done that it is difficult to wait. Reviewer: Pilargirl Signed Date: 2011.10.13 - 10:15AM Title: The Last One... I just came in from school, sick as can be... Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2011.10.13 - 08:05AM Title: The Last One... Odd things going on. I look forward to reading more and finding out if things i don't understand make sense later. Reviewer: Miss Weasely Signed Date: 2011.10.13 - 07:10AM Title: The Last One...
Reviewer: Green Eyes Signed Date: 2011.10.13 - 06:09AM Title: The Last One... Just because I find one or more characters in a scene or in a chapter to be acting in an annoying fashion does not mean I donβt like this story. (Perfectly fine people can be annoying in real life all of the time.) I do like it and I look forward to the next chapter. Reviewer: virgie2x2 Signed Date: 2011.10.13 - 04:21AM Title: The Last One... I read this chapter and took a break before I left this because i didn't want to review straight off my emotions. That and well I was frankly a little afraid too, for fear of being called an Idiot and uptight (by other reviewers) for not just falling down and loving every second of this fic. And I do generally love it, there is just something off that just ...irks me. I liked this chapter and like the story or I would not waist my time here. But there are certain subjects I take more seriously and certain stories that I have higher expectations for and when the writing is good and the story has such potential to be great I tend to review differently. I would never propose to tell you haw to write but there is something off with Harry's point of view in this story. In a chapter that was mostly from his side of things it is a little strange that Ginny was never mentioned, not even when everyone showed up at his house. I didn't need him to go on for paragraphs and paragraphs about it but a glance behind someone or just a sentence showing he cared might have been enough. And I don't buy it when people say they just assume he is having thoughts and missing her even though you don't write about it. This is your story right and you are a writer and I can make tons of assumptions about whats going on in his head or with others in this story but only you know what your vision is here and what direction this is going to take, for all I know he has decided girls are just not his thing and has no idea how to tell Ginny so he is just avoiding thinking about her at all. Plausible, but probably not where this is going. I guess whats lacking here is ANY emotional thoughts about the woman he loved and too many about everyone else. And when Ron went to find Jackson I was liking him a little better but him and Hermione in this chap were back to their holier-than-thou selves. Being someones friend and losing years with them is soooooo different than being the love of someones life and the mother of their child and suffering through the loss and pain of it all alone. They had each other and safely and happiness in a secure relationship where they raised their kid together, they may have missed him but it is in no way the same. And to think someone loves you beyond anything and would never leave you and to find out the did by choice has to hurt, no mater the circumstance. And to expect her to just get with the program and have a Happy Christmas with the crew and to not get why she is a tad stand offish, is a little nuts. It's like they think they are in this odd 4 way relationship or something with the amount of input they (not so gently) give. | |||||||
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