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Reviewer: sockless Signed Date: 2013.03.12 - 11:26AM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

I'm dying here. Patiently dying.... but I'd prefer a quck death if its all the same to you. =)



Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2013.02.24 - 10:22PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

Me again. I can't review at Livejournal and I don't want to spoil anything for other readers if you post the other storyline here. Just wanted to say thanks and glad you are still writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for heading over and reading it! I'm not going to be posting that one here. It just has to do with Harry (and the Ginny story just her), and since this is a H/G site--I'm not sure it fits. But thanks for reading and I should get the next chapter of RHS up this week. I'm finished writing and have someone looking at it for me :)



Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2013.02.16 - 02:48PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

Thanks! Harry's point of view will be a very interesting addition to the plot. I'll check out your livejournal.



Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2013.02.15 - 10:46AM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

Any idea when we may expect the next chapter? I really can't wait to hear what happens next. Great story.

Author's Response: Tentatively I'm looking at posting the next chapter next week. I know I've said that before, but for the longest time I've been stuck in the same spot with writers block. That seems to be past me for now, hopefully ;) And I'm actually going to be posting my first installment of Harry's side of this story (from the battle and when he was first found and taken to the hospital) this weekend on my Livejournal. So if you're interested in that, it should be up a little sooner.



Reviewer: AccioEye31713 Signed Date: 2012.11.16 - 09:46PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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Excellent story thus far. Looking forward to the next installment.



Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2012.09.15 - 04:40PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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I really hope this isn't the end. I see it has been some time since you have update.. over a year.

Author's Response: It is def. not the end. And this chapter was just put up a week ago. I should be updating in a few weeks again. Thanks!



Reviewer: tloulee Signed Date: 2012.09.14 - 03:09PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

Great chapter...I was wondering how the meet up would go...

Author's Response: Thanks! This meeting was something I'd worried about getting right, but I'm glad people are enjoying it :)



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2012.09.10 - 09:51PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

Wow! What an emotional chapter. I would love to see Ginny's take on all of this. Can't wait to see the reaction to Sophie and from Sophie. It will be interesting to see. I'm looking forward to seeing how a grown-up Harry and Ginny relate to one another and deal with issues.

Author's Response: We'll actually see a bit more Sophie interaction in the next chapter and probably in the chapter after that the 1st real "adult" talk between Harry and Ginny one on one about how they're feeling. Thanks!



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2012.09.09 - 03:00PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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You've handled both "Coming Clean" chapters' interactions so well: the realistic emotional tones with which the reunions have unfolded. After reading way too much mediocre fanfiction, it's truly a treat to read something this good.

I for one really look forward to where you take us in the H/G/J sorting out of feelings....where they each go deeper into their feeling states, into the realities of the loss they each feel.

...and am indeed curious how the wildcard catalyst of Sophie...who only exists because of Harry's decision to leave the Wizarding world (as does Alex)...plays out in the dynamics of the three main characters.

Thank you



Author's Response: Thank you for you for your review and kind words--it always means a lot. And the dynamics of Sophie and Alex being there will both play out and be discussed before we get to the end. Thanks!



Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2012.09.09 - 09:31AM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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Incredible chapter. I loved the way you presented the story from each of the character's viewpoints. Ginny's indifference towards Harry has me a bit confused but I hope you explain that in future chapters. Now I need to go back and read the last few chapters again they are all so good. Hope we see the next one soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! As far as Ginny's indifference it's mostly due to the fact that she's still trying to sort through her emotions and the conflicting things going through her head. So I think in her mind that she thinks it's better just to play in neutral--and that might border on indifference.



Reviewer: sockless Signed Date: 2012.09.09 - 02:13AM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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Everything that is right and perfect in the world. I can not wait to see where you take us.

Author's Response: Thanks :)



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2012.09.09 - 12:25AM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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Awesome chapter well worth the wait.

Author's Response: I'm glad it was worth the wait! (Although I'm sorry there was one :) Thanks again!



Reviewer: ravenclaw_girl101 Signed Date: 2012.09.08 - 11:11PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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It was beautiful! I mean, there was lots of tension there, but still brilliant. I can't wait to see how Jackson and Sophie interact :) Keep up the great work :)

Author's Response: Thanks! And we'll be seeing in the next chapter how Jackson and Sophie meet and interact.



Reviewer: Bee_Black Signed Date: 2012.09.08 - 09:12PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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The best story ever for a long time. Loved the chapter and can't wait for more.
Xoxo

Author's Response: Wow, that's very high praise considering there are some great stories on this site! Thanks!



Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2012.09.08 - 12:25PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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Living up to your pen name again. Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Always :) Thanks again!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.09.08 - 10:16AM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

Well its nice to see how well the opener went for Jackson and Harry and Ginny....but soon the heavy stuff will begin and that is not going to be fun at alll...kutgw

Author's Response: Yes, we still have a lot to wade through and we've got to have some knock down, drag out moments before we get to the happy ending :) Thanks again!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.09.08 - 09:56AM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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There were more people crying during this chapter than just Harry and Jackson. Pass the hanky.

Author's Response: You should know by now to keep one on hand when reading :) Thanks again!



Reviewer: Clearly Signed Date: 2012.09.08 - 08:07AM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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Well worth the wait. Such a lovely chapter and a very well written reunion between Harry and his son. Just the right amount of emotion without being over the top. The hug was a lovely touch, I love how grown up Jackson is (reminiscent of Harry himself) yet there is still the reminder that he is only 17. Hopefully Harry and Ginny will be able to come together and become closer, but obviously there's a lot of resentment there, which I know myself can be hard to let go. Interested in seeing Jacksons reaction to meeting his sister for the first time. All in all, very good! Look forward to the next installment!

Author's Response: Thank you for hanging in there and sticking with the story--I know it can be frustrating not getting updates :) I'm glad you enjoyed the reunions, it really is something I wanted and needed to get right and that put some pressure on me. And you're right, Jackson and Harry will be a bit easier to figure out than Ginny/Harry. But we'll get there eventually... Thanks!



Reviewer: pmv Signed Date: 2012.09.08 - 06:38AM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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So happy to see this! It was excellent. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! It's always much appreciated. Thank you!



Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2012.09.07 - 10:02PM Title: Chapter 15: Coming Clean II

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Beautifully written. Jackson crying into Harry's shoulder did it for me. The whole reunion was perfect. Now to see what's going to happen between Harry and Ginny. Can't wait.

Author's Response: That moment of the 'hug' and Jackson tearing up was something I'd wanted to get to for the longest time! :) I'm glad people are enjoying this chapter--I was quite anxious to see how people took the reunion, seeing as we were taking quite a long time to build up to it. Thanks again!




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