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Reviews For Beside You In Time

Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2009.12.20 - 10:38PM Title: Everything is Back Where it Belongs...

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Reviewer: retardedrockstar Signed Date: 2009.12.20 - 02:22PM Title: Everything is Back Where it Belongs...

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Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2009.12.20 - 10:42AM Title: Everything is Back Where it Belongs...

I lijke this alot but does Harry know the Weasleys or the Longbottoms



Reviewer: mwinter Signed Date: 2009.12.20 - 12:22AM Title: Everything is Back Where it Belongs...

Great Story wish you would have had him bring back with him some colored eye contacts. Buy muggle makeup to conceal his scar, a muggle hair coloring kit, and a saloon cut or let it grow long. Would do better the the potion every hour on the hour for the last 10 years. Not to mention that it was noted in canon that some potions taken over a period of time are addictive and cause problems. Espicially since it sounds like they raised him in the muggle world.

Author's Response: polyjuice potion. if pseudo-moody can do it, i don\'t see why harry can\'t. :P



Reviewer: omega13b Signed Date: 2009.12.19 - 11:40PM Title: Everything is Back Where it Belongs...

I can help out with making sure things sound logical in the story as well as bounce ideas off of.



Reviewer: Lord Dreadnault Signed Date: 2009.12.19 - 10:27PM Title: Everything is Back Where it Belongs...

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Well done. I look forward to future chapters.



Reviewer: Linden Signed Date: 2009.12.08 - 10:29PM Title: Places Parallel, I Know It's You...

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What an interesting story line! I really liked your Sirius' intro and am looking forward to how you blend the original story with your own. Well done, wonderful start.
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Reviewer: omega13b Signed Date: 2009.12.03 - 04:23AM Title: Places Parallel, I Know It's You...

Good start. The premise of Harry and Ginny coming back in time and raise the younger Harry was some idea I had for rather odd time travel story that has a few timelines in it that I don't know if I will ever get around to writing it. There is one think that you may want to take into a count in this story. Harry was, to put it mildly, deprived other kids took for granted. If he came back in time to give his younger self a better childhood, I think he may be tempted to spoil his younger self (possibly not even be aware of it himself) and may need help from others to remember not to spoil his younger self rotten. Its one thing I had to consider when forming the plot for the odd time travel story I may or may not write. Anyways, keep up the good work!



Reviewer: jediprankster Signed Date: 2009.11.29 - 07:16PM Title: Places Parallel, I Know It's You...

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I love time-travel stories. Especially those with a unique take on things. I think this one qualifies. I am eager to see how things go from here.



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2009.11.29 - 01:25PM Title: Places Parallel, I Know It's You...

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Nice start. Probably a good idea with Hagrid. I can't see Dumbledore no trying harder to have his way. I truly believe that Dumbledore thinks that only his opinion is right or valid. Great beginning, looking forward to more.



Reviewer: Valandar Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 09:43PM Title: Places Parallel, I Know It's You...

I have one thing to say...

THANK YOU for not making Dumbledore a manipulative bastitch like happens too often in fics like this! :D



Reviewer: GinnyPotter7 Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 01:17PM Title: Places Parallel, I Know It's You...

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Awesome! I love time-travel stories and yours is fantastic so far! I love the beginning. Usually they have them travel back to first year or fourth year (which is one that I'm working on) but I like yours where they go back all the way to the beginning. Very nice! I'm looking forward to more. :)



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 12:08PM Title: Places Parallel, I Know It's You...

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Very interesting beginning, looking forward to more!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2009.11.27 - 09:53PM Title: Places Parallel, I Know It's You...

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Interesting & quite well-written so far. Creative use of wand-lore, it would seem. :-}

Seems that there could be many opportunities for significant confusion, especially if the family in which Harry is an infant became acquainted with a certain magical family that lives near Ottery St. Catchpole (and I'm not referring to the Lovegoods).

Oh -- speaking of complications: you indicate (unless I got pretty confused, which happens from time to time) that Ginny is sufficiently gravid as to show. I wonder how long she has before she's delivered of their (first?) child....

Should be an interesting ride. :-)

Author's Response: Quite astute. :P Oddly enough, I have actually thought ahead that far, and as much as it pains me to say it... all will make itself known in due time! :D Thanks for the review!




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